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Re: CI RPG!!! - Brandt's Tale

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Welcome Brandon. :) Hope you feel better!
Also, man, I love my character. Sounds just like me. I can't wait for part 2. The chapter was pretty dang cute too overall. Excellent job. :D
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^I'm glad! She's a fun character to write. And thanks for wishing me well. :)

@Pat: ur the best

@Pink: Thank you dear.

Thanks again you guys! Your enjoyment makes it all worth it.
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:) Love the action in this part! Linds has a great character so far! Had to vote for Brandt in the poll though. His spoony bard charm has won me over~ ;3
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Ahhhh I wanna pick all three in the poll ;~; But omg Brandon THIS IS AMAZING eheeheheee I love our characters and how well the work together. And wow, I'm pretty strong! :O Gosh, I loved that chapter. Great job. Really looking forward to more (especially my backstory x3)
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^Ah that means a lot to hear! :) Should have more up tomorrow.

@Pink: Spoony bards are the best kind. Thanks!
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I remember spoony bards being a thing. Not sure I wanted to, but ok.
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As usual, I have no idea what you're getting at. Please be constructive with your comments or else I'm just going to assume the posts you make here are content-less in general. Brandt is a bard, he won't be changing classes, so if they aren't your thing, you will be sadly disappointed. I welcome criticism, but I can't address/fix/consider nonsense. Additionally, RPG stereotypes are a big part of this project.

On-topic: I've mentioned in the main topic about OP changes but for anyone who missed it, I've included a summary in case you need to brush up on previous events. The FYI for fun Appendix is also under construction!
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...Yeah ok I can be more constructive. If I remember correctly, spoony bard is a FFIV reference, which is a game I have many frustrating memories of. Good ones too, though.
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I appreciate it. I'm glad that the story reminds you of good memories, at least, haha.
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Aww. D: That's horrible! Poor Lindsay! D:< We should smash the person that did this to her.

Well. Witches don't smash. I suppose I can hex her or something. But it'll be a mean hex! Everything will taste like mud for the rest of her life!
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Awww, poor me. :( But MY CHARACTER'S A PRINCESS that is sooooo cool x) Also that whole messing with Brandt thing was pretty funny. xD Can't wait for tomorrow as usual! :)

Oh and I love my Pegasus c:
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^Poor Brandt, haha. Trying to stay chivalrous. And thanks! You needed a great pegasus. :)

@Pink: Lindsay will get justice, don't you worry!
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BRANDT NOOOOOOO! ;-; Not my Bard bishie. NOT MY BARD BISHIE!!!

Also of note: SPOONY BARD! And I still love that book to pieces. xD Thunder Thighs is one of my most favorite of insults for some reason. Probably the double 'Th' sound.

I can't wait to see what happens next. And to eventually find out what happens to Brandt!
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OH MY GOSH NO BRANDT ;~~~~; AND OH MY GOSH THAT STUPID BOOK CALLING ME THUNDER THIGHS I SWEAR I WILL SHOOT IT

but omg Lindsay narrates next part!!! goooosh the action suspense drama friendship ahhhh I love it allllll and apparently there's romance for Lindsay like wooooow Brandon I love this x)) I'll be dying inside until the next part is posted :D
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thunder thighs
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lightning legs, of course
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@Pink and Linds: The story has finally passed it's introduction stage, now we're ready for big things to happen! Next Part will be up tomorrow. Hang in there. :)

The fact you two and others enjoy this daily makes the storytelling worthwhile.
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Hun I think this was one of your best chapter's yet. There was so much emotion in Lindsay's narration. It all makes me want to see her get revenge even moreso!

I hope Brandt's okay! He's got to help save the girls! D:
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Wow. I love Lindsay's narration. Like PIF said, the emotion was great. But what a jerk the countess is! >:( And now I'm passed out. AND AN EVIL TWIDDLE I BET. Gosh I can't waaaait for tomorrowwwwww. I still love my character btw. :3 Twiddle's is pretty awesome too! I wonder where Brandt is and if he's okay. But yeahhh now I'm rambling so I'm gonna try to patiently wait for tomorrow. C:
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This is the only CI RPG I even read anymore. It's fantastic!!!! You write so well and the humor is to die for! Can't wait for chapter nine!
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^Wow, I'm really humbled! I know the story is serious at the moment, but once our heroes overcome this they'll be laughing together like always.

Thanks you guys! Really wanted to get inside Lindsay's head for you. Hopefully tomorrow I'll have a full chapter up! We might even see a glimpse of Minty.
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