the great story of fliey and flannel (full version)

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the great story of fliey and flannel (full version)

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chapter 1......the twins are born
one day just 2 normal white chao popped out of there eggs both hatched at the same time. They looked around they didn't know where they were. they looked up at the bight sun feeling like this was there home. Then suddenly they saw something coming up to them. they didn't know who it was until it said"hello i'm cheese 2 who are you" fliey and flannel looked at each other. they were still inside there egg shell. cheese 2 saw some markings on the egg shell it said on one fliey and on the other flannel." your called fliey and your called flannel" cheese 2 said"why don't you come to my house".
"ok" the twins said.
in cheese 2's house there were lots of fruit. it had 3 bedrooms. 1 with a double bed where cheese 2 and icey (cheese 2's wife) slept and 2 spare rooms where the twins would sleep. 1 of them is where there daughter invise would sleep. the other had double bed just for them.
"tomorow i will help you get your own house"cheese 2 said.


chapter 2 ..............the house hunt
the next day when they woke up fliey said to flannel"we're getting a house today"
"hope we get one near the pool" flannel answered
cheese 2 went into there room and said"are you ready to get a house"
"yes we are" the twins shouted
"we're also getting a house for invise because she evolved last night"cheese 2 said
the hunt was on. they searched and searched until they found 2 perfect houses. later that day the twins evolved. they came out as hero chao. it was lovely the house was. the twins went to see invise. in her house there was another chao."this is sonic my husband" invise said.
sonic was not yet a sonic chao. the twins looked at each other"want a drink" a voice said. it was icey. she walked in "no thank you we just wanted to look around your house" flannel said

chapter 3..........the flood
the next day was very gloomy. all of a sudden it hammered it down with rain. the twins house was right next to the pool...they both looked at the pool through the window as it started over flowing. about 10 seconds later they heard water coming. the rain got heavier and heavier. suddenly the whole house smashed. the twins didn't know what to do. they thought it was the end of there life's...

chapter 4..........how they survived
suddenly flannel started to swim. but fliey was still drowning. flannel looked at fliey and said"i'll save you". and flannel did what he said and when they got to the surfice they both said"how are we going to get out of here now"
fliey started flapping his wings and he took off. flannel grabbed onto fliey."look theres an island over there" fliey said.
all of a sudden there were lots of chao flying over to the island.out of nowhere a voice said"go over to that island where it is safe". it was cheese 2.

chapter 5..........the dark chaonapper
"helppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp!!!!!!!!!!!!"flannel said.
"i better land on the island where i can tell everybody"fliey said.
the water disserpeared and the houses were back to normal"wheres the water gone" fliey said
then the chao landed back on the island."now that were wierd"cheese 2 said."someone must have made it happen".
"EVERYCHAO FLANNEL HAS BEEN CHAONAPPED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"fliey shouted.
at that moment another chao flew over. it was a fountain chao. "its spicy"cheese 2 said.

chapter 6...........the new chao
every so often they hold a meeting in the island hall. this time they set a quest to find flannel and who chaonapped him. suddenly something crashed through the window. it had to be a new breed of chao. it had a purple star above its head. it had a green head and it was wearing a red dress with a black belt. usally chao dont wear cloth's but this breed does.
"i am the emporess of the mou wou chao" it said
it soon dissapeared. "what was that"spicy said.
"a new breed of chao"fliey suggested.
"if you listend it said it was the emporess of the mou wou chao"cheese 2 said."i have never heard of them and i dont know anyone who does"
"look that mou wou chao thing is heading that way so lets follow it"fliey said.
"put your hands up if you think we should find flannel"cheese 2 said
lots of chao put there hands up."put your hands up if you think we shouldent look for him"cheese 2 said.
nochao put there hand up"i hereby declare a search" he said.

chapter 7....,.....the search for flannel
the chao flew off following the emporess. they flew on and on and on nowhere to land. the tired wings on the chao carried flapping for days and days weeks and weeks. will the chao ever make it? a month had gone. nothing to eat. nothing to drink. there was a big silence. suddenly spicy shouted"LOOK OVER THERE!!!!!!!!!!THERES LAND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
just a few days later the tired chao landed on a big pile of fruit. they all scoffed the fruit up. and ran into a hole."wow"the chao said.
this was the mou wou chaos hidden base."everychao get a jet pack so we can get to other places quicker"cheese 2 whispered.
the chao snuck through the base without being caught. the chao made it to the dungeons where the sad flannel sat. BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! the chao had set an alarm off. the mou wou had them cornered. the only way out was to fight.

chapter 8............the fight
"lets fight are way out of this"cheese 2 said
so the chao started to fight the mou wou chao. it was a very hard fight even for cheese 2 who can get to the semi-final in the super class of chao karate. the chao had been fighting for hours and hours. they wanted to go to sleep but they caried on fighting. some of the chao were chucked in the dungeon including fliey. suddenly a big force knocked the chao strait back to there island.

chapter 9..........the escape
it was dark, wet and smelly in the dungeon. but happy (in this story he is baby chao)new a way out. when happy was a baby he was very small so he could slip through the bars. happy slipped through the bars. there was one problom. he didn't know where the keys were. he looked everywhere in the base. the keys were nowhere to be seen. where were the keys? and no if you think the keys were outside the base they weren't. just outside the dungeon there were two light switch things. flannel had seen one of the mou wou chao pressing one of them to turn the lights off. so happy hit the other switch and the bars lifted up. happy then smashed the switch so nochao could close it again. BEEP!!!!!!! BEEP!!!!!!!"oh dear" flannel said

chapter 10...........the second fight (this chapter's quite small by the way)
this fight was different to the last one for 2 reasons. the first reason the mou wou chao were sliding on there bum. and the second reason it wasn't even a fight. it was a runnaway. they got to the base entrance and they trashed the jet packs ecept one for flannel. the mou wou chao couldn't chase them because flannel had noticed that they didn't have wings.

chapter 11..........back on the island
about five minuites later the trapped chao landed back on the island."were safe"flannel said.
that day everychao did what they normaly did. then there was a power cut. the whole island went black. suddenly there was a rumbling. next thing an island joined to there island. the chao didn't worry because it was an island that was near there island. if you walked down the other island there was another island. the power cut went off."it must of been an earthquake"cheese 2 said
the power came on again. the earthquake had joined the three islands togther.

chapter 12...........the spinelers
the chao heard a screeching noise."its coming from the water"a chao said
.then the island was closed in by millions of spinelers. spinelers were big rabbit like thing with a spiky shell and long teeth. all the chao were worried. the spinelers closed in on them. the spinelers ran at the chao. there was no way out of it. or was they? the chao were to scared to think but fliey knew a way out"everychao fly"he said.
so every chao started flieing and the spinelers ran into each other. all the chao were safe thanks for fliey.

chapter 13............REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!!!
the chao landed back on the island. spicy saw something jetting towards them. it was a mou wou chao. "we have come for revenge" it said
cheese 2 had leveled up on power so he thought this fight would be easier then he saw how much mou wou chao there was and he thought this fight would be much harder. all the chao were fighting even the chao off the other two islands. they put all of there effort into the fight. but the mou wou chao were to good for them. suddenly the twins just powered up the mou wou chao were just to weak for the twins. soon they curled up in a ball"EARTHQUAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"the twins yelled.
they wiped out all of the mou wou.

chapter 14............the awakening
the chao heard a rumbling
. they wondered what it was. they heard it again. "what was that" a chao said.
"i am the ultimate beast nochao can destroy me” said the thing
it was dark and the chao were scared “we will destroy you” said the twins
“you try” said the thing
“everychao can destroy an ugly thing like you” said a random chao
lots of mini versions of him came out. There were more of mini dudes than of the mou wou chao. “we’ll destroy you” said the twins

chapter 15……………….the battle
the chao started to fight him. It was a hard battle. Will the chao win or will thing win? Spicy went up to them him but he got whacked strait to the mou wou chao island. Same with cheese 2. that happened until there were 2 chao left. Just 2 chao to defeat one giant monster. Them chao were fliey and flannel. The twins curled into a ball. “EARTHQUAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” they yelled
but the thing just whacked them out of the way. Luckily fliey grabbed onto flannel and they went back to the ground. They then decided to destroy the mini dudes, who were very easy. Meanwhile the chao that got whacked to mou wou chao island flew back to there island where the thing is. They all attacked at once, which put him off, while the twins used earthquake.
“EARTHQUAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”The twins shouted.
All of a sudden there was an explosion. The thing dropped to the ground with a hole strait through it. The chao worked together to push it into the water.

Chapter 16…………….the escape from the sea
While the chao were pushing the thing into the sea the twins weren’t there. The twins were in things belly. Fliey was knocked out in the water but flannel was swimming. He grabbed fliey as he swum to the top. Flannel swam out of the thing and he saw loads of enemies swimming. There were lots of spinelers trying to attack him but he just kicked them out of the way. There were mou wou chao everywhere. There was a bunch of jet packs at the bottom. Flannel got them and set them off when they were on the mou wou chaos backs so they flew off. there were them mini things who just sank to the bottom so flannel just ignored them. He got to the top of the sea but flannel fainted. Fliey got back up and he flew with flannel back to the beach and they were safe.

Chapter 17……………the party
“lets have a party” shouted cheese 2
“yeah” shouted the other chao
so the chao started partying all day and all night. it was a great party. Cheese 2 gave awards out to all the chao and an extra special award to the twins for defeating the thing and the mou wou chao. Or had they?
Is this really the end of the mou wou?
The end!!!!!!!!!!
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