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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/10) Ch 12 Part 1 Up

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wait was lindsay
Wait nvm I get it k
so like
AWESOME CHAPTER I loved it :) raven's sea sickness was great. and Twiddle's like about the fish wanting his lunch was pretty funny. I really enjoyed this. Looking forward to seeing how they make it out of this!
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/10) Ch 12 Part 1 Up

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LOL, Raven getting seasick x3 Ships...so evil.
Cannot wait to see what happens~*
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/10) Ch 12 Part 1 Up

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IT'S LEVIATHAN GUYS
IT'S ALWAYS LEVIATHAN
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/10) Ch 12 Part 1 Up

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that was great atomic! AND GIANT SEA SNAKES
NEVER TO FEAR
RAVEN IS HERE

*leaps into giant cobra with spear*
*goes through cobra and gets washed away by the ocean*

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Yep ^
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/10) Ch 12 Part 1 Up

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Ravenyte wrote:that was great atomic! AND GIANT SEA SNAKES
NEVER TO FEAR
RAVEN IS HERE

*leaps into giant cobra with spear*
*goes through cobra and gets washed away by the ocean*

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*falls over laughing*
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale - Back On

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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/20)

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Noooooos! D: They can't die!!! ;-;

DEUS EX MACHINA HELP.

I love how intense this part was. It feels like so much happened even though it's not a full chapter. Nice job honey~
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/20)

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Omg what an intense chapter part
I hope everyone ends up okay! Sounds like a lots of damage was done to Brandt too! And I really hope Raechel makes it :( I'd feel terrible for her and Raven if she didn't D: But, great chapter! I can't wait for Wednesday! :)
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/20)

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Wow. Brandt seemed...strange there for a moment. Huh. But good job as always.
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/20)

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Yeah my characterization was probably a little off; got out of practice from vacation. I should be right next time. No more vacations for me.
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/20)

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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/22)

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Oooooh focus shift! >:3 I wonder what will happen next.

BryteXBrandt OTP. *boots Annabel off a cliff* I WILL GO DOWN WITH THIS SHIP.
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated Wednesday 5/22)

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OH MY GOSH WE DIED OOOHHH MYYY GOSHHHH DUUUUDE ;~~~~; BUT NOW WE'RE ALIVE DUUUUUDE ;~~~~; this was awesome ahhhh ;-;
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated Wednesday 5/22)

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Thanks for the continued support everyone. I'm considering writing solo stories for other party members from their POV. They will not be campfire stories, but complete mini-arcs about events in their pasts. I won't be using these to develop characters more as I've already done so/will do so in the central story, so they will be standalone side-stories that have nothing to do with the main story, just for your entertainment. Parts for these would be relatively short compared to main chapters. An example of a solo arc would be Lindsay's days as Princess or misadventures of Raven and Reachel.

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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated Wednesday 5/22)

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Ohhhh my gosh I would love that!!
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated 5/22)

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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Mini Update Friday 5/24)

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Oh wow. I really like this new character. Excited to hear more of his story!
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Mini Update Friday 5/24)

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Wow, poor Mamkute. I wonder what happened to Volcania.
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Officially Lindsay will kick off the series, but I decided to show how things will work. Mamkute's story follows him battling an evil conspiracy that threatens everything he loves. Lindsay shall face dangerous odds when she battles the Bat Queen of the Dark Elves and falls in love.
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Omg excited x)
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if anyone didn't foresee that mamkute would be a manakete raise your hand and get out
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Mini Update Friday 5/24)

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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated Saturday 5/25)

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Yay!! The gang's all back together!! :D I'm pretty excited for the next chapter. And maaaan I can't wait for that premiere!
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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale (Updated Saturday 5/25)

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I love pirates. They're awesome

ALSO BEST PIRATE THEME EVER. :3

I can't wait to see what happens next~
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