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Post by Sable »

Also, the Chao Recipes description is a bit awkwardly worded. I think that "for how" should be changed to "for instructions on how".
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In the Rules and Guidlines topic, some of the short "i"s need to be big "I"s.
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Post by Yukki »

The other day i Was browsing It And i Found

'o nthe'

"On The" :heroblink:

i actually forgot where, but it's there
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Here are a few I have found in the chao gallery. This is for the "First Evolution"-
"To make a certain type, choose whether you want your Chao to be Hero, Dark or Neutral, and give it a certain colour/class of of drives/animals to make sure it is best at that stat." There is a superfluous "of" (which I have bolded.)

"Hero/Run

Blueish markings with a small spike on its head." "Blueish" should be spelt as bluish; looks strange, microsoft word says it is correct.

"Dark/Fly
Common name: "(Basic) Reala Chao"
Has two jesters and is a dark purple colour. Resembles the Sega character Reala. (From the game NiGHTS into dreams)"
NiGHTS into Dreams should be italicized.

For Second Evolution, Neutral page:

"Neutral/Fly/Power

The Chao's jesters grow upwards and curve like a scorpions tail, and the Chao becomes much redder."

Scorpion's tail should have an apostraphe.


"Neutral/Power/None

Just like the Basic Dragon Chao except this Chao's head is more rounded."
I know this site used to have nicknames for all chao forms, but with the erradication of most, it confuses me, I do not know what a "Dragon Chao" is. This problem exists in many different second evolutions, and I may not point out them all.

"Hero/Swim/None

Like the Basic Streamline Chao, with a different range of colours."
Sam e problem as with the Neutral/Power/None, I do not know of this "streamline" chao.

"Hero/Fly/None

Similar to the Basic Sky Chao." Sky...???

"Hero/Power/None

Just like the Basic Energy Chao except is slightly bigger." Energy Chao?? Also, "is" should be "it is" or "it's".

"Dark/Power/None

Just like the Basic Cone Chao except this Chao's colours are more darker." Cone? Also, more darker is redundant. "darker" will do just fine.

That is all.
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Post by Chocolatethestarchao »

Yeah, on the first evolutions page there needs to be the nicknames for the evolutions so there's no confusion on that in the second evolutoin page.
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I think nicknames would confuse the issue more, actually.
This is more of a suggestion than anything, but how about a sort of tree that shows all the potential ways an evolution can go? I might start working on that later, actually.
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Evolution 2 page, Dark/Run/None

"The colours of the Basic Shadow Chao turn slightly more darker"

It's a dual comparative, just get rid of the word "more"
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Post by Chocolatethestarchao »

On the stat page, it says "For Dreamcast, your Chao learns to walk when its Run stat reaches 20, and speed of walk increases at 100." but not the stats for the GC version. If it's the same for both game versions, that should be mentioned.
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Post by Ratchex »

In the picture of the neutral/power/none there isn't any chao island logo.
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It probaly has been fixed, but Neutral/Power/Swim doens't has, too. :darksurprise:
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This place is full of errors
Light Chaos Chao wrote: "It has a constant colour about it, the whole body is of a single colour, however, the colour changes. Some, inexperienced, people say it changes at random, or has no particular path of colour change, they are horribly wrong. It's body colour changes like that of a normal Chao's colours."

"Every Chao has what I like to call a 'base colour', that colour is the one that usually varies the most between a normal Chao, and a half normal Chao, and that colour affects the rest of the colours; the Chao in question has it's whole body the colour of it's base colour, just like a normal Chao. But normal Chao has other shades of the base colour, although this one, does not."

"Recent observations have shown that the Chao's whole body is not necessarily the same colour. Every body part's colour is calculated independantly to the other. This means that the arms, legs, body, tail and head may be different colours. I have only seen this on neutral/swim Chao, most of them have tails and feet of odd colours."
Should be
"It has a constant colour about it, the whole body is of a single colour, however, the colour changes. Some, inexperienced, people say it changes at random, or has no particular path of colour change, they are horribly wrong. Its body colour changes like that of a normal Chao's colours."

"Every Chao has what I like to call a 'base colour', that colour is the one that usually varies the most between a normal Chao, and a half normal Chao, and that colour affects the rest of the colours; the Chao in question has its whole body the colour of its base colour, just like a normal Chao. But normal Chao has other shades of the base colour, although this one, does not."

"Recent observations have shown that the Chao's whole body is not necessarily the same colour. Every body part's colour is calculated independantly to the other. This means that the arms, legs, body, tail and head may be different colours. I have only seen this on neutral/swim Chao, most of them have tails and feet of odd colours."
And that minigame thing it shouldn't say it's feet, it should say its feet.
Wow. Crappy grammar from you.
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^
So it should be exactly the same?

great criticism from you.
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MoonMintFox wrote:^
So it should be exactly the same?

great criticism from you.
No. When possessive, it should be its, not it's. For example, Shadow Chao has red markings on its quills vs Shadow Chao has red marking on it's quills
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It's just one missing quotation mark.
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Post by CasualCollision »

I know this is for typos, but I don't see why this can't also be a sticky for pointing out broken images, and glitches.

For starters, some of the images on this page are broken.

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"the beach ball before reaching the coconu trees."

Obvious spelling error


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Thanks, Spam90675 and Twiddle. Those have both now been corrected.
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Any time, Fusion.
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http://chao.hippotank.com/sa/expressions
You must have done somethign really bad such as attacking it!
Somethign should be something.

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http://chao.hippotank.com/sa/gardens
you will find the teleporters and also a sattelite dish rotating round very quickly.
Sattelite should be satellite.

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http://chao.hippotank.com/sa2b/first-evolution
It says on this page that the Neutral Swim chao has a pinkish purple body. Shouldn't it be green or yellow?
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^
This.
A more unusual method is to do the opposite: treat the Chao very badly with a Dark character. If you abuse the Chao by throwing and hitting it, it will gradually change into the opposite (Hero) alignment. This method will greatly upset and traumatise the Chao, and is not recommended.
"Traumatise" should be "traumatize".
A more unusual method is to do the opposite: treat the Chao very badly with a Hero character. If you abuse the Chao by throwing and hitting it, it will gradually change into the opposite (Dark) alignment. This method will greatly upset and traumatise the Chao, and is not recommended.
Same as the other one.
The final and slowest method is to feed the Chao several lots of Dark Fruit. The Chao will shift slightly towards the Dark alignment with each Hero Dark that it consumes.
"Hero Dark" should be "Dark Fruit".

And finally, some mistakes in the Sonic Adventure (original game for Dreamcast) section...
Chaclon
If you manage to win all the races, then the next time you race Chaclon will be amongst the competitors in lane 1. The race will start, and while all the Chao race off to try and win the race - he will just lie there snoozing! Is he mad? Well... not really. You see, halfway through the race Chaclon will get up, and sprint after all the Chao at incredible speed! There is a page located here detailing this Chao in depth.
"Chaclon" should be "Chacron".
Also, where it says "located here", if you click on the link it sends you to the exact same page!
Miscellaneous Blue Skunk +10 after a random amound are given Learnt behaviour: Chao draws a picture on the ground.
Mole +10 after a random amound are given Learnt behaviour: Chao digs with a shovel.
Koala Bear +10 after a random amound are given Learnt behaviour: Chao plays the trumpet.
"Amound" should be "amount".
It is possible to abuse your Chao, which will obviously make it very upset and traumatised.
Same as first 2 in my post. Why am I getting the feeling there are 2 ways to spell this word...?
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Grammar Nazi Alert!!
Spoiler:
http://chao.hippotank.com/sa/actions
If your Chao is bored, it may perform one of its learnt animal behaviours
Learnt is a past participial, but its used as a past simple, and behaviours is supposed to be behaviors I think.
Also, There are 2 lowercase i's in Yukki's post that need to be capital I's.
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IDontKnow, This Isnt About Typing Errors In Posts, Just In The Chao Facts Section Of The Website ;)
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I know, If it was you would have 17 capitalization errors and 2 punctuation errors.
Those were just little jokes.
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