Peace Is Everywhere:
Down in a grave yard,
Peace can be made,
Love can be found,
Even ghosts are friendly,
Down near the sun
There are lots of flowers,
Its another sign of peace,
Pick the flowers there,
Play in those field,
Peace Is Everywhere.
Chao Courage:
Even if their small,
they are strong little creatures,
Three of them could carry a small log,
They have big hearts,
And have so much courage,
The courage to be friendly to their owners!
Bowl On The Table:
There's a bowl on the table,
There's something delicious in it,
what could it be?,
its some sort of cereal but I can't see it,
the bowl is to big,
I get the spoon and see that its...
PORRIDGE!
Hope you enjoyed ;)
Some Poems ;)
- SilverRabbit
- Fearless Chao
- Posts: 688
- Joined: Thu May 23, 2013 6:13 pm
- Motto: We're going to the ark, so I guess that means we- crud
- Location: Tea Land
- Contact:
Some Poems ;)
Weird person who likes cartoons, pink and video-games.
- dragonite637
- Child Chao
- Posts: 16
- Joined: Fri Oct 08, 2010 5:24 pm
Re: Some Poems ;)
nice poems there :)
-
- Seeker Chao
- Posts: 236
- Joined: Sat Aug 10, 2013 8:58 pm
- Location: The Dark Side Of The Moon
Re: Some Poems ;)
These are really good Eevee. ;)
I'm not going to change the way I look or the way I feel to conform to anything. I've always been a Freak. So I've been a Freak all my Life and I have to live with that,you know. I'm one of those people.
- SilverRabbit
- Fearless Chao
- Posts: 688
- Joined: Thu May 23, 2013 6:13 pm
- Motto: We're going to the ark, so I guess that means we- crud
- Location: Tea Land
- Contact:
Re: Some Poems ;)
Thank you, Dragonite and MoonDancer :3
Weird person who likes cartoons, pink and video-games.
- Snowy
- Chaos Chao
- Posts: 2336
- Joined: Wed Aug 22, 2012 4:42 am
- Motto: Never look at your life as something insignificant.
- Contact:
Re: Some Poems ;)
They need work though.
- SilverRabbit
- Fearless Chao
- Posts: 688
- Joined: Thu May 23, 2013 6:13 pm
- Motto: We're going to the ark, so I guess that means we- crud
- Location: Tea Land
- Contact:
Re: Some Poems ;)
You always say that, Snowy.
Weird person who likes cartoons, pink and video-games.
- Lamby
- Chaos Chao
- Posts: 2228
- Joined: Sun Mar 11, 2012 5:38 pm
- Motto: running this block, running the chain gang
- Location: 9th circle
- Contact:
Re: Some Poems ;)
I think my favorite is the first one. Sometimes short poems say a lot, and the graveyard one is one of those poems. It definitely captures a playful mood that makes you smile. There are some spelling errors, but they didn't really affect me and some are probably accidents anyway. Really nice job.
"Oh baby won't you stop it/you and I haven't got it
Television romance "
- SilverRabbit
- Fearless Chao
- Posts: 688
- Joined: Thu May 23, 2013 6:13 pm
- Motto: We're going to the ark, so I guess that means we- crud
- Location: Tea Land
- Contact:
Re: Some Poems ;)
I've learnt how some words go like their, they're and there are not the same. And were and where are different. And graveyard is one word. So yeah I do make those mistakes :3Batty wrote:I think my favorite is the first one. Sometimes short poems say a lot, and the graveyard one is one of those poems. It definitely captures a playful mood that makes you smile. There are some spelling errors, but they didn't really affect me and some are probably accidents anyway. Really nice job.
Weird person who likes cartoons, pink and video-games.
-
- Seeker Chao
- Posts: 236
- Joined: Sat Aug 10, 2013 8:58 pm
- Location: The Dark Side Of The Moon
Re: Some Poems ;)
It's okay,I make spelling Errors too. ;)
I'm not going to change the way I look or the way I feel to conform to anything. I've always been a Freak. So I've been a Freak all my Life and I have to live with that,you know. I'm one of those people.
- SilverRabbit
- Fearless Chao
- Posts: 688
- Joined: Thu May 23, 2013 6:13 pm
- Motto: We're going to the ark, so I guess that means we- crud
- Location: Tea Land
- Contact:
Re: Some Poems ;)
Summer:
A bird flew past,
It was hot,
I got burned by the sun,
Its a very hot day,
This means its...
SUMMER!
Sorry its to short.
A bird flew past,
It was hot,
I got burned by the sun,
Its a very hot day,
This means its...
SUMMER!
Sorry its to short.
Weird person who likes cartoons, pink and video-games.