The Adventures of Penn and Cake (Chao Fanfic) (Intro)

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Snowy's immaturity level is at a record high.
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Just saying.
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Yep. Hatersgonnahate..
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The Adventures of Penn and Cake (Chao Fanfic) (Part Three)

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The scene appears as it was left off in part two, Cake bolted out the door on his quest to re-pay Penn with a box of cereal.

*The scene appears next on Cake, as he is running throughout the whole Fruit Plains, searching everywhere for a box of cereal, usually Penn is the one who gets the cereal, so he has no idea where to find some Fruit Loops.*

"Good gosh I'm tired, I need to take a rest." says Cake.

*He would then take a rest on the side of a Fruit Tree, which are common in the Fruit Plains.*

*After about two hours, he finally wakes up unvoluntarily, as a Fruit falls straight on his head, he gets very startled and yells, as he looks right next to him and sees a baby Chao.*

*The unexperienced baby Chao is shocked, as the baby Chao starts crying.*

"Gosh darn it..." Cake says to himself.

*Suddenly, a huge Neutral/Fighting/Fighting Chao runs over to his child, wondering what in the heck happened.*

"Oh... my... gosh..." Cake would say to himself, as the parent would grunt.

*The parent would then take a huge swing at Cake, hitting him right in the stomach, obviously knocking Cake out on the first hit.*

*Cake had been passed out for a few hours, appearing in the hands of a Hero/Flying/Flying Chao.*

"Who... are you...?" asks Cake.

"My identity is secret, I saw you passed out by a Fruit Tree, so I brought you to my home for you to rest." says the Mysterious Chao.

*The scene would cut to black.*

MYSTERIOUS CHAO:

The scene would go onto this Chao's face. Mysterious Chao is a Hero/Flying/Flying Chao. This Chao is very handsome with huge purple antennas coming down from it's head. It has a very large scar coming across it's forehead. More information will be revealed later on.

*The scene would then cut onto Cake, whom has just woken up from being passed out, Cake would yawn, shake his head and rub his eyes.*

"I was on my quest to look for a box of cereal for my friend, on the way I needed to take a rest and fell asleep on the side of a Fruit Tree. Then I was woken up by a huge fruit landing on my head and screamed. Then there was a baby Chao that started crying and I got beat down by it's parent." says Cake.

"I saw you on the sidewalk, you had pretty bad bleeding. So I took you up and flew you to my house. Then I patched you up." says the Mysterious Chao.

"By the way, do you have a box of cereal that I could have? I really need one so I can bring a box home for my friend." says Cake.

"Yes infact I do. I have two boxes of Fruit Loops, I will get one for you." says the Mysterious Chao.

*The Mysterious Chao then goes down to his kitchen, which is very tidy and well cleaned, and go to the pantry. He would then open the pantry door and grab a box of Fruit Loops.*

*The Mysterious Chao would then go up the stairs and give Cake a box of Fruit Loops.*

"Here you go." says the Mysterious Chao.

"Thank you so much, also, could you give me a ride home? I'll show you where I live." asks Cake.

"Sure thing. You probably can't get home on your own anyways, since you're hurt." says the Mysterious Chao.

*They would then walk down the stairs, Cake has his box of Fruit Loops in hand, as they walk out the door. The Mysterious Chao would then grab Cake as they fly home back to Cake and Penn's house.*

"This it?" says the Mysterious Chao.

"Yep, it sure is." says Cake.

"Okay then, I guess this is farewell." says the Mysterious Chao, dropping Cake by his doorstep.

"I really owe you one, I hope I will see you again sometime." says Cake.

"I hope so too. Now I must go before it gets dark, bye!" says the Mysterious Chao as he flies away back to his home.

"Bye!" yells Cake, waving to the Mysterious Chao.

*Cake would smile, as he would walk into the house, seeing Penn standing up in the kitchen, looking mad.*

"That took you long enough, eight freaking hours." says Penn, in an angry tone.

"Sorry Penn, it's a long story. But the good news is I got the box of Fruit Loops." says Cake.

"Good job, now promise me you won't eat them all again." says Penn.

"Alright, I promise." says Cake, sincerely.

"Good, now let's get to bed, I'm tired." says Penn.

"You're telling me." says Cake, tiredly.

*They both would walk upstairs, as the scene fades out.*

END OF PART THREE

Next time on the Adventures of Penn and Cake, we meet a new friend!
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Someone called?
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Yup, did you like part three?
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Beautiful.

You have a really cool way of telling stories!
And i love the part where Penn says it took 8 hours for him to find cereal xD i live it.
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"COO-COO FOR COCOA PUFFS!" Cake says, bouncing around like a familiar bird.
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Lol.

Silly rabbit, Trix are for kids.
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Cap'n Crunch?

I'm a cereal killer.
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XD
Cap'n Crunch. My fave cereal.
Good thing Snowy's nit online or he'd put a stop to this x3
But srsly, let's not go off-topic.
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OOT posts need to stop!
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See? This is what I was talking about!
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Part four will be written now! So stay tuned!
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Yay~!
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