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"Who am I?" - Story about Beam The Cat

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Prologue: "Who am I?"
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Beam walked down Emerald Coast. She stared at the setting sun, her walk slowing to a stop. Her face was troubled. She didn't know what do to.
She had no friends who really understood that as really going on. In fact, she didn't know herself. Was she the enemy, or the hero?
Amberstone wasn't with her now. She told him she needed to be alone; and she did, foe that matter. Of course, the young chao left her alone. So she came to the beach, where her problem began.
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Beam trudged along the Emerald Coast. Her loyal friend, Cyber, followed. It had been a tiring day of annoying Rouge, destroying Bots, and avoiding Shadow. They laughed when Amberstone made a funny face.
"Silly chao," purred Beam.
Suddenly, a round-bodied silhouette appeared near the horizon. Beam immediately guessed who it was.
"Eggman,"
Amberstone clung to Beam's leg. Having been captured by the devious doctor mire than once had made him develop a fear of him; as well as his evil plans.
Eggman hadn't noticed them yet. He was staring at the sea, his arms behind his back. He looked calm. Beam just stared. She fingered her transparent Chaos Emerald, but didn't grab it. Not yet.
Cyber backed up. But Beam hesitated. What if he wasn't the man they thought he was? What if...he changed?
Eggman turned his head. The sunlight reflected on his glasses, making him look all the more menacing. Beam reminded herself that appearances could be deceiving; she knew everyone had good in them.
"Good evening, Beam." The doctor said in his usual oozy-sweet like voice.
"Same too you," replied Beam. She flicked the bangs out of her eyes casually.
Eggman seemed to be a bit shocked by this response, but pleased as well. Normally, Beam would have either glared and run away, it attempt to attack him somehow. This was indeed different.
"How are you?" He tried again.
"Fine. You?"
Eggman snickered under his breath. "I'm absolutely perfect,"
There was a tense moment of silence. Then, once again, the doctor spoke.
"Mind if you and I stroll?"
Beam shrugged. "Whatever."
Eggman started walking, and Beam followed. The sun was beginning to set. Eggman had his hands behind his back in a sly manor. All this made Beam uncomfortable; yet she said nothing.
She just waited for the doctor to speak.
"Beam," he began at last. "Have you seen anyone of my partners dissatisfied, or unhappy?"
Beam was surprised by this question. She stopped in her tracks; her expression looking far-away.
Eggman stopped as well, waiting for an answer.
Had she? Yes, she had. Everytime Eggman was defeated, they'd get really annoyed or angry. But what if Eggman did win? They would have all that money and power. But really, who would want that?
Did she want that?
"Well?" Eggman broke into her thoughts.
Beam stared at him firmly. "Where is this leading too?"
"Nowhere," the professor lied. Beam could tell. "I'm just wondering! Anything wrong with having a personal opinion?"
"Yes." Beam answered. "I have seen angry partners,"
"But what if I won?"
Beam glared at him. How did he know...? "I dunno," she snarled. "Anyway...I gotta go,"
"Why go so soon, Beam?"
"I promised to buy Cyber supper," Beam said. This was actually the truth. "Bye!" She darted off.

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Beam sighed. The sun had now disappeared, and the moon--suspended in air, it seemed--hung lowly over the ocean.
She knew now that Eggman had been trying to trick her. But it was too late now. Too late.
She closed her eyes, and sighed once more. She left the beach with an unanswered question;
Who am I?
Chapter 1 - Stolen Emerald. Coming VERY SOON.
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It's good.I think you got eggman's sneakiness and deceit fullness right too!*rates 10/5*:P
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Cool Story.
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CYBER?!
HOW DARE YOU STEAL A COPYRIGHTED CHARACTER
Ha, ha, you can use Cyber. He's not in use.
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Thank you guys~ and I didn't know Cyber was your character Eboy. I created him for my other Beam series. I can give you the link for both stories if you want :3.
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Oh. Well, I created a technologically advanced Chao named Cyber for Little Planet Returns, then left because Snowy decided to pull out the brony.
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XD
Beam, for everyone whos wondering what she looks like: http://i37.tinypic.com/wbb4sy.jpg
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@Eboy:How was she supposed to know?You havent posted at all since she joined so there was little chance she would have known about your character.
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I have friendships! Your guys' friendship is important too me.

Btw, I wrote chapters Uno y Dos.
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:3 Friendship is magic AWESOME!
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XD
This BOOK talks about some personal friendships between Beam and other charries.
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Ok.
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Supposed to be a slightly sad story. Also, fun fact: created from my life. Just maneuvered it too fit something Sonic-like.
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Ok lets see it.:3
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~!!

Chapter 1
Stolen Emerald (part I)
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Beam awakened to the sound of a siren. She was beside the Casino, curled into a ball. Apparently she had chosen that spot to spend the night; which she thought was unwise. Her back ached like crazy, and her head seemed to be spinning. She didn't know whether it was from the siren or the hard floor.
She lifted herself from the ground and dusted dirt from her yellow one-sleeved long shirt. She guessed she should check out whatever was wrong.
She went into the hotel. Huh. Maybe she should pick up Amberstone. She turned left, to the elevator, and went inside.
When she arrived, the chao theme song blasted into her senstive cat ears. She groaned and plugged them, looking for her chao.
At last, Amberstone was spotted. He was napping in the very shallow water surrounding the Chao Statue. She leapt over the pond, accidently causing her red tennis shoes too land in the water, and picked up the napping chao. She gingerly dried him with her shirt.
A question mark appeared above Amberstone's emotiball as he awakened. Beam smiled. "Cone on, lazy. We gotta go investigate,"
"Chao!" He squeaked angrily.
Beam laughed and grabbed her backpack, one she had left earlier that week, and put him in his special pouch. "Stay there,"
Amberstone nodded and curled up, attempting to fall asleep again.
Beam slung her backpack over her shoulder and ran out, hoping the chase was still going on.
Indeed it was. Sonic was battling Knuckles; as usual. Every time Sonic dodged, Knuckles destroyed something. So of course the Police had to get involved.
Beam was relieved to see Sonic--but also dreaded encountering him. It would make her feel all the more guilty about her situation. If she talked to him, she would have to lie about hating Eggman. No. She did hate him...but she didn't. It was all so messed-up! Sometimes she hated Eggman, other times Sonic, and sometimes even herself.
Suddenly, the fighting stopped. A few seconds later, Knuckles' voice raged; "I'M NOT PAYING FIR ANYTHING!!!!!"
Beam watched as he stormed out of the crowd of policemen, grumbling. She turned back to the crowd, wondering what they had said.
She edged close enough to where she could hear.
"Ah, he just gets angry when people make fun of him for caring so much about that Emerald of his!" She heard Sonic say.
Emerald? The master Emerald...? thought Beam.
"Oh wow," said a policeman. "Why is he so tense?"
"Well, Eggman stole the Master Emerald recently." Sonic explained.
Bingo! Beam thought.
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030 Awesome!
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Permission to use Zero.

Great story, btw!
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