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Beam's Story

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Chapter 1:
New Wall for Holatrolis
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I was sitting on a bench in Central Park. My silver bangs were falling over my eyes, and my shoelaces were coming untied, but I was in such a bad mood I didn't really care. What was the bad news?
Oh, i'll tell you the bad news!
Thanks to a certain evil genius, I--as well as others--couldn't go to the forest anymore! Why? Because Eggman was now the official mayor of Holatrolis! He had convinced everyone but me that he would do certain things for the community. Build a new wall? Ha, as if! But to my surprise, he actually did. He built a new wall. But it was a waste of his time, in my opinion. It wasn't like we needed a wall anymore. The only reason why we had the wall in the first place was so that we could keep sneaky crooks like him out!
But of course, twelve year olds couldn't vote for a new mayor anyway. So, what's the point? I guess that's just the way it'll be from now and on.
Anyway, that's the reason why I can't get out. The new wall.
You see, the old one had holes, and it was rotting away really fast. It was easy to break through, and there were little tunnels under it created from dogs and such. You could get out anytime you wanted! But now Eggman had made a new one, and he placed guards at the gate.
I sighed. I would never get back in the wild again! I stood up and kicked a stone, which unfortunately for me, stayed in place. I yelped and clutched my toe, having to hop on one foot. This made me lose my balance and topple backwards, hitting my head on the bench I had been sitting on. "Ow..." I moaned, rubbing the bruise.
I blew out a puff of air and stood up again. Well, I guess it wouldn't hurt to have a walk.
It's not like I could do anything else anyways.
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Thanks! Chapter 2 coming very soon.
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Chapter 2:
My first encounter with Eggman's Bots
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On my walk, I had a brilliant idea. Just as soon as I passed the Icecream Shop, it came to me...
I could get icecream.
No, I'm kidding. But I did end up getting icecream for myself. Mint chocolate chip...mmm.
Anywho, I did form a plan. I was really wanting to get back in the wild; not just to have fun, but to defy Eggman. He deserves it, I mean, he does have at least a thousand records of his crimes. Everytime he does something nice for people...KABLOOWY! He turns everything around and goes double-crosser on us all. Yet every time he lies, he seems to get away with it. But not once has he fooled me.
Not ever.
Well, actually, I am a very naive and gullible person. I have, at some points, listened to Eggman. But all that didn't last long. I, of course, figured out his plan later on and convinced everybody to stop listening to him.
Pretty brave for a twelve year-old, huh?
Yeah. I'm pretty proud of myself for that.
Anyway, I had formed a plan. On my way home, I went to get my beat friend, Cyber the Hedgehog.
Cyber came up to the door lazily and rubbed his eyes. "What is it, Beam?"
"Wanna get back in the wild?!" I asked excitedly.
"No," grumbled Cyber.
I sighed. "Cyber, did you stay up late playing that videogame of yours?"
"No, why do you ask?" Cyber seemed to be more attentive at that time.
I chuckled. It really was obvious. "Because you've got NintendoDS button marks imprinted on your left cheek,"
Cyber flushed. "Maybe i did. So what?"
"I need your help defying Eggman!" I Chirped.
Cyber sighed. "Whatever. I'll be right back," he shut the door.
I tapped my foot, arms folded. I started twirling about, bored. Cyber sure did take a long time. At last, he opened the door. His newsboy cap was firmly planted on his head, and instead of Transformer pajamas, he had a short sleeved shirt and blue jean shorts
"Lezza go!" I leapt away from the door and took off. I heard Cyber sigh as he darted after me, which made me laugh. Cyber could be pretty lazy sometimes.
Sometime that day, we reached the wall. "Ok, Cyber. You distract the guards while I throw a rope over the wall, ok?"
Cyber sweatdropped. "Me?! This was your idea!"
I shrugged. "Do you want to climb over that wall?"
We both looked up. The wall was at least 19 feet high. Cyber sighed. "Um. Not really. But what am I supposed to do as a distraction?"
"Just ask a question or something," I answered as I threw the rope over. I made sure the rope was secure, and started climbing. Cyber watched me for a second, then darted over to the guards.
"Umm, sirs..." I heard him say. "How...old are you?"
I almost facepalmed, but before I did I realized I was about 8 feet in the air. Why was Cyber so bad at striking up conversation?!
"56 years of age," the robots replied mechanically.
"Favorite color?" Cyber tried again.
"White; the color of an egg."
I was almost too the top of the wall.
"Umm. What would you do if something tried to climb up your wall?" Cyber asked. I froze in my tracks. Would he really...?
"Shoot and exterminate," the robots replied in unison.
I gasped, then let one hand free and clapped my mouth shut. The robots turned to me. "Target spotted. Shoot,"
I shrieked and jerked myself up the rope just as lasers started pelting the wall. I attempted to scramble up, but the bullet cut my rope and I plummeted to the ground. "Oof!"
"Oh dear," Cyber squeaked.
"Exterminate. Exterminate."
"I SURRENDER!!!" I shouted at the top of my lungs, scared for my life.
The robots' lasers came to a stop. "Must bring to Eggman," they said, and ceased my arms.
And Cyber just stood there, watching.
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Cyber doesn't seem innocent to me...hm.
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NYAAAAAAA!CANT WAIT!
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Chapter 3:
I figure something out.
((Part 1))
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I wondered why Cyber wasn't trying to help. But I didn't have time to ask before I was carried off to Eggman's base, and rudely thrown on the floor. "Oof!" I squeaked. I leapt up and dusted off my shirt. "RUDE!!" I shouted angrily.
"Ahh, welcome. Miss Beam, giver of the speeches." Eggman's voice said.
"That's not what Beam means," I said, turning around. There stood my foe.
"Whatever, that does not matter now," said Eggman. "So, my bots tell me you were attempting to Escape Holatrolis,"
I nodded. "So what?"
"There's a punishment for that,"
I frowned. "What?"
"Time travel,"
My heart pounded violently, but I answered calmly; "Why is that a punishment?"
"Because..." Eggman smiled slightly. "I'm sending you too the time of Maelo."
"Who's--" before i could finish my character, a canister shot upwards around me. I shrieked in shock as everything went white...
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Nice!But there has been A LOT of Time travel in your stories...
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I love time travel. And besides...I didn't finish my other stories...
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Are they connected?
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I dunno.
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*DERPY FACE!*I think they are... can Kyro be in it?
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Sure~
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:> YAY! Thanks!
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