THE GREAT JOURNEY - The Beginning

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THE GREAT JOURNEY - The Beginning

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It was only the beginning, it had just begun, what was left of the wasteland they were in was just another tortured part fot he earth that revolved around them. There were only 3 maybe four of them stil standing.

The Chao, The Human, The Hedghog, BTC, Claws and Chaostiger. The three left, the three chosen ones, the three elite. The earth was turned upside down after the attack, the attack from the beasts from beyond, the vicious cruel world had struck the civilization of man once more.

They were rough looking tickets, their dark eyes and their strong bodies, even the Chao, Chaostiger was looking pretty rough and tough. They sat around in the rubble of an old building in the rain, bandaging up their wounds with what they had left of their old cloth and material. The three of them were lost nd lonely, and all filled with a bitter hate, their town had been crushed by the beasts that invaded, then the beasts fled off into the country side. Claws was looking down at his legs which had ben torn and snatched at. He was angry and wanted revenge, they all did.

A figure, small and slim, stepped out from behind a piece of pipe line that had been broken and warped. He was tall and had short black hair, he looked at the thre survivers and spoke in harsh soft voice, "Need any assistance?"
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Post by Claws »

no offense or anything
1st Claws is a hedgehog
2nd it was bad
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Post by East Chao »

Ummmmm you are the hedghog and second, its just gettig started im just introducing the whole story line.

ALSO

Chapter two, which will make more sence will be out tomorrow so I hope you enjoyed the intro to a good novel if any of you want in please post.
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