Chao Island: The Fan-Fic

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Chao Island: The Fan-Fic

Post by eblu »

CIAUfest is over, but I can still make a fan-fic about CI.
Also, this is my first foray into writing, so expect a slow start.

PROLOGUE
Spoiler:
Chao Island was a nice place to be. Everyone was friends (well, sort of), and everyone could collaborate.
Everyone was doing the same thing as usual. Mooncow making sure everyone was in check, Blade chattering about the internet slang that is "Do you even lift, bro?", the 12-year-olds prodding the section of the Island where nothing Chao-related happens. However, today, something was happening behind the scenes...
Constructive criticism, tips, and ideas are encouraged.
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Re: Chao Island: The Fan-Fic

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When are you going to start writing the story?
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Re: Chao Island: The Fan-Fic

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When I have ideas.

For now, only the prologue. It's like natural progression, and helps give users a feel for what I will post.
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Re: Chao Island: The Fan-Fic

Post by Salnalus »

Sounds interesting.
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Re: Chao Island: The Fan-Fic

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I thought this up on a whim, so I'll need more depth. I promise the following chapters will include more.
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Re: Chao Island: The Fan-Fic

Post by Lamby »

Eboy, a good way to make sure you post regularly is to write about 500 words of content daily. Normally I would advise 1,000 daily, but since you're starting out, 500 a day should keep your story fleshed out. Let me know if you need any proofreading/advice. Feel free to PM me.
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Re: Chao Island: The Fan-Fic

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Okay, this thing's on hiatus until I think of a plot.

Hang in there.
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Re: Chao Island: The Fan-Fic

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Re: Chao Island: The Fan-Fic

Post by ςθηιс »

An actual CI fan fiction? This is going to be good! *waits for the first chapter*
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