A short CI experience

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A short CI experience

Post by Shyer »

Heh, thought of this on a whim, may not be good. My point of view btw
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I was sitting on the patio of my house on CI, watching some of the other users walk by. I saw Snowy and Loudclaw butting heads like usual, and sighed. This place sometimes had the same thing happen over and over.

In other words, this place was starting to become boring. Every place on the island was becoming boring, except for the Roleplaying part of the island, which was always changing. I later decided to go to Atomic's Library, and read what some of the users had posted. It was a short walk from my house to there, but I had stopped by the CI 7-11. Yes, I was surprised this island had those amazingly good Double Gulps. I quickly downed the drink and walked into Atomic's Library. The building looked small on the outside, but on the inside...

It was freaking big, to say the least. Full of books written by other users, and the "Beginner's Guide to Writing" series as well. I walked by Atomic's desk, waving, although he seemed too caught up in his book to acknowledge me.

I eventually walked out of the library, having read a few books. Some of mine were in there, but I did not like them much. Writing is hard sometimes, especially when you're afraid of somebody criticizing you. I walked around the island, waving to a few of my friends like Mana and Kyro, but eventually decided to look at the Roleplaying district.

Not much about this district appealed to me. It just didn't. I looked around for a bit and got insulted a bit due to me not wearing something somebody else was wearing. I found that entirely freaking stupid, but I should have not cared so much. I ended up in a bad mood, and walked home to chill out for a bit.

(Might make more chapters if you guys want.)
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Re: A short CI experience

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Looks good so far.
Do you think I've posted well enough to be included?
(Saw you online, so I looked at your posts to see where you're at. I feel like a stalker. :/)
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It really depends on who I've interacted with on the site. So possibly.
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Re: A short CI experience

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I don't really care that much.
On the other hand, how long will it take you to make chapter 2 assuming you'd do it?
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Re: A short CI experience

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I like it. This is probably a bump.
Bump.
Still like it tho.
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