The Adventures Of A Pegicorn Chao

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The Adventures Of A Pegicorn Chao

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CHAPTER ONE:
She stumbled up to her once favourite plush and picked it up, she gave it to her friend and flew away sobbing for some reason suddenly a dastardly Chao got in front of her and knocked her out of the air! "Ugh, my head." said the young confused Chao. She lifted off into the palace of clouds. As she flew to her palace she realised everybody was gathered up having a meeting. Could they have been talking about the evil Chao? she wondered. She went into her cloud castle and saw her dad, Dino talking to her son called Rusty. As she knew that Rusty had a no siblings it was quite hard. Blitz looked at her as he usually did and said "Our kingdom is in danger, Dipsy" said Blitz. Dipsy got hold of Rusty as soon as she heard. "We must escort everyone out of my kingdom!" said Dipsy in terror. The two children Chao that Lacey had given birth to ran away.

To be continued :wink:
Last edited by SilverRabbit on Sat Jul 06, 2013 8:33 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: The Adventures Of A Pegicorn Chao

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This is interesting. Please continue.
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^

I'm going to :D
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Re: The Adventures Of A Pegicorn Chao

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needs a lot of work

the events are too rushed i can't tell what's happening
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Re: The Adventures Of A Pegicorn Chao

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Citrus_Chao wrote:This is interesting. Please continue.
Oh, and I think the word you're looking for is Alicorn.
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pokemonlove33 wrote:Image
okay

i'm outta here

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CelebiLv666 wrote:
Citrus_Chao wrote:This is interesting. Please continue.
Oh, and I think the word you're looking for is Alicorn.
Nope Pegicorn, its what I've said all my life even if that is the MLP nickname for a unicorn with wings I like Pegicorn a lot better :3
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