Mann vs. Mod (Update 12.5: The End)

Post your text based stories or read other user's pieces of fiction here!
Locked
Crash32
Master Chaos Chao
Master Chaos Chao
Posts: 5089
Joined: Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:19 am
Motto: <- Probably a reference to The Simpsons
Location: This is Tumblr, right? No pls don't be offended b-baka!!
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Crash32 »

I sized it at 400x, which should work
Guess the height is a little too much, I'll fix it in a bit
KeatonLabs
Veteran Chao
Veteran Chao
Posts: 1655
Joined: Sun Dec 23, 2012 9:33 pm
Motto: The Dispencer goes HERE!
Location: There and Back
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by KeatonLabs »

It says the height limit is 100pixels.
Crash32
Master Chaos Chao
Master Chaos Chao
Posts: 5089
Joined: Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:19 am
Motto: <- Probably a reference to The Simpsons
Location: This is Tumblr, right? No pls don't be offended b-baka!!
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Crash32 »

From memory the height is like 170, so there's the problem
KeatonLabs
Veteran Chao
Veteran Chao
Posts: 1655
Joined: Sun Dec 23, 2012 9:33 pm
Motto: The Dispencer goes HERE!
Location: There and Back
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by KeatonLabs »

Oh ok. That shouldn't be too hard to fix right?
User avatar
Snowy
Chaos Chao
Chaos Chao
Posts: 2336
Joined: Wed Aug 22, 2012 4:42 am
Motto: Never look at your life as something insignificant.
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Snowy »

I might actually replace that Rainbow Dash banner for one of these if the problem gets fixed. sorryididn'tmeantobringupmlpinherei'msorry
Image
Crash32
Master Chaos Chao
Master Chaos Chao
Posts: 5089
Joined: Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:19 am
Motto: <- Probably a reference to The Simpsons
Location: This is Tumblr, right? No pls don't be offended b-baka!!
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Crash32 »

mentioning removing mlp i'm sure is fine
anyway, i should have those fixed size banners up within the next hour
no need to flood this topic with other talk, i might even make a topic for the other stuff such as banners and discussion

i think it'd be best if this topic is left for the story itself and some feedback

new banners:
Spoiler:
Image
Image

Code: Select all

[url=http://www.chao.hippotank.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=34&t=45095][img]http://www.ezimba.com/work/140228C/ezimba14551242157400.png[/img][/url]
[url=http://www.chao.hippotank.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=34&t=45095][img]http://www.ezimba.com/work/140228C/ezimba14551298550700.png[/img][/url]
ci should work on it's signature limits
User avatar
Nano
Legendary Chaos Chao
Legendary Chaos Chao
Posts: 12256
Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:50 am
Motto: My kickstarter failed, but that's okay!
Location: Union of Chaoviet Socialist Republics

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Nano »

I'M NOT READY TO CHANGE MY SIG
BUT I WANT TO...

Update: I should have the next update ready by later today. I'll be introducing many characters this time around so that should be nice.
KeatonLabs
Veteran Chao
Veteran Chao
Posts: 1655
Joined: Sun Dec 23, 2012 9:33 pm
Motto: The Dispencer goes HERE!
Location: There and Back
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by KeatonLabs »

Just cram it all in there.
Last edited by KeatonLabs on Sat Nov 15, 2014 5:11 pm, edited 1 time in total.
User avatar
Nano
Legendary Chaos Chao
Legendary Chaos Chao
Posts: 12256
Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:50 am
Motto: My kickstarter failed, but that's okay!
Location: Union of Chaoviet Socialist Republics

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Nano »

>>Return to first page

Update 5
Spoiler:
Image
Mannhattan, the main producer for all RED goods. Experiencing many attacks in the past from BLU forces, it held strong with its nearly infinite supply of weapons and mannpower. However, today is quite different for RED Users. Today they were fighting more than just BLU soldiers, they were defending themselves against the Mods.
Spoiler:
Image
Soldiers, Demos, Engineers, Snipers, Heavies, all of them lined up and prepared to take the blunt of the Mod force that was approaching them. Most of these Users were new recruits, as many veterans had died in the city from the Shiro attack.
Spoiler:
Image
"Listen up Ladies and Gents," Lana commanded, "We are here for one thing: Destroying Mods. We've recently obtained intelligence that the Mods are going to be attacking this base in an attempt to destroy our one source of resource income. Thus, crippling us early in the war and ending us quickly."
Spoiler:
Image
"You all have met Linds, one of our top rank officers." Lana said, gesturing to Linds.

"Yes, hello everyone. We have decided to include you six in this because, well, while you're not exactly the best we have, you have more info on these mods then most of us so far."
Spoiler:
Image
"Crash, you're going to be our striker. Take out as many of them as you can as fast as you can. I trust your aim won't be terrible, so do me proud."
Spoiler:
Image
"Patrick, you're going to need to be setting traps for our Mod friends. Have fun blowing these jerks to bits. Remember to aim for MedBots, large groups of Mods, and anything else that clangs like a Bot."
Spoiler:
Image
"Vince, you're our defense. Keep our soldiers safe, and wrangle stray SpyBots and EngieBots if you can."
Spoiler:
Image
"Aidan, you of course are our support. Keep us healed, and remember to pop it, don't drop it. Cause if you drop it, you're dead."
Spoiler:
Image
"Brianna, you're the push. When we need to move up, you're going to be the force that drives us forwards. Be brave, and be strong."
Spoiler:
Image
"Snowy, you just do your best not to get shot or something."
Spoiler:
Image
Linds coughed and smiled. "As you probably saw on the way in, our intel paid off. They've landed and we're all simply waiting for them to come out and attack."
Spoiler:
Image
"As usual, our explosives are stored in the hatch by the main base. Idiotic maybe, but we had nowhere else to put it." Lana chimed in, sighing a bit.
Spoiler:
Image
"Anyhow, that's all the info we have for this. Any questions?" Lana asked, glancing around at the group.
Spoiler:
Image
"Why isn't BLU helping us in this war? If you don't mind me asking." Patrick asked cautiously.
Spoiler:
Image
"BLU?..." Linds questioned, anger forming on her face.
Spoiler:
Image
"Well, we took a heavy hit back at the city... Don't you think it'd be wise to just make a truce so we can destroy them together?" Brianna added.
Spoiler:
Image
"Seriously, this war is bigger than just us. We can't fight two people at the same time..." Snowy nervously tossed in, unsure of what the reaction was gonna be.
Spoiler:
Image
"We are not going to associate with BLU, especially with Tree. Once we finish up this little Mod problem, we're going to go back to destroying BLU and becoming the leading force in Chao Island." Lana declared. "That is that. I'm sorry."
Spoiler:
Image
Meanwhile, two users who had been goofing off were rushing back to their posts. "Crap crap CRAP! I can't believe that took that long! We're gonna get yelled at so bad!" Keaton yelled, Dev close at his heels.
Spoiler:
Image
"What the hell...?" Dev mumbled. Keaton stopped in fear as he was speechless on what to say to the picture before him.
Spoiler:
Image
The first barrier of Users had been wiped out, not without a fight, but they hadn't done enough damage to make a huge dent in the Mod forces. "RUN! WE GOTTA WARN EM!" Keaton shouted.
Spoiler:
Image
The roof of the main base housed a few Snipers, watching out for any danger there might be on the front. "Man and then I was like 'oh so you think you're so cool? well guess what, you SUCK!' haha!" the two Users laughed at this short story, ignoring their duties and letting that one guy watch out for Mods.
Spoiler:
Image
"Eh? What the hell is that?" That one guy whispered, zooming in closer.
Spoiler:
Image
"Sound the alarm! SOUND THE ALARM!" Dev shouted, both of them rushing away from the wave of mods approaching them.
Spoiler:
Image
"Oh GOD! INCOMING!" That one guy yelled. "Sound the alarm!"
Spoiler:
Image
The alarm sounded, alerting the base to the threat approaching. "Oh man, ok all of you! To the front line let's go!" Linds shouted, ushering them out the door. "Lana, stay back and prepare your charge. We'll need it soon."

"Of course. Good luck everyone." Lana said simply, running to the back room to begin prepping her charge.

While the wave seemed menacing, the six Users felt as though they could handle it. However, they'd need plenty of teamwork and cunning tactics to get things done.
Last edited by Nano on Sun Mar 02, 2014 9:38 am, edited 2 times in total.
User avatar
Nano
Legendary Chaos Chao
Legendary Chaos Chao
Posts: 12256
Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:50 am
Motto: My kickstarter failed, but that's okay!
Location: Union of Chaoviet Socialist Republics

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Nano »

Update released, update includes:
-Not so good plot
-Not so good pictures
-2-4 hours of work
-Cameo characters make an appearance!
-Welcome to Mannhattan!
-What will happen next?!
-Some apologies

I wanna apologize for such a weak update. My Gmod crashed twice during this and I lost all this update progress, and due to complications with the animator, everything got ruined. So I had to really rush this thing done and hope it didn't end too bad.

I hope you guys enjoy.
Triert
Master Chaos Chao
Master Chaos Chao
Posts: 5682
Joined: Fri Jul 10, 2009 1:36 am

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Triert »

View 666
Image
Crash32
Master Chaos Chao
Master Chaos Chao
Posts: 5089
Joined: Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:19 am
Motto: <- Probably a reference to The Simpsons
Location: This is Tumblr, right? No pls don't be offended b-baka!!
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Crash32 »

This is actually one of the best updates yet!
Glad I convinced you to push it out today B)
KeatonLabs
Veteran Chao
Veteran Chao
Posts: 1655
Joined: Sun Dec 23, 2012 9:33 pm
Motto: The Dispencer goes HERE!
Location: There and Back
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by KeatonLabs »

Actually I'll agree with Crash on this one fox. This is in my opinion one of your best being only outranked by last weeks.
User avatar
Nano
Legendary Chaos Chao
Legendary Chaos Chao
Posts: 12256
Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:50 am
Motto: My kickstarter failed, but that's okay!
Location: Union of Chaoviet Socialist Republics

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Nano »

Sadly, I have bad news. Due to a trip I had to take for choir, there will be no update.

Sorry! I'll have the next one up this Saturday!
KeatonLabs
Veteran Chao
Veteran Chao
Posts: 1655
Joined: Sun Dec 23, 2012 9:33 pm
Motto: The Dispencer goes HERE!
Location: There and Back
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by KeatonLabs »

Oh, did the choir trip go well Fox?
User avatar
Nano
Legendary Chaos Chao
Legendary Chaos Chao
Posts: 12256
Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:50 am
Motto: My kickstarter failed, but that's okay!
Location: Union of Chaoviet Socialist Republics

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Nano »

Fairly well actually! I just have a lot of catching up to do haha.
KeatonLabs
Veteran Chao
Veteran Chao
Posts: 1655
Joined: Sun Dec 23, 2012 9:33 pm
Motto: The Dispencer goes HERE!
Location: There and Back
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by KeatonLabs »

That's good to hear. Was it like an Honors trip? If so I can relate to your experience.;)
User avatar
Nano
Legendary Chaos Chao
Legendary Chaos Chao
Posts: 12256
Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:50 am
Motto: My kickstarter failed, but that's okay!
Location: Union of Chaoviet Socialist Republics

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Nano »

It was more like a festival where a lot of choirs were invited to get help and watch some jazz HEH

But on the bright side, I don't look so busy this weekend, so expect an update everyone!
KeatonLabs
Veteran Chao
Veteran Chao
Posts: 1655
Joined: Sun Dec 23, 2012 9:33 pm
Motto: The Dispencer goes HERE!
Location: There and Back
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by KeatonLabs »

Oh, that's...actually vaguely interesting.

Thou I do look forward to the next update, take your time Fox.
Crash32
Master Chaos Chao
Master Chaos Chao
Posts: 5089
Joined: Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:19 am
Motto: <- Probably a reference to The Simpsons
Location: This is Tumblr, right? No pls don't be offended b-baka!!
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Crash32 »

Image
BREAKING NEWS: This image just in; Fox Boy fights with skybox causes havoc in Hale's Coal Town, ignoring the outcry of fans for an update to his story entitled "Mann Vs Mod".
When trying to interview him, he simply muttered and pushed us aside. Drug addiction from his newfound fame? Or is his head simply stuck in the skybox? We may never know (what a skybox is or why it apparently exists outside of video games).
Spoiler:
As you can see, the giant Spy clipped into the skybox, which is why
-He doesn't have his usual unusual (hue) private eye as the smoke effect didn't appear.
-The head isn't lit.
-The hat isn't positioned perfectly.
Crash32
Master Chaos Chao
Master Chaos Chao
Posts: 5089
Joined: Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:19 am
Motto: <- Probably a reference to The Simpsons
Location: This is Tumblr, right? No pls don't be offended b-baka!!
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Crash32 »

Image Image Image Image Image Image
User avatar
Nano
Legendary Chaos Chao
Legendary Chaos Chao
Posts: 12256
Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:50 am
Motto: My kickstarter failed, but that's okay!
Location: Union of Chaoviet Socialist Republics

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Nano »

Those turned out looking really good actually despite having to sacrifice some of their clothing
User avatar
Dr. Roivas
Veteran Chao
Veteran Chao
Posts: 1125
Joined: Fri Sep 30, 2011 11:35 pm
Motto: urine speaks louder than words
Location: \[T]/ praisin dat orb
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Dr. Roivas »

....yeah im gonna use that ****
Capitalism Killed My Once Proud Signature
Crash32
Master Chaos Chao
Master Chaos Chao
Posts: 5089
Joined: Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:19 am
Motto: <- Probably a reference to The Simpsons
Location: This is Tumblr, right? No pls don't be offended b-baka!!
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Crash32 »

UHH
Image
User avatar
Dr. Roivas
Veteran Chao
Veteran Chao
Posts: 1125
Joined: Fri Sep 30, 2011 11:35 pm
Motto: urine speaks louder than words
Location: \[T]/ praisin dat orb
Contact:

Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

Post by Dr. Roivas »

CRASH I LOVE YOU SO MUCH
Capitalism Killed My Once Proud Signature
Locked