Tales of Athebia RP

pickachu553 · Post by **pickachu553** » Sat Nov 29, 2008 8:36 pm

Now you can sign up here:viewtopic.php?t=3671
Help here:viewtopic.php?t=3494
And play here. Please actually write and stay within the game. No going off and doing something like eating pizza and calling a mass murderer.
I'll start us off!

Falon Templer woke up with a shock to the smell of burning wood. He opened his eyes to see his village on fire. "Dear Gods, what happened?" he shouted. He took his sword and ran to the front door to find the door had been barged with burning wood. He unsheathed his sword and cut the wood. He was slowly breathing deeper and deeper until he started to choke, at which point he had to get out.

"Dammit, how do I get outta here!?" He took his sword and improvised a door in the wall. He cut it open and ran for the forest.

"GRAAH!" he screamed out in pain. He had been shot with an arrow during his escape.

pickachu553 · Post by **pickachu553** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:37 pm

"Dammit what just happened?" He screamed out in pain, as he pulled out the arrow from his leg. He was leaning against a tree, and looking back at the burning villa thinking about all the pain going on down there.

"All I'd need was a water spell. I don't know why I never practiced any water spells." he thought aloud to himself. Falcon would have done anything to save those people. They were my family, not through blood, but through hardships. Why me?

ShoalTheHedgehog · Post by **ShoalTheHedgehog** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:39 pm

oog:ok im gonna start here the other 1 is when we are in amnostia

ig:AQUALIESES!! *a burst of water covered the village and put the flames out*

pickachu553 · Post by **pickachu553** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:42 pm

Try to actually write and not act like fox pack.

ShoalTheHedgehog · Post by **ShoalTheHedgehog** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:43 pm

oog:im not in the fox pack if ur doing a spell u do it in bold letters i just forgot to un blood it

pickachu553 · Post by **pickachu553** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:46 pm

No I mean no ** for actions. Write it like it happened in a story.

ShoalTheHedgehog · Post by **ShoalTheHedgehog** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:47 pm

ShoalTheHedgehog · Post by **ShoalTheHedgehog** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:49 pm

"Aqualieses!* i yelled and made a burst of water cover the village and put the flames out."you ok my friend?" i put my hand out to pick him up off the ground.

ShoalTheHedgehog · Post by **ShoalTheHedgehog** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:50 pm

hows that?

pickachu553 · Post by **pickachu553** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:51 pm

Falcon was breathing heavy. "Yeah," he replied. The fumes from the smoke were making him sick.
"I'm fine, just need a drink of water." he grabbed a cowhide pouch from his belt to find he had forgotten it at his shack.
"Dammit." he moaned.

ShoalTheHedgehog · Post by **ShoalTheHedgehog** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:55 pm

"Hear." I took out a small pouch out of my pack and gave it to him the turned around and was looking at the village then i saw the castle and smiled. "Hmm the guys are taking a while to get here."

pickachu553 · Post by **pickachu553** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:56 pm

"Thanks man," he replied, as he took the pouch and gulped it down like there was no tomorrow. "Now if you'll exuse me, I must get going." He grabbed his things and left towards Shadebridge Grove. He hoped to seek refuge from the flames.

Lamb · Post by **Lamb** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:01 pm

-Walks around and looks everywere-
Where am i o.o

ShoalTheHedgehog · Post by **ShoalTheHedgehog** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:02 pm

"Hmm ok u do that and u can keep the pouch i dont need it now that im here.Wat th-" Dark figures sprang up out of nowhere and started to attack me. 1 took my sword and threw it away towards the forrest."Gahh!"

pickachu553 · Post by **pickachu553** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:04 pm

IEmoChao, no. You cannot make a single post like this
incorrect
-Looks around-
I feel like pizza
Correct way is this:
I looked around the street looking for pizzarea to eat.
"Man, I could go for some pizza."

Lamb · Post by **Lamb** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:06 pm

I was looking around in confusion and i was cornered by flames."This is the end of me.." I thought to myself..Then a pile of water came towards me.
"GAAAH!" I wasnt drowning th the fire was gone so i ran towrds the forest and killed a deer. I heard a howl.. I howled back then therewas someomne running ass me a black figure..
"What was that."

ShoalTheHedgehog · Post by **ShoalTheHedgehog** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:08 pm

not to me i like this way i can actually let my mind spread

ig:i tried to get my word but they held me back. "AETHER BLAST!" a gust of wind pushed the mages back and i tried to get my sword but an animal kicked it away from me. "Dang!"

pickachu553 · Post by **pickachu553** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:11 pm

"Hey get off him!" I unsheathed my blade and slashed them in half.
"Hmph, there after you for saving me. Come on you can't stay here."
I showed him my map and told him"We're going to Shadebridge Grove."
I pointed west and said it's that way.

ShoalTheHedgehog · Post by **ShoalTheHedgehog** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:12 pm

"Ok. as long as i can get back to the castle later." i said getting up and grabbing my sword. then i ran after him.

pickachu553 · Post by **pickachu553** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:15 pm

"You probley won't. If they keep coming after you you wo't ever be able
to live in one place."I explained. "By the way, what shall I call you?"

ShoalTheHedgehog · Post by **ShoalTheHedgehog** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:17 pm

"My names Jack ive came all the way from Amnostia and dont worry ive barely ever lived in one place and these guys are to easy to kill." i said starting to walk.

Lamb · Post by **Lamb** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:18 pm

I was runing through the forest then i saw a elf and another person wit a sword next to him... I ran up to them and bite there necks.
Then i ran towards the village.

pickachu553 · Post by **pickachu553** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:20 pm

"Okay Jack, come on." I started to show him through the forest. I felt I
knew him, and that name rung a bell, but his face screwed the memory
up. "Okay within 3 hours we'll be in Shadebridge Grove. not a bad place,
and at night it's magnificent to view." I told him.

ShoalTheHedgehog · Post by **ShoalTheHedgehog** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:22 pm

"Cool." i replied trying to keep up. "Hmm where are those guys they shouldve been here by now."i thought.

pickachu553 · Post by **pickachu553** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:24 pm

"Actually i went with a King once here and he showed me the coolest
thing." I grabbed something from by bag, a plant."Frosttip Trees, very
rare and extremely valuable."