Don't Turn Back - Chao Story; by Beam-The-Cat

[Snowy]

Wait... you took out Snowy?

[INeverBelonged]

*nod*

Blackice is an onyx black chaos chao, Soar is a sienna brown run chao.

And I'm editting ;)

@Snowy: you said you didn't want him in! 030

[Snowy]

I am thinking on not giving you permission on having both Snow/y on the story. This is not how they act at all. Snowy would had tied with Zero running on foot. Snow is Snowy. And furthermore Snowy dosen't like running on foot anymore.

You can leave him there. Snow too. Althought they're the same person but meh... Make them twin bros. And make Snowy let Orin Win.

[CitrusCat]

Can't wait to see who wins instead of Zero.

Because I know Loudclaw is your friend and all, but if you weren't gone for so long you'd know how bothersome Zero can get, no offense, Loudclaw.

Oh I see the Edit now. But you forgot to remove Zero saying "Yeah!" because now it seems out of place. XD

[INeverBelonged]

Lol x3 sorry I'm just so confused. Ok!
And I think ill keep in Blackice and Soar. They seem like good charries xD

Lol Citrus. I know Loudclaw can get pretty annoying, but whatever~ he is a good person.

[CitrusCat]

Yes, that's true. We all have our flaws, anyway. :)

Why did you change it again? Now I'm confused!

[Jack Augustine]

Can you post what Blackice and Soar look like?

Also, Zero still deserves last place. Him winning is the story's only flaw.

If you're going to talk bull-**** about Zero, then why the hell is he in here?

[INeverBelonged]

Bad Loud. Please no cursy.

Citrus; Ikr? :/ But I think I got it pretty sorted out.

[mintdrop]

its nice... but there are too many characters for a non RPer to handle and look at. Maybe limit them a bit and describe their personalities? i couldnt really get a grip on who's who.

[Jack Augustine]

Can't wait to see who wins instead of Zero.

Because I know Loudclaw is your friend and all, but if you weren't gone for so long you'd know how bothersome Zero can get, no offense, Loudclaw.

Oh I see the Edit now. But you forgot to remove Zero saying "Yeah!" because now it seems out of place. XD

I take offense.

Can you post what Blackice and Soar look like?

Also, Zero still deserves last place. Him winning is the story's only flaw.

Your mom's winning is her only flaw.

Zero's 1050 years old, and faster than you think. Take THAT, Citrus.

[INeverBelonged]

Hmmm. I can edit to where Zero and Orin tie?

[INeverBelonged]

Made edits!

It's a Normal Life
((Chapter 1))

Spoiler:

Speed Course
Sub
Players: Zero, Oral, Orin, Soar, Blackice, Snowy, Snowy.

Orin got into speeding stance.
"I know I can beat my reincarnation," Oral murmured.
Blackice laughed. "I'd like to see any of you beat me!"
Zero said nothing. He was simply thinking about how they would all fail pitifully.
Snowy and Snow both were remaining silent, like Zero. Snow was pinpointing the best location to take off.Beep. Beep. Beep. DING!
The chao took off.
Zero swirved around the obstacles, Soar high on his heels. Oral and Orin were leaping hurtles on the other side of the track.
Blackice grinned as he started running backward. But then an Eggbot appear
Soar crashed straight through the robot for him. She snickere
Oral watched Blackice. "He and his reincarnation are so similiar," he mumbled.
"Tell me about it," his own Reincarnation said with a chuckle.
Zero and Snowy saw the finish line. Snowy flew forward, yet all of the chao tied.
"IT"S A PHOTO FINISH!"
Orin smiled. "I've proved it. I am the all-time fastest!"
"Shut up," Soar snapped, green eyes glaring.
"No no no, no one was faster than me!" Blackice interrupted.

Complete!
Orin: *Victory Dance* *Blackice pushes out of winner's circle and voctory dances, then everybody just randomnly starts victory dancing*

Oral heard clapping. He looked to see Mikey and her reincarnation, Sarai. Beside them stood both Chars; one and two. "Bravo!" Mikey called.
Blackice bowed.
Orin chuckled. "Thank you,"
Sarai was also clapping. "You guys are the fastest chao on the planet, no doubt!"
Zero smiled. "I guess," he said. Being modest, as always.
Oral shrugged. "Anyway, what now?"
Orin shrugged as well. "Anyone wanna go exploring?"
"I do!" Kyra leapt up and rushed to Orin.
"Cool," Orin said. "See you guys later,"
Oral waved and watched the two walk off.
"They make a good couple," Soar stated.
"I heard that!!" Orin shouted back.
Blackice chuckled.
Kyro watched his great-great-great-great granddaughter. It was weird, how the time had altered. Now they saw who they would turn into, and who their descendants would be.
"So," Oral said, breaking the silence. "Anyone wanna go to the Black Market? I'm buying,"
Everyone raised their hand but Zero. He really didn't like anyone buying him anything. It made it seem like he was depending on people.
Oral chuckled. "Then come on," he said. He walked towards the Black Market.
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Kyra and Oral were both on a mountain side.
"It's beautiful up here," Kyra mused.
Orin nodded. "Agreed," he said.
Kyra smiled. "So, how did you find this place?"
"Ventured here and there, found a passage. Lead up here, then I saw an exit. That's the route we took. The tunnel is much creepier,"
"A passage?" Kyra gasped.
Suddenly, the earth trembled. A huge hunk of the mountain side flew off--with Kyra on it!
"Ahhhh!!!" The young swim chao shrieked.
"Kyra!" Oral shouted. He sped over on the block of land, grabbed Kyra, and leapt back on the mountain side.
The land landed in the ocean with a large splash.
Orin and Kyra both stared, in shock and surprise.
"Can you put me down now?" Kyra asked.
"Oh. Yeah," he gently placed the chao down.
"That was scary," Kyra whimpered.
Orin nodded. "Agreed," he said. "But what caused it?"

[INeverBelonged]

ok why ain't that spoiler working?!
This is getting severely annoying.

[CitrusCat]

Loud, Zero being overpowered is really annoying. You have to understand.

That insult didn't bother me.

Chao can only be Level 99 in a stat. One opponent was a Chaos Chao. They are immortal. Likely had a lot of time to raise those Levels. Snowy is immortal too, so same thing.

Beam. How about have everyone tie? X3 Lol, that'd be funny.

[INeverBelonged]

xDDDD
You're a genius, Citrus.

[CitrusCat]

Lol, I love it! :D

[Snowy]

Snowy's breed makes him immortal

[INeverBelonged]

thanks for letting me know :3

Thank you, Citrus! Ya I think it's actually pretty funny. Blackice, I think, relates me muches x3

[KeatonWood]

OMG how the heck did i miss this?!._.

I love it!You got Kyra and Kyro EXACTLY right!

[INeverBelonged]

Thank you thank you ~

[KeatonWood]

Spoiler tags still arent working btw.

[INeverBelonged]

Ik :/ ya I dunno why but they arent...SO FREAKIN ANNOYING

[Snowy]

You forgot the 2 at [/spoiler]

[INeverBelonged]

OOOHHHH.

[KeatonWood]

Spoiler:

[/spoiler2 ]