The Otherkind: Rebirth

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Re: The Otherkind: Rebirth

Post by NachoThePikachu » Thu Apr 16, 2015 3:31 am

Diligently, Koinu took down notes from the teacher. Her head was tilted slightly as she processed what it was that she wrote. Though slightly confusing, she figured it would be easier to understand later. Her ears, perked up contently, twitched slightly at little sounds she heard.
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Re: The Otherkind: Rebirth

Post by TriertStrikesBack » Sat Apr 18, 2015 9:05 pm

Is it too late to join?
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Re: The Otherkind: Rebirth

Post by EvilPinkamina » Sat Apr 18, 2015 9:10 pm

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Re: The Otherkind: Rebirth

Post by bufu12 » Sun Apr 19, 2015 3:54 am

Mind if I join?

Name: Crow
Specie: Avian
Age: 17
Sex: Male
Personality: Quiet, a bit unfriendly, careless, brave, and sneaky
Bio: Crow had a hard time growing up when he was child in the city of Fredule. When his parents moved into Fredule, Crow's wing started to appear when he was asleep. His wings were white when they appeaed which caused the town people to be scared of him because they thought God sent his angels to wipe out humanity. The town people threw rocks and other objects at him hoping they can kill the angel before he kills them. Crow couldn't handle the torture he was being dealt with and left Fredule for a couple of years. Those years he left Fredule caused his personalities to change as well as his wings. His personalities soon turned into negative and his wings turned black, he started to only care for about himself now. Crow moved to another town where he could find a place to live and go to school. He was able to find a school that accepts different species, however, due to his negative personality he started to commit crimes without anybody knowing.

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Re: The Otherkind: Rebirth

Post by Tobi » Wed Apr 22, 2015 8:25 pm

((I'm gonna ignore how 2 stock photo people have or have tried to join, but bufu, I have a few comments on your character and idk if pinka agrees or not, but it's just things that I noticed when reading it.

1). You make it sound like your character just got random wings, since the town seems to be unaware of otherkind features being an actual thing. Not sure if that was intentional or not.

2). Your wings do not only grow later on, which I think might be acceptable, but they also change colors with your personality?? Wings don't do that last time I checked.

But again, if Pinka is fine with it, nvm this post.))
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