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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

Post by Triert » Sat Oct 17, 2009 7:29 pm

Season 3
Episode 7-Cartoon Physics

Station square ruins
From the screams heard, a beast appeared infront of the two chao. 3 horns raised from its head and a muscular appearance with its hind legs ready to attack the two.
"Any plan now Edge?" Asked Delta as the beast flung to there spot. "Run!!!" As the two began to flee the beast, he had thrown small cars at them. Finnaly, when they had reached a dead end. The beast did something unexpected. "Why did it light a match? Why is it going near that gas station???" Asked Delta. "Better question why are we still here?" As the beast threw the match, the gas stations explosion had caused debris to fly everywhere. Eventually causing the debris to trap the two chao in the chaos.

Patches airship
"General, have the chao been destroyed?" Asked Patches. "We assume so, the beast should continue to run free in the city and getting rid of any more problems we may face."

Station square ruins......errr Station square rubble
As both chao rose from the pounds among pounds of buildings. They needed a new plan. "Any idea's now Edge?" Asked Delta as they walked to the transporter. "The beast is a monster, but strangely. It was smart enough to know what would happen if it lit the gas station on fire. So that thing must have a brain somehwere." Edge told Delta. "And if it has a brain, then it can be beaten in only one way." "And that is?" Delta said. "Cartoon physics!!!!" Edge said as he pulled out a laptop. "Following this page on wikipedia, we can beat this monster with a few tricks." Edge said, he closed his laptop. "To the beast!!!!"

As the beast had been destroy any last buildings, it saw a bus driving away from the city. "Cartoon physics test 1. The cliff test." As the beast followed the bus, the bus had began to fly off a nearby ledge. As the beast continued to follow it. It was running in mid air until it realized it had nothing to walk on. As it fell towards the ground with thud. Edge and Delta appeared next to him. "Test 2, Hammerspace" Delta said as he grabbed a giant hammer from nowhere. Edge pulled his own out aswell. "Test 3, the coin test." "Why do they call it that Edge?" When Edge slammed his mallet on the beast, it became flat but unharmed. "I love that trick." As the beast reinflated the chao began running again.

The southwest american desert
"I think we've ran far enough for our next test. Test 4, the rock test." As the two chao stopped next to a mountain, Edge began to draw a road on the wall and the two continued to run. When the beast came he was stumped at how the two chao did such a thing. As he started chasing the two again the beast crashed into the rock. A hole appearned right next to the dazed and confused beast, out of the hole came out Delta and Edge. "My turn for physics!!!" Delta said. "test 6, the tree test, since were out in the desert a cactus will have to do." As Delta began to cut a cactus that had been near the beast, who had now regained conciousness and saw the cactus hit his head. With the cactus bouncing multiple times.

Back at station square
As the hole reverted them back at station square. A Very angry beast awaited them, full of cactus spikes and bandages on his body. "Test 7, the pin test." Edge pulled out a pin and sneaked behind the beast. As he poked the beast with the pin it was sent flying into the air.

Airships
As the beast had been sent high into the air, it began to come near the airship fleet. "General whats that in our radar?" Patches asked. "Im afraid thats our beast sir, but how did the chao send him back up here?" The beast was eventually ripped to shreds by a passing airship. "Sir...i think its time for us to face palm ourselves."

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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

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good story keep it up

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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

Post by Triert » Sun Oct 18, 2009 5:07 pm

Dramatic season 3 Five episode ending.

The Last Obstacle

It's a race to the hero garden for both sides of dark chao. Patche's and his army agaisnt the Dark garden. But will the hero garden open its gates to our 8 hero's? Will they reach the Hero gardens leader in time before patches air fleet destroys the hero garden? Will the secret of alpha's past be known? And will Delta finnaly get his spotlight?

All in good time, all in good time......

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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

Post by Triert » Tue Oct 20, 2009 4:05 am

Season 3
Episode 8- Warning the hero garden 1/3

Station square
As Edge and Delta returned to the chao lobby portal. They saw an acoustic guitar and a flute. "Please use both intelligently." A note they had left next to the instruments said said.

"Well now what?" Asked Delta. "Still got your flute lessons?" Asked Edge as he picked up the acoustic guitar. "Yeah why?" He said as he picked up the flute.

"What was your first lesson?" Asked Edge. "It was just the intro to Stairway to heaven....well i do get to be important for once this season."

Patches airship
"Prepare to release our friends. They should be happy to finally be free of there prison." Patches said as airships 005 001 005 Released 3 beasts. "Omochao, Giant metal parrot, and Omochao's chaos copy. These 3 should prove helpful in this assault." Patches said as he had seen the gates in sight.

Station square
"What are we doing wrong? We got the tab book, we got the flute? What else do we need?" Asked Edge as he rambled on across the room. "Maybe we need to play it from our hearts." Said Delta. "You be quiet Delta, your still a minor character around me!" This in turn, cause Delta to cry. From the tears, the stairway began to form. "Hmm? It feeds off our tears? Delta your importance is just as good as any one off character in the story." As the stairway began forming more and more, the top was almost reached. Only a few more steps left.

"I guess its time to play the song." Edge said as they reached the top.
There's a lady who's sure
All that glitters is gold
And she's buying a stairway to heaven
When she gets there she knows
If the stores are all closed
With a word she can get what she came for
And she's buying a stairway to heaven

"Hmmm, i cant do another 8 minutes of this, im fast forwarding this." Edge used his powers to turn his acoustic into an electric Les Paul. As he began to play the solo the stairs started appearing faster and faster before the rest of the song was sang.

And as we wind on down the road
Our shadows taller than our souls
There walks a lady we all know
Who shines white light and wants to show
How everything still turns to gold
And if you listen very hard
The tune will come to you at last
When all are one and one is all
To be a rock and not to roll


"And she's buying a stairway to heaven..." The stairway was completed, the gates were open to the two. "Edge get up here, the stairways done." Edge had seen a very depressed Delta sitting in fetal position near rocks. "Apologize to me, im not helping this story move along any further until you do!" "Fine, im sorry for insulting you but it had to be done to get the stairway finished. Now come on!!! We got a garden to save." Edge said as Delta climbed the stairway after him.

"I wonder what happens if i drop a penny from here." Wondered Delta. As he dropped his penny, it had fallen until it broke down a nearby building. Crumbling it to the ground, but that building was barely standing on its own anyways.

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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

Post by Triert » Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:21 am

Season 3
Episode 8-Warning the hero garden 2/3

Hero gates
As The two reached the top of the stairway, they met with the 6 chao who used the transporter already. "Whats going on?" Asked Edge as they reached where there friends had been. "The hero garden doesn't want to let any dark chao enter the hero garden." Explained Alpha as Hawkeye had come back with flying hero chao grabbing him by his legs. "Brute force wont work on them either." Hawkeye said as the guards threw him back to the group.

"Their with me." Said Star as he approached the gates, the guards immediately opened the gates the the hero garden open. What they found instead of a garden was a thriving city, full of hero chao. "This place looks like the city of evil painted white."
A wide screen T.V had a hero chao pop up and say. "Remember hero chao, honor chaos our guardian and buy our new 10% off drinks at the snack bar." Apparently, the chao here worshiped chaos all around. They even had billboards that had chaos looking upon the chao. "Welcome, to the Hero chao city!!!" Said Star as they walked in the streets. "If anyone, we need to get to the queen and warn her of the attack. If we reach her in time she might believe us."

Garbage disposal
"Being a agent can only get you so far around here." Star said as the chao were getting out of the garbage the palace guards put them in. "We have to warn the queen of the oncoming attack of dark chao, if we don't this place will be undefended against the incoming onslaught of dark chao in there airships." Said Edge. "Who's up for splitting up in groups again." Said Manic. "But we haven't done that since the ending of season one!!! And that was when we only had four of us as the important dark chao." Reminded Alpha. "We'll just have to trust each other then. Star, Edge, Delta you split up and go through the air vents. Me, Hawkeye, and Jestaq will attempt to sneak past the guards. Finally Alpha, Sonia, and Lulu will attempt to sneak in through the rooftops. Go!!!" Manic said as they dispersed.

APL team
As Alpha and the other two reached the top, the roof gave out due to the combined weight of the 3. As the 3 fell in the hall, a chao had been coming out of a room reading a book. "Father?" Said Alpha. "Son?" Said the chao.

MHJ Team
As the 3 chao attempted to bypass guards, they reached the hallway until the 3 were eventually seen by a chao coming out of the meeting room. "Manic? Is that you." A chao had said. "Mother?"

ESD Team
"Why do i get the feeling our author left the rest of the cast in cliffhangers only to be solved later in season four." Edge said as the 3 had been walking in the air vent. "Relax Edge, i doubt the author would do something that desperate to get rid of 6 unimportant characters." Delta told Edge. "Well you never know, he could have just put chao that actually exist in his game. But the family relation would have just been too big to explain in one single episode." Star said. "What scares me is that you actually makes sense." Edge told him as they continued to walk in the vents.
"This should be the vent leading into the hero chao queens room. Lets go." Star said as he kicked the vent door down. When they landed in the place, they somehow ended up in the mario universe. "Sorry mario but your princess is in another castle." Toad had told mario. "I should be leaving now." Star said as he was pulled back into the vent.
"Ok dude, i had the map reversed. This should be it right here." When they landed this time, a queen without a king appeared before them as she sat on her throne.
"I knew you 3 would appear." The queen told the 3. "But how?" Asked Delta he said dumbfounded. "Besides being a queen, i am a chaos hero chao. The only one within this side of the chao world." She said as she pulled out an orb. "This holds the power of chaos himself, you chao. This is your warning." The guards came in from each sides of the room. "You there, hero chao. Why have you chosen to align yourself with these two heretics." "If you would just let me explain."
"The time for explaining is over, take these two dark chao and the renegade back to the disposal."

"Blurb (Stop right there)" Chaos said as he appeared from Delta's pocket. "Blurb Blurb Gurgle Gurgle.(Their story is worth an explanation." The room turned silent as chaos had talked to the chao. "Chaos, our very guardian. If he's appeared to provide a voice for these chaos, then it must be important. Chao, explain your story."

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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

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they're still going strong

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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

Post by Triert » Thu Oct 22, 2009 11:22 pm

Season 3
Episode 8-Warning the hero garden 3/3

Hero city palace
"You see queen, it was a long time ago when we got to our garden that we found it destroyed. We had seen that there was land beyond the dark garden, we walked until we reached a nearby forest. In that forest we had been ambushed by ninja chao. They led us to the city of evil. That city was ridden with dark chao, but not just any chao. Evil evil chao...." Edge told the queen as he had a flashback started.

Flashback
"5, king." The dealer said as Edge had been gambling in the casino. "Hit me." Edge said as the dealer gave him a 4. The dealer had 19 while Edge had 20. "Feeling lucky?" The dealer said as he took out his watch and a couple of rings. "Ill raise the stakes if you want to hit again. Edge said as he noticed the dealers next card was an ace. "Hit me." The dealer had used the card right behind it. "Shame ain't it?, well i guess this stuff is mine then." The dealer said as he left to play another person. "EVIL!!!"
Flashback ends

"Anyways, after we had invaded there files. We got information on the people behind the entire operation. Sadly, one folder was gone when the others were obtained. We found information on a few dangerous criminals. When we found one that contained a file on a old enemy, we assumed that it was nothing more then a file for information. We fear the worst now that he's been brought back from the robot jail he was held captive in. We stowed away as chao part of the army. When the airship assault began. We saw omochao had really returned. We knew we would have to warn the hero garden afterward. So please, send your troops to the gates of the city. If anywhere its here the army will strike." Edge said as he finished explaining.
At that time, the 6 chao had returned after a brief meeting with their relatives.

"Well, good thing that problems taken care of." Delta said as he decided to talk with the queen. "Do you think you can gather your troops at the front gates to prevent the city of evil from entering." "Yes, ill send the notice now." The queen said as she had sent a notice. "I hope we can explain this to our advisers."

"THE TIME FOR EXPLANATIONS ARE OVER." Patches said from his megaphone from outside the gates. At that point, the guards within the palace had taken off there disguises to reveal the four ninja chao from last season. "You guys again?" Alpha said as he began charging a fireball. "Were not here to fight with you. We'll be taking your queen now though." The ninja's said as they took the queen to the top of the tower.
"This is it everyone, the final battle." Edge said as they all stared at the incoming airships.

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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

Post by Triert » Sat Oct 24, 2009 3:31 am

Season 4 sneak preview

Somewhere in Iowa
"Lulu, how did we get here?" Asked a confused Sonia

Somewhere in the hero world
"Alpha, its been 3 days now. Were hungry, cold, and Jestaq wont stop trying to eat my arm off."

Somewhere in a boat at the Ocean
"Delta, i don't think the treasure map was right when it said to turn at Florida." Said Edge as he tried to steer the boat away from the storm


Season 4-The Journey home

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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

Post by Hydro » Mon Oct 26, 2009 10:26 am

I can't wait for the next one

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Post by Triert » Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:05 am

Season 3
Episode 9-One big army 1/3

Hero world gate's
"There attacking!!!!!" A Gate guard said, the army the queen had sent had appeared to support the outnumbered guard gates. "Destroy their jet packs, its the only way we can get them to fall." Another guard has said.
The city of evils general had been sending troops from airship after airship to attack with their harpoons. "Tear down the gate, advance into the city after we succeed!!!"

It was at that time the 8 dark chao plus one hero had arrived to the scene of the war. The guards were going around with their maces smashing into the dark chao's jet packs down. When they fell, their parachutes had activated and fell to the ledge to fight the ground troops. The airships had become flying bombs to the gates as the chao left the balloon's to support their own fighters.
"What do we do now?" Asked Delta. "Time for our plan to take action." Alpha and his friends were stopped by about 15 guards before Star had to clear up the fact they were on the hero chao's side. "Don't worry, these chao are with me." As the 9 left to go on with their plan, chaos appeared next to manic. "Manic, i shall help this war aswell. If all this means i get to go back to angel island and never have to come back. I shall return someone who will help us with this fight." Chaos said as from water, someone who was thought to be long gone had returned. "Its you!!!!"

Battle zone
As the side's were fighting one another, harpoons shocking the guards. The guards smashing the dark chao's faces in with their own hammers. Sometimes the weapons were even switched and shocked the dark chao with their own harpoon. In the end, a messy scene full of chao who have fainted. The medical chao have taken to retrieving any fallen soldiers back to a medic tent.
"So Alpha, you expect the 7 of us, plus this hero chao. To take down THIS ENTIRE ARMY???!!!" Edge said as he could only look at how outnumbered they were.
"Make that ten chao." Manic said as he stared upon the rest of the chao from the top of a tent. "But there's just you?" said Delta. "I know." Said Manic as another Manic appeared. "Everyone, meet Manic clone. The first ever chao to be killed in this story." Both Manics joined hands and began to run in circles around each other. They eventually caused the air around them to spiral within their own control. This sent an unstoppable force of air into the battle zone where guards and dark chao alike were blown away from the blast. The 8 chao behind followed the streak of chaos the two Manics left behind.
They had been able to get aboard an airship that the dark chao occupied. "Edge, Delta, Lulu, Sonia you four take down this air fleet. Me, Hawkeye, Jestaq and both Manics will take of things down here." Alpha said as the other four chao went aboard the airship. As Alpha saw the airship take flight to a much larger airship, Alpha could only hope they would succeed in his plan that still hasn't been told yet.

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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

Post by Triert » Wed Oct 28, 2009 12:51 am

Filler 8-Even the neutral garden doesn't get a break

Neutral chao garden
As it had been a peaceful day in the neutral garden. All chao were peacefully napping amongst the rocks, or playing with their toys won in the races. Audrin, Dingy, and Dash had all been sitting atop the rocks remembering the glory days. "Remember when we were the important characters." Dash said as he grabbed a pebble and threw it off the rocks.

City of evil
As the pebble fell farther and faster, it eventually caused a giant crater to form in the ground when it eventually hit. It was later made into the second hot springs since it had fallen right around the forest where the old one had been at.

Neutral garden
"Yeah, remember how i lost that one tournament cause i crossed over to another story." Audrin said as he rubbed his neck remembering the beating he had gotten. "Well, the dark chao are in the hero garden fighting off the city of evil. I wish something interesting would happen here." Dingy said.

Suddenly, from the sky groups among groups of chao with viking helmets flew around on their own little birds. The chao had gone and cut the trees that the neutral garden had owned down one by one. "Gah!!! Tetra, kick me the ball!!!" Tar said. As Tetra passed the ball, Tar was able to knock one down, other vikings soon came to pick Tar up and throw him into the water.
As the scene of viking chao and garden chao began, Dingy wished he hadn't chosen that something like this would happen. "This is perfect season four material, but no!!! The focus is just going to switch back to the dark chao so we might as well get rid of these viking chao now." Dingy said as he grabbed a baseball bat.

"Invincible, my trusted rocking horse steed, ascend from the sky and help us fight off these filler enemy's." Dingy said as a flying rocking horse appeared from the sky. As Dingy boarded his mount and flew off to battle with the vikings. They began shooting fire arrows at his rocking horse, causing him to crash into the rocks nearby. "This is not going into continuity if i have anything to say about it!!!" Dingy said as he jumped aboard a nearby viking chao's bird. When he smashed the helmet with his baseball bat, the chao fell upon the garden to be picked up later by his allies.

Dingy on the other hand went in a complete rampage against the vikings. One by one the chao were being slammed with the bat and falling like rocks. As the vikings retreated, Dingy still hadn't been done with them yet. He flew towards the retreating chao and proceeded to smack their helmets in.

As the scene cleared. The gardens tree's were ripped to shreds from the assault. "Sadly, we'll have to buy new trees." Dingy said as he picked up a dead leaf. "Tar, Tetra. Run down to station square will ya?"

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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

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I can't wait to see how the battle turns out

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Season 3
Episode 9-One big army 2/3

Dark chao Airship
As the four ran through the halls of the airship, they could only imagine how many chao could have possibly fit in one on its own. Being able to bring a fleet of airships had only scared the chao with the amount of numbers they had all together.
"From this map, the control room to this fleet should be to our left." Sonia and Lulu snuck up on the guard and had cleanly thrown him off the ship onto the ground, or clouds considering they had been in the hero world.

"Lulu, Sonia you two pilot this ship. Me and Delta are gonna go take care of the main ship." Edge said as the two were left to pilot. "Delta, i think the openings out here." As Edge opened his hatchet and the two were outside. They saw the rest of the fleet fly by them. The ships had only been a few feet apart. The chao weren't given much room to maneuver from airship to airship. When the two were jumping from the sides to reach another ship. "All this jumping an no monster to stop us, we must be getting good at this." Delta said.

Patches Airship
"General, we have an intrusion on one of our ships. The troops aboard were all thrown out of the ship." A field reporter said as he had talked to the general of the fleets. "Shoot them down." "But sir....the airship that was taken isn't our concern, as we speak two chao are jumping airship to airship. As it seems, they're headed to your ship." The general sat, and gave his orders to fire at the two. "FIRE!!!!"

Airship jumping
"Attention fleet, we have two intruders amongst us. Shoot both down!!!!" The general said as he spoke from his loud speaker.
"What other chao would be invading this place besides us." Delta said, at that time the guns that been below the airships targeted the two. "I think that would be us...." The chao were dodging the shots that had surrounded them completely. They were brushed by a few until Edge came up with a plan. "This must have been Alpha's plan all along. Quick jump onto the side of an airship." Edge said, both chao jumped airship to airship. "You stupid fools, don't shoot at each other!!!" The general said from the top of his airship.

"We've almost made it to the top!!!" Delta said as the airship jumping from ship to ship. Delta had been struck directly by one of the shots. "Delta!!!" Edge said as he stopped on a ship. As Delta fell, he imagined that his time in the war had been all but over. "It cant be over, i was just starting to get words."
Delta remembered all the scenes in season 3 where he had been able to speak. Inside the hero palace, inside the airship, at the city of evil, and even at the destroyed station square. "Its all over..."
"Invincible!!!"
As he regained consciousness, he had been on the back of the rocking horse that had somehow been able to fly. "But how?"

Neutral garden
"You mean to tell me some kind of wooden horse is more important then me!!!???" Dingy said from the neutral garden.

As Delta rejoined with Edge at his ship. "You survived? But how." Edge said as he had been dumbfounded. "The author started to like me, must be cause im a monotone chao." The two had only been a jump away from the generals airship.
"One question, why'd they stop firing?"

Patches airship
"General, the troops have officially shot down a good chunk of our fleet." A reporter came to tell the general. "Tell Patches i wont be joining him for the celebratory dinner he had planned after this attack. How many ships were lost?" The general said as he opened up a door, revealing a full body armor suit equipped with a sword. "Lets just say, we don't have enough left to fight off any more reinforcements then they have now." "Where is patches anyways?" "He left with the four ninja chao atop the tower. The queen is being held captive by them." "Yes, tell him i wont be making it...."

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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

Post by Triert » Sun Nov 01, 2009 4:55 am

Season 3
Episode 9-One big army 3/3

Patches airship
"Patches, we've lost the general. He's gone off the fight the two chao that got aboard the airship." The reporter said. "Release the beasts. They should destroy the city while we wait." Patches said as he watched from the tower.

Meanwhlie
As Edge and Delta reached the airship, they walked closer and closer to the room where the general had been. "If this map is correct. It should be this room right here." Delta said as he opened the door.
"Hello there chao...So your the ones who've been causing all this trouble in my fleet. I want you to look at something." The general pointed to the ground where the troops had fought. "Ten years of hard work, and i wont let it all go to waste!!!" The general said as he took out both of his blades. He appeared next to Edge and backhanded his head, causing the dark chao to fall and leaving Delta to fight the general alone. "You've come all this way? Your just gonna let me stop you." The general taunted Delta. "Ill tell you something, season two i was ignored. Sure i was a character, but then came the "where's Delta, who's Delta." What i think is sick, is that i had to be a secondary sidekick to Edge since station square just to be able to talk. I wont let you ruin this."

Delta said as the general sped towards him. Delta jumped atop the generals shoulders and grabbed his wings. "What are you doing, let go of me!!!" Delta had made the general squirm until he dropped one of his blades. He jumped off and grabbed the blade. "Lets dance!" Delta had never used a sword before, he had been up agaisnt a chao who was able to handle two swords, his chance's of victory had been slim at this point. Delta attempted to do a slash from the side, the general blocked and knocked the sword from his hand.

"Looks like the end for you, monotone chao." Delta backed away while the general's blade only seemed to get closer as he dodged. "Face it, you cant win!!!" The two ended up reaching a bridge in the engine room before Delta was trapped in a corner. "This ends here!" As the general was about to do the finishing blow, Edge had come up behind and smashed the back of the generals head with a frying pan. "A kick in the back can only keep a chao down for so long."

"Edge? When did you recover from the back hand?" Delta asked curiously. "Bout the time you were in the engine room, come on. The general wont be down for long." As the two went to the control room, Delta and Edge walked around curiously at what the buttons that surrounded them meant. "A manual? How lucky are we!" Delta said picking up the manual. "This button is for turning the mp3 on, this button to send all the airships power to off....I shouldn't have pressed that." As the airships power slowly died, Edge and Delta both grabbed parachutes that had been in an emergeny kit in the room. "Leap of faith time." said Edge as they fell from the airship.

"Why do i feel like something went horribly wrong while i had been knocked out." The general said as he regained conciousness. "Why is the power off? They must have entered the control room. I have to hurry before the ship."

Battle field

As the hero guardians were finnaly killing off all the chao who remained on the ground. The Manic clone and the original Manic had formed another whirlwind to throw back any dark chao who remained. As the fight ended, The Manic copy stood atop a nearby cloud that had been far away from the rest of the troops. "My men, or chao, today we are victorius." He said. The hero chao began to slowly applaud. Then one by one they had all escaped from the clouds and returned within the gates. "Whats wrong? Look at the field of battle!!!" It was at that time as the Manic copy saw the falling airships, that had been falling like meteors to the lone chao. "Not again."

"Booooooooooooooommmmmmmmm"

Chao gates
As the sobbing Manic mourned the death of his newly revived twin, Edge and Delta both returned safely to the gates. As the chao felt a sigh of relief that the army was destroyed, they remembered that they still had more pressing matters at hand with the kidnapped queen. "There wont be any airships to take them back to the city of evil. We should stop them while we can." Alpha said.

"You there, we need help down at the city." A civilian asked a hero guardian. "Why whats wrong?" "A beast of water has been spotted. Its destroy the city and turning it to ruins." The panicked civilian told the guard. "But, what would do something like that?" It was at this time, Alpha, Manic, Hawkeye, Jestaq remembered something capable of this type of power.

"The chaos chao copy!!!"

The end
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Post by Triert » Sun Nov 01, 2009 5:08 am

Special halloween episode

Neutral garden
As the 8 chao all around the garden
One fast, and one rock den
All cut pumpkins
For them and their kin

Tar, made his with a smile
Tetra, made hers look vile

Audrin, made one look scary
Dingy, recently became very hairy
As the 8 finished the decorations and spooks
They made one for the author, or as they call him "That kook"

Then they started to make the author a nice preasent
Intended for a peasant
Made with silver
And rimmed with....

What rhymes with silver?

"Told you that would stop him from rhyming." Said Audrin.

The end

Sad sad news.

My computer recently had hardware functions. We shall all take this time to remember it.

"....................2004-2009"
Thats long enough, ok so. The chao storys wont be updated for a while until i can borrow a computer from my dads house. Or unless i can find another way to update the storys. Until then the storys wont be updating for a while.

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Season 3
Episode 10 1/3-The Chaos chao copy

Authors note
Im not leaving without a episode made to make a prequel to the final battle with patches at the end of this season.

Hero chao city
From the giant screens, the citizens had all been watching the war go on. It was at this time they saw 3 things fly out of the main airship. A neutral chaos chao who had been a shiny sky blue one, a huge metal parrot, and a small robot. The camera showed that one of the 3 had stopped atop a building in the city. From stopping atop the city, he had made it rain all on his own. The rain made the chaos mutate, into a ferocious, gargantuan water monster. (Think perfect chaos from sonic adventure.)

As the monster flooded the streets and the buildings. The 8 dark chao arrived to the scene from a bridge. "Well now what, we got out of one fight to get involved with another." Delta said. "No Delta, this is where teh fight really begins." Edge said as the two went to fight the monster.

Meanwhile
"Ok guys, you all remember what this is right?" Alpha said as he and Manic, Jestaq, Hawkeye had huddled together. "I knew the author was bringing in enemys from the past. But this nuts!!!" Manic said. "The chaos chao copy was from season one. He gave us trouble before omochao was beaten and sent to the robot jail. Because of this change of events. Were gonna have to use Our old plan to get rid of him." Alpha said. "Where did those two chao go?"

As Edge and Delta came towards the beast, they found that the bridges were giving in to the floods it had been creating. "What do we do now?" Asked Delta. "Think Delta, WWSD!!!" (What would sonic do) Edge said as he looked around for anything that might help them. "Wait a second, where's chaos?" "Right here Edge." Chaos said approaching the chao. "Chaos, didnt you do something like this once?" Asked Delta as they had dodged debris. "Well yeah, i was going crazy since i had the power of all seven chaos emeralds at the time. But for you guys, this doesnt seem much different from that fight. You'd have to gather enough speed to hit his brain off so he can revert to a normal chao. But we dont have much to help us." The guardian of chao said.

"Hmmm, not here but maybe somewhere else." Edge said as he ran towards Delta. "Delta, this might sound crazy, but i need to throw you at the chaso copy thats destroying the city." Edge asked Delta. "Why would i let you do that?" Delta said as chaos grabbed him. "Cause 1, we dont have the seven chaos emeralds because we left them at the garden. 2 its how sonic did it, and 3 im too important to be used as a suicide weapon." Edge told Delta. As Delta flew towards the chaos copy at full speed from being thrown by chaos, Delta only yelled "I hate you all!!!" Delta said as he made impact with the beast. "Do you think that worked?" Asked Edge. Sadly, Delta was thrown back and fell atop Edge. "We need a better plan." Edge said crushed by Delta's weight.

"I have one." Delta said. He went up to a nearby light pole that was on the bridge. He took out cords that connected the pole to the electricity. "Die copy!!!" Delta said as he threw the cords into the water. While it may have taken some time, the copy was reverted back to his chao form. "Well, onto the palace then." Delta said as he walked away from Edge and Chaos.

"You see Delta, this is why you arent popular. You make fights end too quickly." Edge said as he and chaos followed Delta.

Meanwhile
"Ok guys, take it easy. All i did was flood your city and destroy many precious buildings." The copy said as guards, the 6 dark chao. And an entire city of angry hero chao approached him. "You destroyed the bowling alley. You must die!!!" One civilian said. "No, i know a better idea." Said Alpha.

Robot jail
"In you go." The warden said as he threw the chaos copy inside the jail. "Here i thought the author forgot i was actually a robot." He said as he sat next to metal sonic. "What are you in here for?" The copy asked him. "Trying to take over the world, this all seems strangely familiar though." Metal sonic said.

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Season 3
Episode 10 2/3- Return of the giant metal parrot from season 2

Authors note
I HAVE RETURNED!!! Let the season finale continue. In celebration. 3/3 will be upoloaded tommorow.

Outside the hero palace
The 8 plus Star and chaos arrived to the gates of the hero palace, where the captive queen had waited for the dark chao. "Another one? Where did that parrot come from though?" Manic and Edge quietly whistled as they walked away from Alpha.
"Ok Edge, apparently this guys playing hardball with us. Do you remember what the parrot did?" "Squawk, meteoraga." The parrot said as a meteor shower upon the entire city. "Any idea's now?" Edge asked his father. "Wasnt that thing stuck in your hand?" "It was, how'd it get out then." The parrot had continued to shoot meteors at the chao. "Glurb Glurb "Sqwak Sqwak" "Glurb Gurgle." Chaos and the parrot said. "What are they saying?" Asked Manic.

Translation
Chaos:Hero's of the dark garden. Lend me your power so that we may defeat this metal parrot
Parrot:The power of dark chao is no match for the power i have been given as a reborn parrot, it is useless
Chaos:All hope is not gone yet chao, let us combine.

Chaos said as the 8 dark chao began to have their emotion balls go towards chaos. Chaos grey into Perfect chaos from the chaos emotion balls contribution. "You chao forgot to put me near a water source!!!" Apparently, perfect chaos had been able to speak apart from his usual gurgles and blurbs. "Use the lake!!!" Alpha said. The battle between the two giants had begun.

The parrot had chucked his meteors and chaos sent his hurricanes at the bird. "Chao, save the queen. I'll handle the bird." "But Chaos, what about you." Delta said. "Do not worry Delta, the parrot will have a hard time getting through me. Now go!!!" Chaos said as he threw the parrot into a nearby forest. "Remember dark chao, there is only one foe from the past left to face. Beyond him is the mastermind behind this attack." Chaos said as he persued the parrot. The 9 entered the palace.

For a while, the palace seemed to be eerily empty and dark. As they reached the door to the tower. Omochao had been waiting pearched atop a gargoyle. "Its time for a long awaited return now!"

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Season 3
Episode 10 3/3-Omochao lives

Palace room
"Omochao!!!" Yelled Alpha as he saw the blue robot. "Alpha, you still remember me after all this time. How flattering, but you are all too late to save the queen from our leader." Omochao said. "You see, his ten year plan had been all about this. After we take over the hero garden, it only leaves the neutral garden left to control. Patche's will ensure us victory by recovering the lost troops from the battle at the hero gates. We shall have the hero citys guardians fight at our side. With this, nothing shall stop us. You should be thanking me, when i destroy you. It shall save you from being slaves in Patches new world."

Omochao in his blue robot formed reverted back to the monster that he had been at the end of season one. "My power has been returned to me." Omochao had shot lightning at the 9, the chao ran until omochao had put them at a corner. "Who will save you chao now." Omochao said as he prepared a final blast of lightning.

Perfect chaos who had still been fighting the metal parrot had been able to heal himself from the nearby reserves of water. The parrot realized that it was impossible to win unless he had help. At that point, he fled back to the palace to try and get omochao to assist him. "What do you want now?" Omochao said as the parrot arrived within the palace. The parrot signaled him to help with chaos. As the two were about to leave, chaos entered the palace and was succesfully able to trap the two within the building. "Chao, i apologize for this. But you must face the two by yourselves. I'll maintain the barrier around the palace as long as i can." Omochao began to shoot lightning at chaos, the blast had caused the shield to thin. "Hurry chao, i can't hold this shield for much longer. The parrot had attacked the 9 chao instead of assisting omochao.

"Squawk, ima kill you all!!!" The parrot said as it charged at the 9. "Edge, any ideas now?" Delta said as he ran from the bird. "Get me alot of mirrors!!!" Edge said as they ran. Star had retreated from the battle to enter the hall of mirrors. "Good thing the queen always keeps these here. As Star grabbed mirrors, he ran into a somewhat old chao who had been wandering in the hall. "Thank you chao!!! For this, i shall grant you eternal life!!! Come immortal phoenix!!!" He said as a giant bird on fire came and burned Star. "You now have eternal life. With that i bid you farewell." The old chao said as he mounted the phoenix and left.

"Why didnt he just escape using the bird?" Star said as he returned with the mirror. "Edge, catch!!!" Star said as he threw the mirrors to the chao who had been escaping the bird. He passed one to every chao in the group as he joined them. "What do we do Edge?" "Get infront of omochao!!!" Star ran infront of omochao to deflect on his lightning attacks. The stream had traveled from Stars mirror to Lulu. Then to Delta's, Manic's, Alpha's, Jestaq's, Sonia, Hawkeye's, and finnaly Edge's mirror was hit. He reflected the lightning to the metal parrot. The parrot was stunned momentarily, This gave Edge the time to reach behind the parrot and hit the off switch that had been on his back.

"Whats weirder to me is why we didn't do this in the first place." Edge said as the bird fell. The parrot reverted back to an regular parrot. Only Edge had made sure to remove its vocal chords before it was able to say anything else. "You fools!!! This has only just begun." Omochao said as he shot on final blast of lightning to break the shield. Chaos reverted back to his original form. "Oh my gosh, what happened. I felt like I learned alot of grammer when i turned into perfect chaos. That sure was scary." Omochao returned to the palace to fight the 9 chao again.

To be continued
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Re: Storys from Trierts chao garden

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this is getting interesting

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Season 3
Episode 11 1/3-Omochao strikes again

Palace room
Omochao wasted no time in his lightning assult to get rid of the chao. "What do we do now Edge?" Said Hawkeye as they hid behind a pillar. "We fight, we use eveything we remember from past seasons to take down omochao. Alpha, did you forget what your capable of?" Edge told Alpha. "Just a few fireballs, what about it." "Knock down those chandeliers." Edge said as he went towards Hawkeyes pillar. The chandeliers had fallen on omochao. "Do you think broken glass is enough to stop me?" Omochao said as he wiped the glass off him. "That wasnt the attack." Edge said as he caused the ground under omochao to give in. Omochao had fallen within the crater Edge gave him. "Do you think this is enough chao? You mock me!" Omochao said as he dashed towards Edge.

"Now Delta!!!" He yelled as Delta sent the parrot towards omochao. As he attempted to shoo the bird away, he hadnt payed attention to the fact that he was climbing up the stairs. "Now Alpha!!" Alpha slammed into omochao. Causing him to crash out the window "We did it!!! Omochao is dead!" Jestaq cheered.

"You chao dissapoint me." Omochao said as he flew back to the 9 with his wings. "Its time i showed you just how much i changed over this entire time ive been gone. The longest hours I had in that jail were the ones I sat through to know whats right. This ends now!!!" Omochao grew in size, his features became more grotesque as his hands grew in size, the claws had become strained. His entire body had turned into some type of weapon. No longer was he omochao, but the Omo Weapon.

"This ends now!!!"

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Season 3
Episode 11 2/3-The Omo weapon

Omochao's beasly form had taken over his brain slowly. Second by second his brain had gone feral, or whatever it is that make robots go beserker. His eyes glowed red with the power he was slowly obtaining. With a stroke of the hand, he had shot lightning at the 9. Lulu and Sonia were the only ones who had avoided the blast, the others had been down to the ground after being shocked.

"Now what? The only possible chao who can defeat him are all down." Sonia said as she panicked from seeing the sight of the rest of the chao. "Not everyone Sonia!!!" Chaos said as he attacked the Omo weapon from the back. "I'll try to distract him as long as possible, you 2 two try to get a few of them back up." Chaos said as he slammed the weapon to the wall.

"Edge!!! Wake up, we need you more then ever now." Lulu said as Edge only remained sleeping. "Edge, if we dont defeat omochao, then Patches will take over all of the chao." She said as Edge only snoozed. "Only one way to do this I guess." Lulu said. "EDGE! BY SOME STROKE OF LUCK WE GOT TIKAL TO HELP US!!!" Lulu screamed. "Really?" Edge said as he saw Omochao and Chaos fighting it out. "I wasnt waking up again was I?" "Yup." Lulu said as Edge went to help Chaos.

Alpha
"ALPHA WAKE UP, ITS TIME FOR DODGEBALL!!!" Sonia screamed. "HIDE ME!!! Oh... i'll forgive you for scaring me like that after were done with omochao."
Manic, Hawkeye, Jestaq
"YOU 3, WAKE UP!!! ITS TIME TO HIKE TO STATION SQUARE!!!" All 3 chao stood up as if they had been woken up in military camp. They saw that Edge had been helping chaos with omochao. "This is gonna be one weird hike." Manic said as they went to assist. "Now just Delta. This should be easy." Alpha said as he walked up to Delta. "DELTA, THE AUTHOR SAID HE'S GONNA MAKE A SPIN OFF JUST FOR YOU!!!" "Really?! Dude, even if omochao went beserker. Its no reason to wake me up like that." "Shut up and fight." Alpha said. Star eventually recovered and joined the 9.

Omochao's attacks were fast, heavy, and occasionaly lightning. They had been jumping wall to wall to avoid his attacks. "Spread out!" said Alpha. "This wont help you." Omochao sent out copys of himself to attack the chao. Each copy appeared to have been weaker then omochao himself, mostly since Lulu and Sonia were able to beat there own easily. "Even with me weak, you wont win this." Omochao said as he charged towards the chao.

"Throw me now!!!" Alpha yelled, Edge threw Alpha onto Omochao's back. "Omochao, I know it is impossible to beat you in this form, which is why im turning you off." Alpha said as he reached for the off switch in his back. "My arms, too big to reach tiny chao." Omochao said as the switch had slowly caused him to revert back to his original form. "Omochao, this time we arent sending you to the robo jail." He said as he turned omochao back on. "What do you plan to do with me then?" He said as he was clutched in Alpha's hand. Alpha flipped omochao's off switch yet again. "Edge bring the hammer, the rest of you start climbing the tower. I have something to finish...." Alpha said as the other chao including chaos had went up the stairs.A smash was heard coming from outside the door, Omochao, was no more.

As the chao left omochao the peices of omochao and the parrot in the room, Buckethead arrived to the scene. "So, even the two greatest weapons we had at our disposal werent enough to stop them, I guess its up to me." Buckethead said as he picked up the head of omochao. "Silly chao forgot that he had the chaos emeralds." Buckethead went up to the parrot, reaching inside its throat it had a small version of the master emerald. "Your free to go now parrot, you will no longer be needed by us." Buckethead said as the parrot flew into the hero chao city.

"Time to take matters into my own hands."

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Season 3
Episode 11 3/3-The Pinnacle

Tower top
The 9 arrived after a long and painful walk up the stairs, their legs were heavy as they dragged themselves inside the room where Patches himself awaited. "Wheres the queen!!" Yelled Edge. Patches only stared at the chao as he gave his blank expression, as though he had been recently awaken. "She's in the next room, the person behind this mess waits inside." Patches said as he walked into the room. "Lets go guys! Its about time we finish this." Alpha said.

Inside the room
Buckethead stood upon his mech as the chao entered the room. His machine had been a rework of the origial drill machine from last season, only designed with more weapons to be used as a fighting vehicle. "So, its been you all along!" Lulu said as she pointed at the chao. "What do you mean? Ive only just arrived. But as it turns out, i have to get rid of you chao. So if you dont mind." Bucket said as he boarded his mech. "Lets get this over with."

The battle began, the mech had manuvered across the room with amazing agility, it appeared as though to travel only in blurs. The chao needed to avoid getting too close due to the mechs exterior being made of blades. "Can't you people be more original? You put guns and swords on just about every surface." Delta said.

"I'll have you know its the best we could get!!!" Said Buckethead as he charged at the chao. "Same with everything we've fought until now, you charge we dodge, you attack and we run. Nothings changed at all." Delta said as he jumped aboard the mech. "Behold, the easy dismantling of this mech." Said Delta as he took the mech down by pulling a string that had been inside. "Oh look, the chaos emeralds. We'll be taking these." Said Delta as kicked Buckethead out of the machine.

"So tell us, why'd you do it? Why start a war with the humans and chao?" Asked Alpha. "He didn't... I did!" Patches voice boomed as he rose entered from the next room. "Wow, for a pinnacle this place sure does have alot of rooms." Said Delta. Patches had thrown the chao agaisnt the walls. "Wonderful work Buckethead, distracting these chao long enough while I build up to full strength.

You see chao, it wasnt easy raising this army. We've had to steal eggs among eggs to have the huge army we have today. The forest of dark chao was assulted by the few chao I started with, with those we took all the forest had to offer, making the buildings hadn't been easy as well. It was alot of stone we had to find before we made buildings. Dont even ask about the electricity."

Flashback
Patches is seen buying a generator at station square. "Where does a chao get so many rings?"
Flashback end

"Your Queen is right here." Said Patches as he opened up the door that held the queen, she had been tied to a chair as the four ninja chao were waiting. "Seize them!!!" The ninja's sent smoke bombs flying throughout the room. Punches were heard flying down. Eventually all 9 were wrapped in rope.
"My queen, im sorry we werent able to save you. My deepest apologys for putting you in this situation. If I could do anything to-" Said Star before a ninja put tape over his mouth. "Now then, take these chao back down the towers stairs. I have plans for them when there done."

"Yes Master Patche's." From what the ninja had just said, the queen began to remember where she heard that name from. "Is that you Patches? Its me Lilac, from the hero garden field trip. Ten years ago." (Please read episode 2) Patches turned his head when he heard the name Lilac. "Wow, how do you kidnap a queen and not even know who she is?" Alpha said as Patches put tape over his mouth.

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Season four, preview 2

Somewhere out in the desert
"How long have we've been walking?" Asked Delta as he slowly fell faint upon the sand. "I dont know, I even feel like im seeing little green men.

Somewhere in Iowa
Lulu and sonia are seen cayaking through the rivers. "If we go this way, we might arrive to the garden sooner or later." Lulu said as the cayak went along the river

Somewhere in the Hero world
"Behold chao, the hero garden.....Jestaq we told you to stop trying to bite off Hawkeyes arm.


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Season 3
Episode 12 1/3-The Past

Patches had become as white as a ghost when he heard it had been Lilac, he remembered the day that the two set out into the forest. "Why did you do all of this?" Asked Lilac as she had been bound to the chair. "Ten years ago, after the hero chao teacher left us to never return to the dark garden. The rejection made me go insane, the insanity drove me to make the city of evil. I swore i would take the hero garden down. But why stop there i thought, I would take over this entire world with the power I had at my disposal. What about you, just how did you become the queen of the hero garden?" Asked Patches as Lilac was freed from her chair.

"When the original queen passed away, many chao jumped at the chance at either position. The king position had been cheated for amongst hero chao, eventually only a single female chao would be chosen to rule. That chao had been me." Lilac said. Patches and Lilac continued to talk while the chao in the other room struggled to break free from the ropes. Edge slipped away from his and approached one of the four ninja chao. He knocked him out with a blow to the head quietly. Meanwhile he untied the other 8, the other ninja's had been with Patches while the chao were getting ready to fight Patches. "Well, here goes nothing...." Said Alpha as he approached the door.

"GO!!!" Yelled Alpha, the ninja chao immediatly began to fight the 9, but they had been outnumbered 3 to 9. Each chao went to fight a chao, the ninja's blocked dodged and ran, but eventually the ninja chao were down. "ENOUGH!!!" Patches said, Edge grabbed a star that was concealed within a ninja chao's weapon belt, as he threw and hit Patches straight behind his head.

"Grab the queen!" Lulu and Sonia were able to take the queen and take her down the stairs. Alpha and the rest followed them as they carried the ninja chao. Edge and Delta began to flee with the rest. It was at that time that Patches put a barrier on the door. "You two wont leave so easily!!!" Patches said as he approached the chao.

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Season 3
Episode 12 2/3-Duel with Patches

Tower top
"So, you chao are the one who've disrupted me for so long." Patches said as he stood across the room from the two. "You know, I came prepared if this was ever to happen. I hope you chao enjoyed making it this far, you've come to your end." Patches said as he pulled out two blades. "Why would a Devil Chaos chao need swords?" Asked Delta. Patches gave no sign of slowing down as he assulted the two.

Throne room
"Were safe now queen." Alpha said as they returned to the hero city. "You chao dont understand, we have to go back to the tower now.

Tower top
Patches only slashed the furniture that the two chao hid behind in half as he chased them around the room. "Enough games!!!" Patches said as he lifted the items from the room. He threw them all at once at the two chao to bury them underneath. "I expected more of a fight out of the two of you." As he came closer to the pile. When he dug through to find the two, Edge axe kicked Patches from the ceiling. "But how?" Patches said as he recovered from the blow. "Were done playing too." Delta said as both drew swords. Thus the fight began anew.

Throne room
"You mean to tell us that he was doing this because of something that happened ten years ago?" Jestaq asked dumbfoundly. "Its true, just as he was about to reconsider the attack, the 9 of you overpowered the ninja's and momentarily stopped him." The queen explained. "After he found out it had been me, he was about to stop the attack." "What I want to know is, where did that slimeball Buckethead run off to?" Manic said. "We have to hurry to the 3 before anything else goes wrong." The queen said as the chao scurried.

Tower top
The 3 clashed, parrys, blocks, the sound of steel filled the room! As they blocked his dual sword attacks, Edge took to the offense and repeatedly lunged foward to force Patches to block."Give it up!!! I trained with these swords longer then you could ever have." He said as he delivered a kick to Edge. As Edge was sent flying against the wall. Delta knew it was finnaly up to him to be the hero for once. As Patches stared at the injured Edge, he kicked a blind spot Patches left open, he took it by surprise and fell to the floor from the blow. While Delta still had time, he threw him to a corner. As Patches tried to pick his swords up, the two chao moved them away with there own.

"We have you now."Said Edge to Patches who had now been cornered by the two. "Before you kill me, i'd just like to say I had been planning to end this war." Said Patches with a blank look on his face. "You must take me for an idiot if you think i'll believe that." Edge said as he picked up his blade. And just as he was about to finish Patches. The rest of the chao arrived to the scene.
"Stop!!!" Yelled the queen from across the room.

To be continued

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