Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 15 (BAK 4M TEH DEDZ!)
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 11
Do you also critique good creepypasta? It would make the analysis more interesting.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 11
I know a guy who has analyzed good stuff, but it's really not something I do as it looks like it takes more work.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 11
I already stayed tuned.
Clicked 'Notify Me' months ago.
Clicked 'Notify Me' months ago.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 11
Guys bad news. There isn't going to be any MP9. Apparently it was so bad that it was removed from the Creepypasta Wiki. Sorry about that, but don't worry; I found some good replacement pasta.
Subject 12: iCarly Lost Episode "Last Show"
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/ICarl ... Spanish%29
...Okay. Well that was... a... story. A scary story written about iCarly, the child-friendly Smosh from Nickelodeon. It seems very strange. Looking at it, I think the writer actually thought iCarly is a real webshow, and not a pre-scripted Nick sitcom. It really makes no sense, but let's see.
In the story, the reader apparently looking through iCarly's videos, and finds one called 'lostshow', which is apparently a lost episode. (It gets unrealistic here because the actual website is probably heavily monitored by Nick. They wouldn't put up some kind of crazy lost episode of doom.) In the lost episode, apparently Carly gets hit with ...something. Her older brother Spencer is sad about it, and Carly's assistant Sam says it's okay... ...right before the same thing happens to her. Then this causes their other assistant Freddy to apparently want to kill himself. After this Freddy apparently dies (You don't say?), and Carly and Sam are fine.
This has numerous plotholes. Freddy apparently dies in 2011, but there are episodes of iCarly have happened in 2012 and he (or at least the guy who plays him)'s fine. Also the Nick sitcom version is pretty popular; if anything happened to them there'd be a big deal about it. Also this story was apparently first written in Spanish and translated to English, as you can see from the link to the original story; some things might have gotten messed up (more).
That's another random story down. Now I have no idea what's next.
Subject 12: iCarly Lost Episode "Last Show"
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/ICarl ... Spanish%29
Spoiler:
In the story, the reader apparently looking through iCarly's videos, and finds one called 'lostshow', which is apparently a lost episode. (It gets unrealistic here because the actual website is probably heavily monitored by Nick. They wouldn't put up some kind of crazy lost episode of doom.) In the lost episode, apparently Carly gets hit with ...something. Her older brother Spencer is sad about it, and Carly's assistant Sam says it's okay... ...right before the same thing happens to her. Then this causes their other assistant Freddy to apparently want to kill himself. After this Freddy apparently dies (You don't say?), and Carly and Sam are fine.
This has numerous plotholes. Freddy apparently dies in 2011, but there are episodes of iCarly have happened in 2012 and he (or at least the guy who plays him)'s fine. Also the Nick sitcom version is pretty popular; if anything happened to them there'd be a big deal about it. Also this story was apparently first written in Spanish and translated to English, as you can see from the link to the original story; some things might have gotten messed up (more).
That's another random story down. Now I have no idea what's next.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 11
These are just getting worse and worse. Keep em coming Blazing!
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 11
Okay I'm out of material somewhat. I can easily find more stories about Pokemon if I wanted to, but I want the story elements kept fresh. Also, this is the unrelenting 'subject 13'. For what it's worth, I'm just deciding to jumble all kinds of assorted stories together for a single entry and create...
Subject 13: Chain Mail Boogaloo
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index ... 956AAt4HiA
http://www.snopes.com/horrors/ghosts/skinned.asp
http://humorsection.blogspot.com/2007/0 ... etter.html
Before we get started though, I'd like to just put this here for anyone who's still scared of 'chain lettrz'; if the logic in the other one works, this logic does too.
...You still with me? Okay good. That was quite a slew we got there. I mean chain mail actually is a form of creepypasta. It's meant to be creepy, and it's posted on multiple places.
This first one was very dumb. It was entertaining however to read anecdotes from a scared reader. It was also funny to notice how it was most likely some dumb Youtube comment, from 'on other videos'. It was also funny to see how just 'or you will die'. For no reason; for no sin; for no illness; just death.
This second one was just retarded. I saw it on bungie.net for the first time, and I haven't been killed by 't3h parentz0rz'. Also some guys were discussing it, and it takes place at least 15 years ago; Yahoo messenger didn't exist yet.
This third one was pretty obviously a troll story. It was actually pretty funny, like that Billy Mays copypasta. I don't even wanna take the time to explain why it isn't real.
I'll find more 'real' stories soon; I just needed a time-buyer different subject kind.
Subject 13: Chain Mail Boogaloo
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index ... 956AAt4HiA
http://www.snopes.com/horrors/ghosts/skinned.asp
http://humorsection.blogspot.com/2007/0 ... etter.html
Before we get started though, I'd like to just put this here for anyone who's still scared of 'chain lettrz'; if the logic in the other one works, this logic does too.
This is the Anti-Chain. By reading this you are now under the protection of the Anti-Chain, and from now on all threats, curses and promises made by any chain mail you see, are nullified. There are more individuals supporting the Anti-Chain than there are supporting any single chain-mail, so our power will always be greater. If you ever try to create a chain-mail after havin re-posting is reccomended, for the sake of all the younger kids here, but is not required. nothing will happen if you dont.
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This first one was very dumb. It was entertaining however to read anecdotes from a scared reader. It was also funny to notice how it was most likely some dumb Youtube comment, from 'on other videos'. It was also funny to see how just 'or you will die'. For no reason; for no sin; for no illness; just death.
This second one was just retarded. I saw it on bungie.net for the first time, and I haven't been killed by 't3h parentz0rz'. Also some guys were discussing it, and it takes place at least 15 years ago; Yahoo messenger didn't exist yet.
This third one was pretty obviously a troll story. It was actually pretty funny, like that Billy Mays copypasta. I don't even wanna take the time to explain why it isn't real.
I'll find more 'real' stories soon; I just needed a time-buyer different subject kind.
Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 13ChainMail Booga
^Hilarious.
hello.
i was 9 or so when i used this account actively.
please disregard anything posted.
i was 9 or so when i used this account actively.
please disregard anything posted.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 13ChainMail Booga
Well I was able to buy some time with that one; it wasn't a real subject. Now I've managed to get myself another story- but let's hope my PC doesn't start talking to me while I write it.
Subject 14: GLaDOS The Laptop
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/GLaDOS_the_Laptop
Uhh... ...Okay? That was odd. I mean this guy's computer is taken over by a robot? From a video game? For no reason? Well scratch that, I guess that wasn't totally unexpected, compared to the other things I've went through in this thread. This guy literally started calling his computer GLaDOS; he even referred to it as 'she'. If he's that addicted to Portal, it would be a good thing. He was basically asking for it, or at least he was in the wonderful world of creepypasta logic.
Also I didn't find the rest of the story as believable as it could have been. 'we can't seem to find that place again'; you can't remember where you drove? The whole 'mysterious computer' thing wasn't necessary. Also, I don't understand the concept of that 'type something and GLaDOS says it' website; in Portal, GLaDOS is still voiced by a real person. It exists with prerecorded, generic voices, but I don't think it does for actual characters.
All in all I guess you could say this story...
...Is just like the cake. AWWWWW YEEEEEEAAAAAHHHHH!!!!
Next I have no idea what I'm gonna do. I'll find something, though.
Subject 14: GLaDOS The Laptop
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/GLaDOS_the_Laptop
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Also I didn't find the rest of the story as believable as it could have been. 'we can't seem to find that place again'; you can't remember where you drove? The whole 'mysterious computer' thing wasn't necessary. Also, I don't understand the concept of that 'type something and GLaDOS says it' website; in Portal, GLaDOS is still voiced by a real person. It exists with prerecorded, generic voices, but I don't think it does for actual characters.
All in all I guess you could say this story...
...Is just like the cake. AWWWWW YEEEEEEAAAAAHHHHH!!!!
Next I have no idea what I'm gonna do. I'll find something, though.
Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 14
^you showed me that one in the chat. i named my laptop GLaDOS but renamed it to Sarah.
hello.
i was 9 or so when i used this account actively.
please disregard anything posted.
i was 9 or so when i used this account actively.
please disregard anything posted.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 14
That story seemed like something I would have attempted to make.
I mean, first off, the entire thing is about Portal/GLaDOS, while I'm not a big enough fan to name my computer that and such, it would be something I would attempt to make
a pasta out of.
Then theres the part where he names the computer Mayhem "his friends OC".
Mayhem? Mayhem is my favourite OC that Lapfox has.
and then theres the obvious part where he makes the GLaDOS site thing say "Shadow is the most amazing person ever"
Did I write that in my sleep or something?
I mean, first off, the entire thing is about Portal/GLaDOS, while I'm not a big enough fan to name my computer that and such, it would be something I would attempt to make
a pasta out of.
Then theres the part where he names the computer Mayhem "his friends OC".
Mayhem? Mayhem is my favourite OC that Lapfox has.
and then theres the obvious part where he makes the GLaDOS site thing say "Shadow is the most amazing person ever"
Did I write that in my sleep or something?
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 14
Oh wow guys its been way too long; I've just gotten too lazy to keep doing these. Well I might restart, and I've got at least one more for everyone:
Subject 15: true or insane
http://www.crappypasta.com/true-or-insane/
Oh God it's good to be back.
I don't understand why that was written; I mean it was literally not a story. Every sentence conveys a slightly different sub story. I mean he literally goes from his story to other random **** that happened to his friends. "before you dout me this is real, i swear on the bible." I might still "dout" him. It just had no coherent plot, creature, or climax. However, it did have:
Back to the story itself, at least it didn't try way too hard to be scary. It sounds like a normal "haunted house" story except with grammar I could've surpassed in second grade. It doesn't sound too crazy or insane; could very be a paranoid guy (with grammar I could've surpassed in second grade.)
The end may very well be the best part (except for the "violated" line; nothing in creepypasta history will ever beat that.) The guy literally asks readers to "Rate This Pasta". And they did, with three consecutive 1/10s.
Well, it certainly feels alright to be doing stuff again. Next, did you even see that website I got it from? I won't even have to keep looking anymore. I'll search that site, and a few others a little more and see what's next.
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Subject 15: true or insane
http://www.crappypasta.com/true-or-insane/
Spoiler:
I don't understand why that was written; I mean it was literally not a story. Every sentence conveys a slightly different sub story. I mean he literally goes from his story to other random **** that happened to his friends. "before you dout me this is real, i swear on the bible." I might still "dout" him. It just had no coherent plot, creature, or climax. However, it did have:
That is the greatest line in creepypasta history. It's on the same level of the flower shop scene from The Room (Hi doggie).when im i my room i keep feeling “violated” because im on the top floor of my house (3rd) and my room only has 1 window but i feel that something keeps watching me through that window.
Back to the story itself, at least it didn't try way too hard to be scary. It sounds like a normal "haunted house" story except with grammar I could've surpassed in second grade. It doesn't sound too crazy or insane; could very be a paranoid guy (with grammar I could've surpassed in second grade.)
The end may very well be the best part (except for the "violated" line; nothing in creepypasta history will ever beat that.) The guy literally asks readers to "Rate This Pasta". And they did, with three consecutive 1/10s.
Well, it certainly feels alright to be doing stuff again. Next, did you even see that website I got it from? I won't even have to keep looking anymore. I'll search that site, and a few others a little more and see what's next.
ITZ BAK 4M DED!
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 15 (BAK 4M TEH DE
Not really a creepy pasta but ever heard of left 2 die 4 ever? That one is hilariously bad.
yea
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 15 (BAK 4M TEH DE
I'm glad BCAT is back! :D
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 15 (BAK 4M TEH DE
You should do 'The Hand'. I found it while surfing that Crappypasta site.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 15 (BAK 4M TEH DE
*is waiting for chapter 16*
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 15 (BAK 4M TEH DE
Still. Also, that Chao one was removed for quality control from the creepypasta site.Crash32 wrote:*is waiting for chapter 16*
Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 15 (BAK 4M TEH DE
He says he's a man of science, and then he says he swears on the bible...suspicious if I do say so myself.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 15 (BAK 4M TEH DE
You wanna know a bad fan-fic? Starkits Prophcy. That one is... Ugh...
As for Creepypastas, SpongeBob- All Hope is Lost is pretty bad.
As for Creepypastas, SpongeBob- All Hope is Lost is pretty bad.
Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 15 (BAK 4M TEH DE
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If you're going to bump a topic like this, make sure that OP is active.
If you're going to bump a topic like this, make sure that OP is active.
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 15 (BAK 4M TEH DE
I miss Blazing so much now TT_____TT
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Re: Bad Creepypasta Analysis Time: Subject 15 (BAK 4M TEH DE
This topic was the best.