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[Linds 269]

Raven teases Lindsay and Brandt so much. That's hilarious. But, poor Brandt. Obviously Annabel meant so much to him. Well I hope things work out for him! Excited for part 3 x)

[Lamby]

I thought you guys would like a bit of humor! Thanks! :)

[Lamby]

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[PinkIceFox]

I loved how Brandt thought of a way to take down all the gargoyles! I always love your battle scenes, hun!

MAGE! D:<

[Linds 269]

Man, that was pretty smooth how Brandt though of getting rid of those gargoyles. Pretty awesome. And ahh I just love all the friendliness and aaaahhhh I sound like a sap :D

Also, Raven's teasing. Always. Makes me. Laugh. Lindsay's response was pretty great too hehe

But okay, Lindsay has a bad feeling. Apparently means something. NOT GOOOOOOD. I can't wait to see how they get rid of the evil mage and rescue Raechel!

[mintdrop]

yes, yes,
go raven, my fanfic-sona ouo

LET'S GET BACK TWIDDLE SO THAT HE CAN MARRY HER

[Zacmac74]

This is amazing!

Keep it up!

[Lamby]

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[PinkIceFox]

Yay Rachel is safe and all is well now!

Can't wait to see more characters!

[Linds 269]

Ahhhh!! Lindsay didn't die yay!! And Raechel is okay! But omg that was great. Brandt did a great job there, and so did the others! That was seriously awesome. Gosh I can't wait for the next Arc. I'm really, really into this. So yeah, great job writing this! Seriously!

[Lamby]

Thanks guys. I'm happy to have faithful readers! Just to make this post more worthwhile, I'll reveal the next four characters in order of appearance: BriannaBreeder, Mamkute, Blasphemy, Pink/Chaosnachochao.

[mintdrop]

YAY that arc was perfect! i really LOVE your writing style and i really can't wait for the next arc to come along! :D

[The Ice Maiden]

I READ IT ALL. AND I THINK IT IS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! :D
Phew. Took me like...half the day to read this :o. Can't wait for ARC 2!! :3

[Zacmac74]

Yaaaaaaay!!!!

That was wonderful!

Can't wait for arc 2

[The Ice Maiden]

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YES.

[Lamby]

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[PinkIceFox]

Aww. ): I hope everything goes well for Raven and Rachel! Poor Raven...

I still love Rachel's character I think she's my second favorite after Brandt.

[Linds 269]

Awww Brandt's such a nice friend to Lindsay. :') But wow, poor Raven :( I hope that, if he finds out, he'll still feel okay. D: And poor Raechel having to deal with that guilt! Gosh though, I loved this chapter! Fantastic start. :)

[Prince Ricard]

OOH CRAZY PLOT TWIST WHOA

[The Ice Maiden]

I love this story~! Lindsay is one of my favorite characters. Reminds me of myself x3
Can't wait for next chapter!! :D

[Lamby]

Thanks for the comments everyone. I keep writing so you can keep reading.

[mintdrop]

I'm imaginary?? ;~~~~;
*cries forever with tears that are lies inside of twiddles mind*

anyway, I'm really liking it so far! *wipes non exisistemt tear from non existent eye*

[Lamby]

You're real now, haha. It's the pairing of your dreams.

[Lamby]

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[PinkIceFox]

xD ha Raven gets seasick.

Also OH NOES. Giant sea snakes! D:

I'm excited to see how they deal with this and where they head next. xD New characters and locations are always my favorite part of your writings, hun.