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Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!(Updated 7/13/13)

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Kyro sat in a helicopter.There were C.P.A. Agents on both sides of him.The C.P.A was the City Protection Agency.Why was he being handcuffed by these men and being taken to their top military base?Boy if he knew.All he knew was he had to get out!Before they were above the ocean!Once the agents started to look at each other and converse, he kicked at one the agents feet causing him to fall on the others. The agent that was cuffing him was startled giving Kyro and opertunity to headbutt him.He fell down unconscious and kyro jumped at the door to the helicopter. He opened it and a rush of wind blew into the copter. However some of the agents had recovered and one pointed a gun at him.
Chapter 1 coming soon...
Last edited by KeatonWood on Sun Jul 14, 2013 1:28 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Chapter 1 part 1
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The Agent put his finger on the trigger."FREEZE!"

Kyro turned around.He grinned."I don't know what you want with me but this ride is too low budget for me."He croushed slightly and turned back to the open door.He leapt onto a the copter and pulled a piece of it off.The shape of it was perfect.Like a snowboard.He leapt off the helicopter getting on the snowboard.He did a few spins in the air.He was falling towards the city.He was lucky enough to have landed on a slanted road where he proceeded to board down hill.Dodging cars a they came by was fun but he didnt want risk having more reason for CPA to come after him.So he stuck to the middle of the road.Everynow and then, random ramps came up.He quickly turned onto them and gained large amounts of air."Yaoo!"He would yell after everyone.Finaly, the road came to an end and he thrown forward into a small area with grass which softened the fall.
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Re: Adventures of Kyro The Hedgehog!

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Is it me, or does this sound familiar?

I'd suggest you're trying to follow my rainbow.
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Edited the first chapter because i felt like it.:P
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I have a feeling this story will end on a space colony.

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Your not too far.:P
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Chapter 1 part 2
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Kyro got up and brushed some grass and dirt of his blue sweater and Gray pants.He also wiped some out of hs Lime green fur.He looked ahead of him.There was a staircase with a rail next to it.He homing attacked the rail and rode it to the top.Once he landed, a CPA Guard Bot landed in front of him.Its arm cannons were loaded and aimed for him.Kyro sped behind the Robo and spindashed through its back.It explodd and dropped a chaos drive.Kyroignored it.He didnt have anytime for the chao garden.He ran along and reached the open road once again.Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a sky blue hedgehog getting carried away b a few flying Guard Robos.
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^ OH HEIL NO! JK
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^Dont worry.There is a reason.
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I know,
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LOVITY LOVITY LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!
And it also seems familiar. From sobic X 0.o
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These are really good Keaton! Me like the story!!
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Beam-The-Cat wrote:LOVITY LOVITY LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!
And it also seems familiar. From sobic X 0.o
Actually, it's from Sonic Adventure 2.
Sonic X copied Adventure 2.
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pls put spaces after . , etc.
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I was on a phone so doing that was very obnoxious and time consuming to do.
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Chapter 1 part 3
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Kyro rushed towards the captured hedgehogs. Once he reached the turn, he saw them flying over a building and managed to get a glimpse of a pink hedgehog with the sky blue one. The chase was on! Kyro couldn't climb buildings so he'd have to stick to the streets. He rushed down the rest of the rode coming up to a spring. It led to a higher path. Of course it only led to a road going up. He sighed and rushed through cars missing him by mere inches. He grinded down a rail at the end of said road which led him to the roof tops. Finally! And the CPA robos weren't too far. Kyro jumped from rooftop to rooftop finally catching up with the robos. There were two holding onto both hedgehogs and four accompanying them. All four turned to him. They were a different model than the last one! These were much larger. Perhaps four times his size! Boy distances can trick you. They aimed their arm cannons at Kyro and each one fired. Kyro jumped out of the way as a barrage of shots where fired where he had been. He managed to leap at ones head and kick it off. The other one next to it took the chance to hit him in the gut. He yelled out in pain as he crashed to the ground. He got up weakly to have them surrounding him. They had aimed at him and he could see the light in the cannons showing they were about to fire. Right before they could though, Kyro jumped over the shots causing the robos to shoot each other. As he predicted, they all fell down destroyed. Kyro turned back to see the two hedgehogs had gotten farther away.
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Nyaa exciting!! :3 can't wait to see what's next.
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Yay Pink hedgehog in the story!!
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Thx guys!((Who voted for me to not continue?!D:))Ill do the final part when i have time tonight if possible.
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Really?._.
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I voted for you too continue!
Actually, you donthave an option, kyro xD u leave me with SUSPENSE!
CONTINUE!
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