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Season two
Episode 11- The walk

Tower somewhere far away
"Master, i have the report you wanted." A normal dark chao said as he put down a stack of paper's near a desk. "Sit down, id like to tell you something." A sillohuette said to him. "What is it." " You see, those paper's you put down are important. They are a vital part of my plan."
"What plan?" "My plan of chao domination, look at this." The sillohuette said as he grabbed a remote, bringing down a flat computer screen from the ceiling. "Local chao destroy evil robot. Heroic chao save station square from giant metal parrot." "All of these, my interest on them started when i heard they took down omochao." "Omochao?" "Yes, he was to help me in my domination role, he turned on me after my plans didnt involve his vision aswell.
You see, Omochao had been in control of the 7 chaos emeralds aswell as the master emerald. When the chao had been able to use the power agaisnt him as they grabbed the emeralds aswell. Omochao was beaten. He is now being kept in robot jail.
Regardless, if we want to know more about these chao, we'll need to observe them closely. Tell the the dynamite squad to destroy the wall. We need to invite these chao with us."

Dark garden
Edge had been left behind in the dark garden while the other seven chao had gone to station square's fair. Edge had been playing by himself with the garden's ball. As he kicked the ball towards the walls of the dark garden pool. Both had blown up, with flowing debris heading towards Edge. As he dodged the rocks that went flying, he was able to see chao walking on the air from where the walls broke.
Then when one of them went towards the small tombstone on the island in the pool. He had pressed both of the tombstone's eye. Revealing ground that had been disguised by air.

Station Square Fair
As Edge arrived to the fair, he rounded up all the chao he could find. Alpha, Manic, Hawkeye, and Delta had all been gathered up by Edge. Edge explained what he had seen, but the only look that the rest had given him had been of shock and disbelief.
"You mean to tell us, that the walls in the dark garden broke down, and you saw chao walking in the air and poked the eyes of a tombstone thus showing that the air was secretly hiding ground." Alpha had said. "This all seem's like too much, even for the writer of this story to come up with." Hawkeye said as a cow from nowhere fell atop him, remember Hawkeye i am the writer. As the cow walked away from crusing Hawkeye, Delta had began to speak. "Well i believe him, why dont we just go to the dark garden for a second. Ill go get the rest of the dark chao and we'll meet you there."

Dark garden
As the 8 dark chao walked back into their garden. They could only stare in horror at the sight of the destroyed dark garden. The giant tree with a cage that Lulu trapped Delta in, had snapped in half. The tree fruit's that once fed the dark chao, all destroyed by rocks. "Who did this to you!!!" A crying Lulu said as she grabbed the broken cage. "Alpha what do you suppose we do now." Sonia said as she spoke to Alpha. "We follow the ground that lie's beyond the rock's. Maybe if we go far enough, it can explain all thats going on." Alpha said as he grabbed what few tree fruit that was still eat able from the destroyed tree's. With that, the 8 chao climbed the rocks. Showing the barren land that lied beyond the garden.

The end
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Season two
Episode 12- The seemingly never ending path that always seem to have no ending.

The plains beyond the dark garden
As the 8 chao began walking beyond the dark garden, most of the chao had already begun to drop asleep due to fatigue. The one's left awake had to carry the tired one's on there back, some had to carry two at a time. "When does this end." Jestaq asked Alpha as she had been on Manic's back. "I dont know Jestaq, even though were not being beamed on by the sun do to the sky of the dark garden. Were still tiring out from walking, i think its time we set up camp somewhere.

With that said they stopped by at a nearby forest, the pitch black of night with only the shining light of the moon gave the chao there light to be able to pitch the tents. They had been watched this entire time by a hidden chao disguised by leaves.
"Ok boss what do you want me to do now." A lime green chao with a stump hat had said talking into a walkie talkie. "Leave the camera there to observe them. But send out the ninja's." With that the stump hat chao left from the forest.

From nowhere, 4 two tone yellow dark swim chao appeared from the tree tops. "This is what the boss wants us to be rid of." One said. "I guess. We'll have to drag them back to the city, then to the tower." Another had said.
As the four spread out, they each picked a target.

With that done, Delta had woken up with the sound of the ninja's running about. He went to wake up Edge, Hawkeye, and Lulu. "Ok guys, i dont know what happened just now. But ive been hearing things in the tree's. I woke the 3 of you up to make sure nothing is out of order." As the four looked around in the forest, each had been ambushed by one of the ninja's

Edge's ninja
Edge was the first to be ambushed as he split apart from the group. The ninja came from the tree tops and landed atop of Edge's head, pulling his jester's and causing him to fall backwards. "Oh, so i guess Delta was right about something off in the forest." Edge said as he jumped towards the ninja. The ninja saw this coming and grabbed Edge's hands, both had flipped. But only Edge was sent flying towards a tree. As the ninja dashed towards Edge, Edge grabbed the ninja by his feet as switched places with him. The ninja had been slammed agaisnt the tree. With that he fled.

Hawkeye's ninja
Hawkeye aswell had left seperated from the group. With the ninja attack from the ground itself. "Well, for once Delta isnt so much of a lunatic after all."
"Flashback"
"Everyone hide, there are bulls coming to the dark garden."
"Flashback"
"Everyone run away, there's a giant bird in station square."
"Flashback over"
"Well besides that last one." The ninja chao had gone to kick Hawkeye in the sides continously. Hawkeye grabbed the chao by his arm and threw him towards a tree. "And now for something that hasnt been seen since season one." Hawkeye ran up and uppercutted the ninja chao. He escaped by the tree routes.

Camp
As the two returned to the camp, neither saw Lulu or Delta anywhere in the camp. "Hawkeye did you see either of the two return." A panicked Edge had said. "No, you think they were taken away by the ninja chao." "If they were, wouldnt they have taken the rest of the chao." Edge said as he looked in the tents for the other 4. "They were taken. Hawkeye, we'll have to continue on. Hopefully we can find the rest of the chao if we go through the forest." The two said as they gathered the camping supplys.

The tower
"Yes Edge, run right into my domain."

The end
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Season 2 Finale
Episode 13- The drill

The forest
As Edge and Hawkeye jumped from tree to tree to reach the chao that were taken in there sleep. They came across ninja after ninja chao in there path. With there teamwork they had been able to dispatch each ninja flawless.

They reached the end of the forest, the tree's had stopped, the plains had shown. But not far from where they were they had seen a small light from the exit of the forest. The two ran towards the light, deeper and deeper, but being watched aswell.

Underground the plains
A tunnel had been built and following the two chao. Inside the tunnel was a giant drill that had been following the chao since the forest. "Ok, most of the chao have been captured. Finish the job and bring these two back to the tower along with the rest of the chao in the containment. Whatever you do, dont let the chao out of the drill." A monitor within the drill said. "Has that ever been a problem for me boss." A Yellow chao with a bucket hat said.

Surface
The two had been getting closer to the light, they still werent able to determine what the light itself was. But as Edge had tried to grab his binoculars. The drill from the ground attacked, the surfacing had made Hawkeye and Edge become seperate from eachother. As the yellow chao came out he introduced himself.
"Hello there, my name is Buckethead." "Well thats a pretty obvious name dont you think." Edge had told him. "Of course not, its not like there's some person who actually wears a bucket for a head in real life. I mean with that look he'd have to play some kind of instrument like guitar to actually hide the fact he's wearing a bucket." Hawkeye remembred something. "Actually there is someone like that already." He pulled out a picture of the muscian Buckethead. "Wow, and i thought this look was unique, regardless PREPARE TO DIE!!!"
He returned to his drill and dug underground. From the tunnels he had been able to launch surprise attacks on the two. "Well Edge, any plans?" "Yes, just one and it might work." With that he took out a box. It had been chaos 0 brain from when they accidently killed him. "Ok chaos come back to life. Anytime now"
5 minutes later
"I wonder what happened to the drill guy."

Underground
Buckethead had been asleep in his drill.

Surface
"Oh i know!!! Water!" When Edge said that, chaos 0 had regained his form. "Glurb Glurb (When i get my hands on those chao i swear ill... where am i?)." "Chaos 0, we need you to flood the tunnels Buckethead has made." "Blub (You killed me, and you expect me to help you.)" "Well... yeah! Your our guardian. Its in your job name to protect us." "Blub Glurb Glurb( I should have applied at Dippin dot's)."
With that, chaos extended his arms into the tunnels. A few seconds passed by before the holes that Buckethead had made were shooting up like geysers. And in one hole, the drill machine itself was sent flying. "This isnt the end!!!" Buckethead ejected himself from the drill. Shooting himself towards the light. The machine had fallen in a geyser letting it land slowly. From the machine had been the 8 chao taken last night. With the story of what Edge and Hawkeye had told the rest, they couldnt understand what was keeping them away from the light. Meanwhile someone else was having other plans

Filler Dark garden
As Filler Edge had been playing in the dark garden with no one around. The sillohuette figure had appeared, away from Filler Edge sight of course. He found the chaos emeralds along with the master emerald in the tree. They had been hanging as though they were decorations.

Plains, chao camp
As the 8 had all been asleep. The sillohuette was able to extract energy off of Edge's hands. He stored what he obtained within a cube.

Robot Jail, Omochao's cellar
"Do you remember me Omochao." The sillohuette said to him. "Its you again. What do you want." "Your support..." He showed Omochao the emeralds he obtained. "You expect me to help you." "No, which is why ill have to shut you down."

Tower
At the lab, Omochao was reprogrammed to be obediant to the sillohuette, but his memorys of the chao had remained. His idea's of a robot chao empire were removed. The emeralds given to him reverted him to his monster like form. With that he went atop the tower. And with a yell, he said. "IM BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

To be continued...
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Filler 7-Return of the neutral garden
Note: All chao in these fillers are not from the filler episodes. They are from the story episodes. Yes the characters in Filler/Story are different. The timeline in this story is during after the dark chao left the garden, The neutral chao entered.

Chao lobby
"2 days and no attack on station square by some random monster, lets go visit the dark garden and see if somethings wrong." Dingy said as he lead the neutral garden to the dark garden.

Dark garden
"This explains it." Audrin said pointing to the broken rocks. "Well lets follow the rocks, it may lead to something." Dingy said as the chao left the garden.
"Dingy look, mini car's. You think they were left here for us." Dash said as he found the cars around the garden. "I dont know Dash, too many plot devices already, so i say we take them." With that said, the chao drove towards the light they saw far away.

City of evil
The chao were amazed by the sight of the city. "It looks like las vegas, but only with chao theme's. Neon colors, fruit bars, giant slot machine, but they only spit out rings." Chaosky said as they entered the city. A flying mechanical chao that resembled omochao, only with grey coloring had come to greet the 8. "Welcome to CoE, otherwise known as city of evil. In here you will find many great things. But its all members only, so come with me."

Inside a casino
"Please pledge your loyalty to this giant hand print machine. Doing so will make you part of the evil chao army.....and 10% discounts on all games!!!!" The machine said as it flew away.
"Sounds good to me, Tar come on lets pledge our loyalty then go gamble." Tetra said as she and Tar placed there hands in the machine. But as Tar put his hands in, a warning went off.
"NEUTRAL CHAO DETECTED, SQUADS A,V,I GATHER AND ATTACK." The machine said. Audrin jumped at the machine and swiped his hand. He knew the incoming dark chao would attack any non dark chao. So he grabbed a few items from his bags.
"Ok so, Most of you will have to use these." Audrin had given the other chao a half fish, and eggshell helmets. The squads ran in and began to question them.
"Ok, we detected neutral and hero chao in here. Explain now." The squads demanded.
"There arent any of those chao here. Were all evil dark chao, just like you guys." Audrin lied.
"Explain those chao's colors then." He said as he pointed to Chaosky, Heavens, And dingy.
"Its sad, very sad indeed. You see the terrible terrible truth is ....there all ugly!!!" Audrin said as he broke down crying. Heavens whispered in his ear. "Remind me to kill you later."
"Oh well.... were sorry to hear there ugly. Please, carry on and enjoy the casino." The squads vanished in a puff of smoke.
"Well what are you guys waiting for. Lets go play in the casino." Audrin said. Heavens recently learning about the term hammer space, grabbed a random mallet and hit Audrin's head.
"I am not ugly!" Heavens said as the chao left to play.

The end
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these are really good
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Notice

Season 3-City of evil

Long ago, the first generation of dark chao was born. From that generation a child of pure evil had been born. Due to his Monotone Color, he was shunned from the rest of everyone else. He took control of this generation. But the garden was too small. He relocated over to far away, to where there was nothing. He built a city from his own hands. He would start an empire soon. He knew that no one could follow him. He left the way hidden. As if there was nothing more then sky beyond the dark garden.
Year's later, the devil chaos chao knew his competition would be immense. He proceeded to take out anyone who might prove a threat. Only to have a new one come up. He know's that the chao want answers. But he's been watching them for a long time aswell.......
The Chaocalypse has begun!!!!!!!!!


Season 3 begins Saturday
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I can't wait
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Season 3
Episode 1-Welcome to the jungle
The city
The 8 dark chao arrived at the outskirts of the area, as they walked towards the city they could only fear the worse for what may come. As the 8 reached the zone they had entered the city.
"This place looks like los angelas with a dark chao theme, i mean look at how neon the lights are." Alpha had said. It was true, the city of evil had been a huge city similar to los angelas. "Welcome to the city of evil." A mechanical chao similar to omochao appeared to them.

"Follow me to gain acess to the city and join the army. Please remember all neutral chao will be turned into slaves.....and all hero chao will have to wash the dishes."

Room with the machine
"Please swipe your hand through this machine, to gain acess to the many features of the army. You will be able to operate machinery, seige, and even be able to have 10% off all chao fruit bar snacks."
As the 8 chao left the room with the hand swiping machine, they were inside of the operation now. Outside in the main casino of the city, the sports show that was on t.v switched to a live broadcast from the chao who had appeared to be the general of the army.
"Hello there followers, we hope you enjoy your stay here. Remember, we go to war in 5 days with all hero and neutral chao. And lets make an attempt to capture station square."
"So, thats there plan now isnt it. Ok everyone the plan is simple." Alpha explained as the 8 gathered by the arcade.
"If there idea is to take control of station square and fight the other two gardens. We'll have to put a stop to it."
"But how?" Asked Edge. "Simple, we learn all about this army from the inside, then we during the army fight we get the commander to pull a idiotic move that causes the army to fail, the when the army falls. The dark chao forces will be recovering, giving us plenty of time to defeat the general and save this world." Alpha explaed. "And if we fail." Asked Delta.
"We die trying!"

Tower
As the mechanical chao entered the room. The devil chaos chao came out of his sillohuete. "Master Patches, the deed you requested has been done. All chao data succesfully copied." "Excellent work....omochao, you can take off the paint now." "As you wish." At that point, the grey coloring around the chao had left the chao, revelaing it to be omochao. "Good, i can finnaly stop talking like the robot I was." "Omochao, remember if you betray me again. I remove your on button and turn you off.........COMPLETLY!!!!"

The end
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Season 3
Episode 2-The Past 1/3

Dark Garden, 10 years ago
A Young Patches is overlooking the dark garden and all of its chao, he see's the other seven chao in his garden. At this time he can see how the dark garden is only seperated from the rest of dark world by only a wall of rocks. When chao evolve they are allowed to leave the confines and live the rest of there life with whoever they choose as there mate. Unfortionatly, the recent batch of eggs only had 3 female chao and 5 male chao. Meaning two of them would have to remain mateless. As the evolution ceromony was incoming, none of the female chao had chosen Patches, mostly due to his weird monotone color, causing him to be a neon red. Along with Patches, a fully yellow chao had been alone during this ceromony.

As they had been watching the rest leave. Chao from the hero garden and neutral had been visiting, one certain hero fly chao noticed the two atop there tree. She broke free from the rest of the chao in her group and met the two dark normal chao.
"Hi there, im Liliac from the hero garden Class at kindergarten." Patches and his friend had introduced themselves aswell. "Im Patches and this right here is Buckethead. Because the dark garden doesnt have as much funds as the other two. So regardless bucket is still wearing his eggshell to make-up for it."
"Sad to hear, anyways every ceremony the hero garden and neutral garden come to this place. As far as i know that is, we just got done in the neutral garden and we've finished a while ago back in the hero garden. Sadly it was a 3 boys five girls count. Meaning i had been left behind while the rest left to live there life in the hero gardens outhouse." "Funny, It was a five girl, 3 boy count here. After the ceremony, wanna ditch this group and go with me and buckethead out in the forest." Patches asked the hero chao. "Sure why not, ill even tell my friend who got left behind too."

We all got left behind, we let it all slip away.
The end
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Season 3
Episode 2-The Past 2/3

The forest of Dark chao
The group of chao had left the place. Lilac brought a friend over, she had been a swim/run hero chao named Abby.
"Well here we are, the forest of dark chao. This is where all the dark chao go with there mates to live peacefully." As the four had been skipping along the forest merrily. They saw the other chao's with there own mates. Flying through the tree's, racing through the forest. Eventually they reached a huge spring, full of dark swim chao.

"This place is beatiful." Lilac told the others. As the four left to swim with the rest.
"Who do you suppose those are." Two chao from the top said, the two had been devil chaos chao on the side of the springs. "Well, we cant allow our own kind to be involved with hero chao. Were gonna have to do something about this." The two devil chaos chao left to hit a switch. Draining the pool from the springs.

"Whats going on." Asked Lilac as they had been going towards the drain. "Lilac grab my hand, buckethead do something about abby." Bucket realized there was only one way they would be able to stop themselves from being sucked in by the huge drain. He grabbed his egg helmet and threw it at the drain. Giving them enough time to leave from the pool.

"Dark chao, there are two hero chao in the forest. Find them and bring them to us." At that moment, the entire forest appeared to be attacking the group of them. Flying chao and running chao had been attacking the sky and ground. All of them. Buckethead real face had been that of a dark power chao. He broke through the tree's and threw them at the other dark chao. Eventually, they reached the trip the hero garden class had been having.

"What are you two doing with these two dark chao, have you learned nothing from your classes? The dark chao are our complete opposites. The only reason were in this garden is to see how the dark chao leave this garden! Now i want you two to return to the hero garden." The adult chao had said to the two girls.
Lilac began to speak up for the two. "How can you say that about them. They took us into the forest itself and showed us all around. And when for some reason everything went horrible. They were able to save us and bring us back out here."
"Little girl, these dark chao dont know about dark and hero differences. Now GO TO THE HERO GARDEN." With that, Lilac and Abby both left the garden.

"As with you two, i dont care how good you may look like on the outside. You two are dark chao, conversing with hero chao are strictly agaisnt the rules here. If you ever come to the hero garden, you'd better bring an army of some sorts."

Ten years later at the tower
"So buckethead, 4 days until we go to war with the hero garden. Lilac, i still havent forgotten about you, we are going to go there, and make sure we bring you back to the forest." "Ya know, I probally had a chance with Abby. You think we'll find her where abby is."
"Yes buckethead, we'll find them there. Whever they are."

I come towards you, as i close my eyes, i feel it all slipping away.
The end
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Season 3
Episode 2- The Past 3/3

Dark garden
Patches and buckethead seemed to be doomed to never leaving the garden with any mates. Since the two hero chao had gone. Patches remembered what the adult chao had said. "If you ever come to the hero garden, you'd better bring an army of some sorts." Patche's realized there was only one way to be able to overcome the hero garden. He would have to take control of the dark garden before he could do anything else. "Buckethead, if we ever want to see those hero chao again. We'll have to take control of this land first. We should start simple first." "How's that?" "Well remember the devil chaos chao who were by the springs. If we can get rid of them we should be able to take control of this place.

Forest of dark chao
As they walked to the eerie forest, they were greeted with spits, stomps on the feet, and hazings. They reached the springs that had been full again, with bucketheads eggshell on the sides. "You two are back again? What do you want." "We want a battle to see who controls the dark chao completly." Patches told them. "HA, if you think you'll be able to beat the two of us, you are horribly mistaken." "Are you scared of having your position in danger?" "Scared? We dont feel like wasting our time with the dark chao. But if it'll get rid of you so be it."

The plains
"Well, a monotone chao with a yellow chao. Easy victory...." The two devil chaos chao launched towards the two, attacking from the sides. The two had taken a step back before they were hit. "Nothing but a quick reaction, lets see you handle this!!!"
The flame from the two's head began to grow in size. They shot towards the two, both hit succesfully.
"Had enough? I knew it would be too easy." As they turned there backs, buckethead went flying towards one with his head. Punching, kicking, and finishing off with a headbutt. One of the dark chaos chao were sent flying. The other had to deal with Patches.
"You ruined my chance of living here, now ill ruin you!!!" Patches grabbed the devil chaos chao, and hit him with a bat, removing his tail wings and legs.
"Now i assume you know who leads this place." Patches said as the two devil chaos chao fled. "Only one thing to do now." Patches waited for a while until he himself was eventually turned into a devil chaos chao. Buckethead was able to buy a real bucket. Making his eggshell clog up the springs.

Springs
"As my first order, we shall build a city of dark chao, a city where all dark chao can live. Far away from this forest!!! Who will join me?" The chao from the forest left to join Patches with Buckethead.
"Here i come hero garden, just wait a while. Ill be joining you all soon."

Ten years later at the tower
Patches was still observing the dark chao city from the top of his tower. Remembering the reason he was going to go to war with the hero garden. "Still four days to go huh Patch?" "Yes, four days until this ten years of work comes together."

I ignore you, as i close my eyes. I feel it all slipping away.

The end
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I like the part about there history it's really good
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Season 3
Episode 3-Under there nose 1/2

City of evil-Main street at 6:00 am
The 8 chao grouped up early in the morning to begin there plot to take down the army from the inside. Both had made two groups to gather any type of information possible. Group 1 was made up of Alpha, Manic, Jestaq, and Hawkeye. Group two was formed of Edge, Sonia, Lulu, and finnaly Delta. With the groups set up they split

Libary-6:30 am
After they couldnt use the computer lab due to group 1 already being there. They had to go to the next source of info. Since the group decided that the libary would hold the info they needed. They had decided to use there time to take a coffe break at the cafe.

Outside the Computer lab- 25 minutes earlier at 6:05 am
The computer lab wasnt far away from the main street. It had only been guarded by two dark run/power chao. The only weapons they had were nothing besides harpoon with electricity slithering around it. "Ok guys here's the plan." While Alpha had given the plan. The guards had there own conversation.
"How did we get demoted anyways?" "Did you forget what happened at the convention last year."
Flashback
At the convention of guards all around the city. The two had went over to the computer lab. One dropped his harpoon, causing it to hit an electrical wire. Causing the place to black out. "Well folks, because of the black out. Todays scheduled nu metal band has been canceled. Also you are asked to evacuate the premises before-"
"Mushroom cloud explosion"
Flashback over
"Oh yeah, well this is an easy job i guess. I mean the computer lab is too boring for anyone to really go into anyways." Riley told his partner. "You know what Buck. I love this job. Buck? where are you?"
Buck had been grabbed by Jestaq who was flying him over the city. "Put me down before i have to use my mini harpoon on you." Jestaq saw a nearby pool to drop him in. "Ok then"
As Buck was dropped by Jestaq, he waited until Jestaq left his sight to activate a hidden jetpack. "Its finnaly time to use this new thing ive been hearing about." He said as he flew away.
Riley had been falling out of the sky by Jestaq's hands. "Give me back my harpoon. And let go of my ears too!" Jestaq saw the pool again. "As you wish." As Riley had been falling, he decided to use his jetpack aswell. Only to find a letter in its place. "Dear Riley, I hope you can forgive me but i stole your jetpack when you were in your flashback so i could have a back up one cause at the moment. Some random dark chao has me in its feet. Goodbye." He read as he fell into the pool.

Inside the Computer lab 6:25 am
"Ok guys, since we're in. Lets get started on this." Alpha said as group 2 came in. "Sorry guys, this place is ours." Group 2 left in search of another place to search for information. Alpha had been able to log in to the computers main data logs. "Check this out, they got information for every chao in this city. Even that guy who drives the ice cream cart outside the libary.

Ice cream cart
"What can i say, everyone in the city's important."

Computer lab 7:00 am
The chao had each grabbed a computer and began to search. "Check this out, they have info on us too." Hawkeye said as he read the files. "Woah, they have a huge file on Alpha too. Every single accident he's caused in station square, even that one time that he got lost in a different story too." "Just who's getting all this data on us."

Dark garden
The trash can from season one had a hidden camera in the front of it. (Didnt see that coming huh?)

Cafe at the libary 8:00 am
"So when are we gonna do something?" Asked Delta as he sat drinking coffe at the caffe. "Didnt Edge say that he was getting books on the place around here." Lulu said as Edge was coming back with a few books. Instead Edge only came back with more food from the caffe. "What? Its morning isnt it?"

Computer lab 8:30 am
The chao couldnt help but realize, but it had been true. Each file, each one a complete record of the daily dark chao's garden life. "Hey guys, look at this." Alpha said as he was clicking on a mystery file. A capsule rose from the floor. "Woah, ok if anything bad happens. We need Hawkeye to go in." "Why me?" "Because, you were voted most unpopular character in the recent character polls." "What character polls? I dont know all the fans we have. But im pretty sure im more popular then Delta." "No....he actually got more votes then you." "How? Only recently he started talking." "Yeah, but he's monotone. Everyone likes the rare chao. Now, IN THE MACHINE." As Hawkeye stepped in. The screen on Alphas computer changed to a megaman style type of game, with Hawkeye as the player.
"Guys? Get me out of here. Im cold!"

Will Hawkeye get out of the computer? Will Riley and Buck release whatever it is they intended to? And will group 2 ever get anything done!!!!!

"Wait a minute, there's never been a character pole." Hawkeye said from the computer. "No way was i going in that capsule, and i had few ideas on how to get out of getting in it." Said Alpha sitting on his chair.

The end
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Season 3
Episode 3- Under there nose 2/2

Tower-6:25 am
As Patche's was overlooking his city, he had gotten the message that the computer lab had been raided. "Guards, leave the
area. Let them find out what we have in store for them inside the lab. They'll be amazed by what i was able to come up with.

Computer lab-9:00 am
"I want the rest of you in here with me right now." Hawkeye demanded his group members. "Give us one good reason to." Alpha said sitting on his chair. "How else are you gonna acess the information terminals in here. Guys, where'd you go?" Alpha
and the other 2 entered the computer aswell. "We get the rest of the info, then we get out." Alpha said as they had been walking towards the terminals. "Ok so, four files. Everyone choose one and come back with any info you get."

Blue Terminal 10:00 am
Jestaq was off riding the connection rail to her terminal. She hadnt expected that on her way would be full of traps to stop her.
As she went along, there had been mechanical dark flying chao dropping themselves as bombs to throw Jestaq out of the connection rail to the terminal. On her communicator to the other 3 she had Alpha on the phone. "Whats up Alpha, know anything that can help me now?" "Jestaq, the terminal is located to your 3rd right." She saw that her upcoming 3 right was blocked off. "Im having a problem with that Alpha."

Silver terminal 11:00 am
Alpha went to his own terminal to search up what was hidden in his. He was able to pick up his file quickly enough to go help Jestaq. He hopped on the connection rail to the blue terminal and broke the 3rd right she had been having trouble with.
"Bring those files back, im gonna go help Manic.

Yellow Terminal 11:30 am
Manic had been racing with other dark running chao to the terminal. "I guess there are other guards in this place. You'll all fall the same way the other two did." Manic stopped in his tracks for a few seconds to let the other 3 get ahead. One stopped to look where Manic had gone, Manic had been atop his head the entire time. "Goodbye fail guard." The running chao had been thrown off the connection rail. He had went falling into the void of the seemingless never ending internet.
"Now just you" He saw that the two guards have dissapeared. "two...." Alpha had been in the connection rail right next to Manic. "I took care of those two other guards when you werent looking. They would have overpowered you. Anyways, take the file and get out. Im going to Hawkeye's terminal.

Red Terminal 12:30 am
Hawkeye's terminal was barely full of enemie's. A few bug andriods and mechanical chao guarding doors but eventually he reached the inside. While he walked towards the file in the middle of the room, a huge shadow began to darken the room "I suggest you leave.
Alpha meanwhile was on a rail trying to get to him. "I feel like the colors we've visited mean something. Blue, silver, yellow and red. But what could it mean." As he followed the carnage Hawkeye left behind. He reached the room with the file. "Hawkeye, you can be so unreliable sometimes." The shadow overtook Alpha now. When he looked behind him, he saw a giant spider android behind him.

"Lets dance spider." The spider had shoot its silk at Alpha, the silk was barely fast at all. He was able to dodge with no difficulty. Then another strand shot out nearly instantly. With only more coming out at slow speeds. "Fire!" With that he was able to light the silk strands on fire to go and attack the spider. Now with the spider burned he tried to see what he could use to destroy it. The terminals ceiling might be able to crush it completly.
As the spider shook off the fire, he proceeded to climb along the walls. Alpha shot a beam at the ceiling and waited until the spider to come. The spider took a unexpected turn and dashed directly to Alpha himself. Alpha shot the ceiling down and with precise timing. It splattered the spider. The file that was in the middle of the room had dissapeared.
"Everyone get out of the internet. Theres an exit at the red terminal. Meet me right here so we can leave."

Libary. 1:00 am
"Ya know, we still havent read anything." Lulu said as they had all still been sitting. "Im gonna go get a few books." Edge said as he left.

Tower
That was too close, it doesnt matter if they read those other files. What matters is that they didnt take the red file that had my information, omochao's blue file, the parrots silver file. And Bucketheads yellow file are all expendable atleast.

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Season 3
Episode 4-Dark files
2 days left
Libary
The four chao had finnaly read something. A pamphlet on the city itself. "You know this thing explains alot, it has a map on it. A huge description for each part. And this comes with a 5 dollar discount on all purchases in the libary!!! Wait right here." Said Edge as he left the group again. From that, group 1 had come inside the libary. "So guys, how much have you read." Alpha said as the files he had were in his arms. "Well all we read was just one pamphlet. But it helped." Lulu said handing Alpha her little book. "You mean from these few hours, all you did was read one book. We have 3 files from the internet and all you have is one pamphlet read." Alpha said as he kept yelling at group one.

Meanwhile at the Cafe
Edge had been going to the cafe to redeem his coupon, when he saw a giant turkey giving out coupons aswell. "Cool, 5 dollars off any turkey sub." As he went to redeem his coupon. The chao at the counter told him. "Were sorry but this coupon is outdated." With that said, the giant turkey began running. "Get back here giant turkey!!!"

Libary
"Ok so, lets start with our blue file." As Alpha opened it up, he saw photos of omochao inside of it. Pages of how his powers were increased with emeralds. And finnaly how omochao's first attack was foiled by the neutral garden. "Guys, why do you think there's so many files on omochao. We killed him didnt we?" Asked Alpha as he passed the folder to Jestaq. "It looks like whoever got this wants to bring omochao back. But isnt he imprisoned at the robot jail." Jestaq said.
"Well, lets read the next file." Alpha opened the yellow file showing that it had a familiar face. "Hey, isnt this that buckethead dude from our season finale?" "Didnt we get Chaos 0 to help us with him." Manic said, he also remembered something else. "Wait!!! where did we leave chaos 0."

Disco club
Chaos 0 is seen dancing at a disco with other chao. "How cool is it that the guardian god of all chao is dancing with us here." "I know, how do you think he got here?" Suddenly, Edge and the giant turkey crash in through the walls and start the brawl with eachother. "Take this giant turkey." Edge said as he grabbed the disco ball, he crashed it ontop of his head. Causing the glass to fly everywhere. The turkey grabbed a floor tile and smashed it on Edges head. Both kept fighting as they left the disco.
"What are we gonna use for a ball now?" Chaos 0 had an idea on what to do. He took out his brain, poked a few holes in it and put it at the ceiling. "But dont you need your brain." "Glurb glurb <You dont need your brain to feel the funk>" Chaos 0 said as everyone returned dancing."

Libary
"Ok so next file." As Alpha reached out to grab his file. The giant turkey began to smash Edge on the glass. With one more crash, the ceiling gave way and had the two fall on the two groups table. "The file is destroyed!!!" Alpha said as he grabbed the bent up and ripped silver file. "Dont worry guys, i'll be sure to kill this turkey." Edge said as they continued to fight. The fight streteched out to the hard cover section of books. The turkey grabbed Edge and body slammed him towards a book case. Causing the bookcases to fall domino style. One after another the bookcases fell until the turkey was trapped from running away. Edge rose from the bookcase rumble.
He grabbed a few books and started to throw them at him. "Take this!!!. Edger allen poe!!!" He screamed as he threw the huge books at the now trapped turkey. "Luis G abbadie, Robert Aickman, MARK TWAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He yelled as he threw books in a flurry. The turkey laid in his pile books. As Edge walked away. The turkeys hand rose from the book pile.

"So, any info you got about the place." Edge said as he sat in a chair beaten, and glass in his head. "Edge...get cleaned up!!!"
Alpha told him.

Later
"Ok so, ive decided on one thing. First of all, i read the files and found out alot of information about our enemies. But i have a strong fear that omochao somehow came back. Any suggestions." Alpha said as they were talking. "Well, i have one suggestion we could do." Sonia said as she read over her file copy. "And that would be?" Alpha asked her. "Think of it like this, if omochao is back he'd be somewhere hidden right. I see this creepy tower in the center of town. Maybe we should check that place out. After the war that is. If omochao is back he'll be used as a weapon for this war. If we can make the army fail. He'll be weakened, thus giving us the oppurtunity to destroy him again." "Good plan Sonia, but i can't help but feel like other forces are behind this." Alpha said as they walked out of the place.

Tower
"Good plan Sonia, but i can't help but feel like other forces are behind this." Patches saw as he kept pressing replay on the security camera. "There getting smart arent they?"

The end.
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Season 3
Episode 5-The Airship 1/2

City of evil
Huge flat screens had been placed all around the city, meaning big news was about to happen. "Dear chao, please remember that the airship departs of the hero garden tomorrow. When it does, The passengers must remember to take there jet packs and electrical harpoons. Failure to do so will result in certain injury's during the war." The Robot chao had said. As it left the general himself came and revealed himself to be a swim/power dark chao.
"Fellow chao, the time has come for us to be rid of the hero garden, our leader Patches has prepared us for this day. In hopes of us to be rid of the hero garden. Remember, there is no reason to be afraid!!!! We will win this war. And now a word from Patches himself." As the general left the room. Patches had come onto the screen.
"Chao, let me remind you of our time and effort spent building this city. Our civilization has adapted far. We shall make sure the exits out of the garden are blocked so that the airship may be able to fly to the gates of the hero garden itself. When we are up there, remember how they shunned you, remember how you were separated from them. That all ends tomorrow. That is all." The robot chao came back to the screen. "Please remember to put your items in the airship before leaving!!!"

From the libary
The chao had watched the announcement unfold. and realized there was only one who could help with the situation such as this. "We have to get chaos 0 back to us, where do you think he is?" Alpha said.

Disco
"Blurb (Woohoo party! party!" Chaos 0 said as they had been dancing in the club. The 8 chao had come onto the dance floor in an attempt to get chaos 0 on there side again. "Chaos 0, we are prepared to offer you something you cant refuse." Alpha told him. "We promise that after this is all over, we'll bring you back to the master emerald so you can live with Tikal again. And we also promise to give the emeralds back to knuckles so we don't ever have to bother you again. How's that sound." Alpha told chaos. "Blurb (Well good deal, but how will i be able to get down with myself when im trapped in the master emerald again?)" "You leave that to us. Now lets go!" They said as the 8 of them left the disco.

Airship loading decks
Edge and Delta had both been advised to stash Chaos 0 in the airship. Chaos had went into his watery form and put himself in a bottle of water. His brain was put in a box next to the water. As they reached the decks. Delta gone to put him in the 'Other' section of the storage. "Dont worry chaos, we'll come get you when we launch." Delta realized that knowing there luck.
Something horrible would happen and they would forget about chaos 0. He decided to stay with the box in the Airship. At that time, Edge got a message on his phone from someone in the casino. 'Come to the casino if you want a little back-up in taking down the army. Ill be the chao with a can over his head'

Casino
After leaving Delta at the loading decks, he reached the casino. The can headed chao had been hanging by the roulette table. "So, what do you want." Edge said as he took his chances. "Ill take a black odd number." As the ball was spun, the canned figure began to speak. "Don't you recognize the face of an old school buddy." The person lifted there can by a little to show his face. "I cant believe its you, you haven't appeared since season two!!!"

Who is the mystery figure? Will the war plan by patches be ruined? And what will happen with chaos 0, find out tomorrow!!!!!!!!!

The end
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Season 3
Episode 5-The Airship 2/2

Casino
As the the canned chao removed his helmet, it had been Star from the detention episode. "Star, why and how are you here???" "Well you see Edge, long ago we got a report from someone that the dark chao walls had been busted. The hero chao garden sent me in to make sure nothing bad happens to any other garden. You see, all along we knew that the dark garden walls had something beyond it. We made sure to tell no one to not jeopardize whatever may happen.
Which is why the other two gardens came together to flick the switch on all current garden children. At that time there weren't many, so you chao are the last remaining generation of new chao."

"How do you plan to stop the dark chao?" "We originally planned to send the hero protectors into this city. But when we found out that the eight of you were here. We decided to send the protectors outside the gate." "What gate?" Asked Edge. "You see, the garden entrances we have, well have been here for a while. But they were originally intended for the people who visited the garden. Any place beyond the garden for people were off limits. Things changed over time and it didn't even let chao go beyond there own garden." "What does this have to do with a gate?"

"The gate is the only thing stopping the dark chao from entering the hero garden. Each garden has a portal to send it to any other gardens. But its located high in the air, when we heard that they were building an airship they sent me in to stop it."
"How do we stop it?" "What do you guys have to help you?" "Information on the chao, food to last us for days, electric harpoons, jet packs.Oh yeah, the guardian god of all chao chaos 0." "What did you guys do to get him on our side?" A stumbled Star asked Edge. "Well....at first we killed him, then tikal who was our babysitter in that episode went insane and ran off without taking chaos 0 brain. We've had his brain with us since then."

Airship docks
As the army of airships began making final preparations, Patches came to speak to the troops. "Chao, it is a great day for chao as we go towards the gates to the hero garden. Remember, as we go in to attempt to take over the hero garden, remember to use the escape pod option in your jet packs for the chance things go wrong. Troops move out!!"
As the 8 dark chao boarded there own airship. Well 7 since Delta was still in the storage, they all began to start the plan. "Ok Edge, tell our pilots to start the airship!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
With that the airships left flying.
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Thats a relief, websites back up
Story continues friday
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Season 3
Episode 6-Surfacing 1/3

Dark protagonists airships.

As the airship began to take off into the the dark chao's moon, Edge could only say one thing, "Why are the ships heading towards the moon?" The pilot began to tell him, "That's no moon, thats our exit to the next world beyond this one." As the pilot flew the ship towards the moon following the rest of the fleet.

"Onwards, to victory!!!!" Yelled the pilot. As the fleet hit the moon, To the amazement of all the chao aboard, instead of dying in fire. They went through the move and found themselve's underwater.
"Where are we now?" Asked Edge. "Surfacing my good lad!!!" As the fleet rose, they had been at the mystic ruins. "Amazing, but how?" Edge asked as the fleet departed from the lake at the mystic ruins and left to station square.

"Ten years of planning, its all time to put it to work!!!" Patches said as the fleet arrived at station square.

"Citizens of station square, the City of evil has arrived. Realize this, when this is all over. You'll be at our knees!!!!" As the attack began, station square's police force began shooting at the airships.
"Remember, these are chao we are dealing with. Do not harm any."
"Yes, keep thinking that way and you'll see who succeeds. Release the dark chao foot troops. And play the song This day we fight by Megadeth on the loudspeakers. It seems to fit the mood of this.

The scene had been a mess of chaos, the police had no choice but to refrain from shooting the dark chao as each of them began to shock any type of help that arrived. On top of that the entire city had been outnumbered by the fleet of dark chao that had easily over run the city.
Station square had fallen to the city of evil.
"Buckethead, lay down the banner to show we conquered station square." "Oh sure, i havent appeared since the end of last season, its perfectly fine for me to appear putting this banner down on the place." The banner was laid,the city was there's.
"Troops, prepare yourselves to attack the hero garden next!!!" Patches said as he went to his own airship."

The end
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nice story Triert
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Wow I have lots of reading to catch up on. :surprise:
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Season 3
Episode 6-Surfacing 2/3

Fallen station square
The windows were cracked...children were crying....cry's of why heard throughout whats left of station square from the dark chaos attack.
"Woah, they really did a number on this place." Dingy says as his other chao friends walked throughout the ruins.
"I cant help but feel like our writer is only putting us here so he doesn't run out of characters." Said chaosky as they walked through the city. "Remember how we got here?"

Flashback
"Ok dingy, get all the chao and tell them to stow away in this ship. I heard we all get rewards if we get in this airship!!!"
Flasback end

"Oh yeah...." Chaosky said as the 8 chao headed off to the chao transponder. "Luckily, we don't have to be apart of this arc anymore."
As the 8 left the story and went back home. Patches came out to announce his plot to his following.
"My fellow dark chao, today is a glorious day for us as we have taken control of station square! But we wont stop here. I have plans on what to do to ensure a victory on the hero garden. You see, a long time ago we had a giant machine defeated at the dark garden. A battle so huge we all had been able to see it from the city itself. I present to you all, Omochao!!! Reborn and remolded to fit the needs of this war. I shall now hand him the microphone.
"Chao of the city of evil, tomorrow we fight for control of the hero garden. When we do, ill assure our victory." Omochao said as the dark chao army had been cheering, meanwhile in the crowd our 8 heroes had there jaws dropped so far to the ground. They had started to make holes. "Omochao's back? But how? We defeated him the put him in a impenetrable fortress for evil robots!!!" Edge said as he had been stuck in fetal position.

Flashback
Robot Jail, Omochao's cellar
"Do you remember me Omochao." Patches said to him. "Its you again. What do you want." "Your support..." He showed Omochao the emeralds he obtained. "You expect me to help you." "No, which is why ill have to shut you down."
Flashback over

"It doesn't matter now, not only do we have an army to stop. But now Omochao aswell." Star said as he had been planning. "Ok everyone. New plan!!!"
As Star took the group to the only remaining apartment complex that had still been standing. The new plan was devised.
"Ok so, here's the plan. Wheres chaos?" Star said as Delta handed him the box and the bottle of water. As chaos reformed, Star continued. "Ok so, Omochao is powered by the chaos emeralds right? And from what i saw from the satellite camera in the hero garden, he can also be defeated if the master emerald leaves him all together. What we need to do is have one of us make a head rush towards his body sometime during the fight. When that's done, the rest of us will go with our plan to take down the entire army all at once."
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can't wait for the next one please make it soon
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Season 3
Episode 6-Surfacing 3/3

Station square-Day 3 since the attack
"My Dark chao, now that we have rested and pillaged just about everything from this city. We are left with no other option then to continue this war. Everyone aboard your ships!!!"
As the fleet took off, one certain one had stayed grounded.

"Are you sure that taking the pilots out was a smart idea Edge?" Asked Delta. "Of course it is. We can send this ship into the other ones as they take out into the air. Now for the rest of our plan." They said as they walked away.

Meanwhile at Patches airship
"Has airship 515 been released yet?" Asked Patches to his generals in the airship. "No sir, we have yet to receive a return call from the driver of that airship. Wait, its on auto pilot. Airships 742,617,000,027 all report to to 515, its on auto pilot headed towards us."

With that said, all four ships had been able to destroy the airship. "Should we send our pet down there to deal with whoever tampered into our airships. That way we wont have to stop the assault." Patches general said. "Send it down there, now!!!"

Back at station square
"Ok so everyone, i found a way to get back to the chao lobby so we can warn all those hero chao at the garden. Hopefully we can reach them in time." Manic said as he was finishing up on the device. "Where did you become such a great engineer anyways Manic?" Asked Hawkeye.

Flashback
A young Manic is shown at kindergarten with blocks to play with. "Ok everyone, play with your blocks and let your imagination go wild!!!" The teacher said as she stepped out of the room. "Go wild she said?" As Manic said that, he began to play with his blocks until he somehow invented a flare gun out of it.

New's that day
"Local elementary school shut down due to incident with a chao baby, who had gone mad with a flare gun and was sent to a nearby juvenile center. We have breaking news as he somehow managed to make a tank and break out of the place." The new's reporter said.

Flashback end

"Anyways, Edge you stay here and make sure no one else is around to take the transponder, we'll come back for you later." Manic said as he and the rest of the chao left. "Wait up for me." Yelled Delta as he had been returning from the airship that was taken off earlier.

Later
"So you really think the author used me as a stock character since the other 6 chao have only 4 really good chao." Delta said as Edge nodded his head. "He also plans to have the other 2 unimportant chao have a important role sometime later, until then were the only two people like." Edge told Delta.
"So eventually i wont have much of a speaking role either?" "Yup, sadly Delta its the fate of all background characters who stole the show. Except for me, im Manics son making it ok for me to be one of the stars of the primary chao of this season, since the rest had no real storyline beside random adventures.

With that said, The two heard sounds coming from a deeper part of the city now in ruins. "Lets go check that out." The two said as they came closer to the noise. Cry's of "what is it" and "its throwing cars like dolls" were heard as the two chao came closer to the scene. Only one scream was heard from the beast who arrived to the city.

"Yeahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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great story triert
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