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Adventures of Mikey The Hedgehog

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Chapter 1, part I.
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Mikey was revving up her motorcycle. She had challenged her twin, Blast, to a challenge. A racing challenge.
Blast was in her red convertible. She eyed her sister slyly, and then took off. Mikey sped after her.
They were both speeding along Main Street, way beyond the speed limit. Two policemen started chasing them along the road. "Whoa!" Blast squeaked, but she didn't stop. She just sped up.
Mikey, on the other hand, wasn't troubled at all. She swerved through herds of cars and other vehicles. She let her hands free and stood up on her seat. "Look at me!" She teased Blast.
Blast just rolled her eyes and sped up.
Mikey plopped back on her seat and sped up so fast that the motorcycle's front wheel popped off the ground and stayed in the air. She continued on, and then finally landed back on the ground, sparks flying from underneath her wheels.
"Whoo!" She said, taking off her biker's helmet and shaking her quills wildly. "I win! I win!" She teased.
Blast screeched to a halt a few minutes after Mikey had won. "Whatevs, sis!" She sighed. She looked behind her, and the policemen were still on their tail.
Mikey shrugged and just waited for them.
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A dark-looking hedgehog had been watching them. He snickered menacingly and leapt off the building and landed on the tree they were parked under. They were perfect. Reckless, careless, and easy-going. Exactly what he needed!
Now...if they were naive, that would make him able to trick them. He hung on the branch from his feet, watching them, forever listening. "Hello," he spoke at last.
The hedgehogs jumped and squeaked. "Wha-?! Who are you?!"
"My name is Slicker," the hedgehog smiled menacingly, and the aky itself seemed to darken.
"Slicker...the hedgehog."
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:3 yay!More stories!Its good too!Can Kyro be in?Ill pm you the stuff.
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:D Kyro ish accepted. Working on part II now.
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Chapter 1, part II.
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Mikey backed up to her motorcycle. Blast was trembling. She could tell this guy was bad news.
The cops arrived in the nick of time. "Don't make attempt to get away!" She said sharply, flicking blonde hair out of her eyes. Inside the car was a green hedgehog.
Mikey immediately recognized him.
Kyro. Help. This guy is bad news, she mouthed.
The hedgehog--Kyro--gave her a quizzical look. Mikey facepalmed.
Blast looked around unhappily. She felt trapped; and she hated feeling trapped.
Slicker snarled and vanished.
"What the..." The policewoman mused, lowering her gun.
Suddenly, a foot appeared behind her and knocked her silly, and she collapsed on the ground.
Blast ran to her convertible, and Mikey ran to get Kyro. She shook the handle; but it was locked. She smashed the window with a rock.
"Come on!"
"Right behind you," Kyro said, and leapt out the window. Kyro opened the door to Blast's convertible and they sped off, Mikey high on their tails.
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Blast screeched to a halt in front of a shop. She was trembling all over. "That," she said. "Was scary!"
Mikey took off her helmet. "What'dya think happened to that lady?"
"Dunno," Kyro shrugged. "Should we go back?"
Blast chuckled. "With that Slicker dude? No way!"
"Slicker?" Asked Kyro.
Mikey nodded, fingering her quills. "Yup yup, Slicker. Some evil dude I figure, but..."
"But what?" Asked Kyro.
"He can't be that bad,"
"WHAT?!" shrieked Blast and Kyro in unison.
"What?" Mikey shrugged and sighed. She put back on her helmet and sped away.
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Lol, you got me right all the way!
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:)
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Chapter I, part III.
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Mikey screeched to a halt, panting. "Oh me..." She sighed. She slid off her helmet and rested her face in her left hand.
Then she sat up. She wondered if, by any chance, Slicker was still here. He wasn't. She sighed. Kyro and her sis was totally right! Why couldn't she just accept that some people just couldn't be good?
Blast's convertible appeared beside her. Kyro was in the backseat, looking concerned.
"Let's go," Blast said softly.
Mikey nodded and cranked the motor back, and put on their helmet. They drove past six crashed police cars. Luckily, they were all empty. Mikey just stared at them.
"Did that Slicker dude do this?" Kyro asked, amazed.
Mikey shrugged. "Possibly," she said. She pushed aside her Amy-like bangs.
Blast rolled her eyes. "Outta here," she said, and sped forward.
Mikey stayed behind. You could barely hear her motor as she passed the sights, and at last, she parked. Her blue eyes scanned the scene. Her eyes caught something. A quill; sticking out from one of the cars. Mikey gasped and leapt off her motorcycle, twisting it a bit in the process.
"Ohh..." The character groaned. Sky blue. She pulled out the limp character, and then--
"Snowy!" She shrieked. She tugged harder, and at last, the hedgehog was pulled free.
His leg was twisted backwards and a small trickle of blood smeared down his mouth.
"Oh lord," Mikey gasped. She slung the limp figure over her motorcycle and hopped on. "Hang in there," she said, and drove.
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Blast and Kyro were chillin' in a cafe. Blast was massaging her forehead with her fingers, as if she had a headache.
"She can be such a pain!" She sighed.
"It's not her fault. She tries to see the good in everybody," Kyro defended Mikey.
Blast shrugged. "I think its weak," she said.
Suddenly, Mikey pulled into the parkinglot with a temporarily unrecognizable hedgehog slung over to seat. "Guys!" She called, and burst in, making the bell jingle wildly.
Kyro snapped to attention. "What?!"
"Snowy...he's passed out, and...and..." Mikey stuttered.
"Does he need to go to the hospital?" Blast asked.
"Prolly," she said, still panicking. She was breathing heavily with worry.
"Then we'll get her there," Kyro said, a look of determination on his face. "Drive him there. We'll meet you,"
The cashier looked at them, confused.
Blast ignored and nodded at Kyro's plan just as Mikey fled out the door.

The end of Chapter 1!!
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:O Snowy no!
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Chapter 2 in progress.
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He did end up getting hurt :/ don worry there's a reason.
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Chapter 2, part I.
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Mikey paced outside Snowy's door. She sighed deeply, her fingers twitching. Kyro stood against the wall with folded arms, concerned and confused, and Blast was collapsed on the ground, sleeping.
"Broken feimer," the doctor said, walking out of the room.
"Oh no," Mikey gasped. Kyro's worried expression turned to horror.
"Wha-?!" Blast snorted, blinking. She rubbed her eyes.
"Snowy's got a broken feimer," Mikey explained.
"Ouch," Blast said gruffly. She laid back down and started to snore.
Mikey rolled her eyes, and turned to the doctor. "May we see him?"
"Family members only," the doctor said. "And besides, he's asleep."
Mikey scowled.
Kyro frowned. "But-
"No buts!" Snapped the doctor. He pushed them aside and walked down the hall.
"Touchy," Mikey shrugged. "Let's go in."
"But-"
"No buts!" Mikey immitated the doctor mockingly. "Come on," she pushed open the door.
Snowy was laying there, breathing slowly. Kyro frowned. "He looks awful,"
"Agreed," Mikey said. She carefully walked over..
Snowy blinked. "Wha-?"
"He's awake," Mikey said to Kyro.
Kyro nodded. "Yo Snowy!"
Snowy smiled at them both. "Hai guys,"
Finish part I later. Gtg NOW.
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Yay!Hes ok...sorta.Anyways, I like it alot!
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