Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!

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Alright

Hehe...x3
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!

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Yeah. The story is cool. A super hedgehog scene would be 20% cooler. ( 120% )
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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LAWL!
MIKEY IS SO AWESOME
SO IS KYRO NYAAAAAAA
*dances around like Pinkie Pike would*
Nya nya nya~
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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This is so funny! I wanna read more!

Btw great job with Lin's personality
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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Exactwy ^^~
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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Axle, metal, and char removed from story unless I can think of a way to throw them back in.

Chapter 8:Not done yet...
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Mikey looked at snowy."Not exactly...we are still on the island so they could still just as easily get us so we need to find a way off."

Snowy sweat dropped."Oh right..."

Lin thought for a moment."Perhaps we could find some sort of boat or vehicle. Got to be some way off."

Kyro nodded still a little dazed by Lin's surprise kiss."Maybe we should check that way. I have a weird hunch."He said pointing east.

Snowy shook his head."I say we go this way!"He said pointing west.

"The only way you're going is back into your cells!"A voice said on top of a wall.

Mikey gasped."Dang it Blast found us!C'mon I know the way but we gotta be quick!Snowy, you and Kyro stall her while me and Lin go find it!"She told them and her and Lin ran north.

Kyro looked at Snowy."Let's make her regret capturing us in the first place!"Kyro said and leaped towards Blast.Snowy nodded and shot a small orb of ice behind Kyro so blast couldn't see it.Once Kyro got real close to blast, he dove towards the ground allowing the orb to go towards blast.But with razor sharp reflexes, Blast kicked the orb towards Kyro.Kyro gasped as it hit him and he was frozen in ice. Blast jumped down next to him and kicked frozen Kyro towards snowy. Snowy did the same and this repeated for awhile until blast failed to hit him and frozen Kyro crashed into her breaking the ice.Blast was buried under some of the ice and Kyro stood up stiffly.He picked some of the ice off blast who laid there silent.Kyro leaned in close to her face before her eyes suddenly opened and she kicked Kyro into the air.Then she jumped up and ran behind snowy kicking him into Kyro so the two collided. Both fell to the ground and got up weakly."This battle is over."Blast said walking up to them.Snowy looked up at her grinning."Think again."He smirked as he spin dashed into her knocking her away. then Kyro lunged at her and grabbed her in mid- flight.He then spun her around and flung her high into the air where snowy was prepared to hit her straight into the ground with a strong punch.Blast crashed and laid on the ground unconscious. Snowy landed and walked up to Kyro."Well that was fun huh?"
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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Great job! This one was interesting to read.
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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This story is semi cancelled. I will still do it periodically but for now i'll be working on a new story i've been thinking about.
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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Dang. Okay!
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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poo!
But you did a great job :)
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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Change of plans...

In the making of my new story, I lost all new ideas and I have up ( I never released it yet so I guess that was smart.)

I also got sa2b on my Xbox now so I can remember all the environments again and keep this going !
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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Lol i got sa2b on my Xbox too. Fuzzie beat it a long time ago though...
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