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Group writing project.

Extrasensory contains:
Frequent mild language
Infrequent strong language
Infrequent sexual content
Frequent blood, gore, and many other potentially triggering subjects


- - -

Rain.

Cold, heavy rain.

That is what was pouring on the night of April 15th, 2003. This also happened to be the tenth birthday of a young girl by the name of Leila Magnolia. Said girl lived out her days in a cozy, somewhat cramped household in a spacious city.

"I don't CARE what you think. Stop trying to take control of this family! You cause so many fucking problems for a little girl!"

Physical violence was often resorted to in that household, brought on to accompany the ever-present tongue lashings that went full-circle.

"You'll call the police, huh? I'd like to see you try."
"Go ahead, but know this, Leila. You'll be taken too. You've done more wrong than we have, sweetheart."

Yes, Leila Magnolia lived in a quite chaotic household, you see. But, it was the only place she had, the only place she could call her home, no matter how broken and dysfunctional it was. She was brainwashed, and paralyzed into believing that she was the seed of discord that sprouted the family's trees of hatred, and thus she remained in a poor state until this day, April 15th.

"Hello, one of your neighbors seems to have called us reporting that you may be abusing your daughter. We're here to investigate, and take action as we see fit."

And, as the opportunity arose, Leila Magnolia saved herself from a tranquil hell by entering the room at that precise moment in time.

"Is she... crying?"

"Let's see this child, ma'am."

"So many bruises... This can't just be from roughhousing, either. There's a fresh handprint at the base of her arm."

"Does this child happen to have a diary, ma'am?"

"Ma'am, I believe we have substantial evidence to put both you and your husband away. This is too much to be considered mere coincidence. Your daughter will be entering our custody for the time being."

Leila Magnolia was no longer synonymous with the word "sorrow", but the true seed of discord was only then beginning to spill from that moment onwards.


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"We're taking you to the police station, Leila. We want you to tell us exactly what your mother and father have done to you. Everything."

"Yes, I know."

Leila was not pleased about the affairs currently at hand. She had no time to gather her belongings, being informed that they would return for them at a later time. As such, she had been dragged into public wearing a ragged, ripped, grey shirt with raglan sleeves, and shorts cannibalized from a regular-length pair of pants.

After a short ride, she and the officers who had taken custody of her arrived at the station, deciding to sit in the vehicle for a short while before leaving it.

"Where have my parents been taken?" Leila pondered, running her small, delicate fingers through her silky, brown hair.

"To another facility for questioning," one of the officers replied, craning his neck back at Leila. She sat with a blank look on her face, wearing a distant and solemn gaze.

"...Ah. As I expected..." Leila mumbled, opening the car's door and standing to exit. She gently shut it behind her afterward, leaning against the exterior. As the officers got out, Leila spoke once more.

"Would you like me to enter?" she inquired calmly, staring down one of the officers with an unwavering glare.

"Yes. Head down the first hall on the left from the lobby. Take it all the way back, then turn right and enter the first door you see."

"I know."

"...Alright. We'll... We'll be in there shortly, Leila."

"Yes, sir," Leila replied, walking away from the car and into the tinted glass doors that served as the facility's entrance.

The area was completely silent, save for Leila's muffled footsteps on the indoor-outdoor carpeting. The walls were lined with tacky, dated, and peeling wallpaper. Various desks sat around, each with landlines installed on them.

Following her directions, Leila made her way down the path that the officer described and faced the door that she had been ordered to enter. It was labelled "Interrogation", as expected. Leila turned the knob slowly, pulling open the door and stepping inside.

Darkness.

Plenty of darkness provided a skin for the room, obscuring its detail, save for a small circle of light in what was presumed to be the center. Leila stood patiently in the corner, awaiting the arrival of the two officers.

Eventually, the time did come. The darkness scurried across the floor and hid in the room's depths as one of the officers opened the door, allowing light to seep in. The two men walked inside, closing the door behind them. The darkness assumed its standard position gradually as they walked into the center spotlight, motioning for Leila to approach.

"Alright. We're going to cross-examine what you're about to well us with that your parents will, so don't try to stretch the truth."

"I know."

"Please state your full name," the first officer spoke calmly as he turned on a tape recorder.

"Leila Marie Magnolia."

- - -

After the interrogation ceased, Leila emerged from the room along with the two officers.

"You have to-" the second officer began to say, but Leila interrupted him.

"I have to stay here overnight, and if my story provides enough evidence to your case, which it will, you'll attempt to sign me over for adoption," Leila spoke firmly and clearly. "It all makes sense now..." she whispered to herself, turning away from the officers. Her bangs covered her eyes, obscuring her facial features.

The officers stared at Leila in disbelief.

"There's something very wrong with this girl. Send her to our psychiatric department."

- - -

More dark, unfamiliar rooms.

"Leila, what do you picture in your head?"

"My head? Do you mean my mind? You do."

"Ah... Yes."

"I see a lot of things. Some are beautiful. Many are disturbing. They lack form, and have no context. They exist only as fragments of a situation, as if they're a puzzle... waiting to be filled."

"I see... Tell me, what am I about to do, Leila?"

"You're preparing to ask me to detail my home life more than what the other men did. I refuse to divulge any further details."

The psychiatrist sat still, stunned, for a moment.

"Tell me, Leila... Will this rain stop tomorrow?"

"No. It will fill the gutters, and overflow into the tracts, flooding them for exactly one week and six days. Then, the torrent will recede, and it will be sunny again."

"What are today's winning lottery numbers?"

"Ten. Eight. Fourteen. Nine. Twelve. One."

- - -

"I'm going to sound absurd, but... I think this girl may a gift."

"A.. gift?"

"ESP."

- - -

Leila stepped forth into the center of the lobby, noticing a new face staring down at her. This young man gazed at her with a welcoming smile as she approached him. He had short brown hair and glossy, hazel eyes, accompanying a masculine face, free of blemishes and imperfections. He wore a black trenchcoat; however, it was buttoned, obscuring the clothing underneath.

"Hi there, little flower!" the man chirped, flashing Leila a devious grin. "My name is-"

"Your name is Christian. I don't like you, but I will cooperate with you for the continued safety of our beautiful city."

"Well, then!" Christian bellowed, clapping his hands together loudly. He escorted Leila out of the room, creeping down the hallway. Eventually, he reached an open door, and turned to enter, dragging Leila with him.

"This is the main office of the city's police office. Little flower, I have something in mind for you, but I need you to show me what you can do, just once more."

"You are going to sit a rose outside of the window at the east side of the room. The rose will be pollinated, in thirteen days exactly."

"...Well, then!" Christian echoed. He walked across the cluttered office; books were scattered all over the floor, and papers were piled next to the laptop sitting on the desk. There were mahogany shelves lined with many various trinkets furnishing the back of the room. Christian reached into the pile of papers on his desk and withdrew a list of twelve names.

"Here's a list of the city's most wanted convicts, listed by aliases they've used or are using."

"I know," Leila replied.

"Good!" Christian chimed.

"Red Velvet."
"Archer."
"Twinterror."
"Psychosa."
"Endgame.
"Rira."
"Nightshade."
"Nympho."
"Smile."
"Medusa."
"Revolver."
"Savior."

Christian listed off the names, bottom to top.

"You want me to give you information on Red Velvet. Then, you're going to send a test squad to verify my words, and afterwards, I'll be sent with little to no training or combat knowledge to dispatch him."

"Well-"

"His name is Valen Kutisen. He lives in the slums of Skyway under the name Shapiro Scolia. He's a gore fetishist who murders sightly, young women and wears their skin to become sexually excited. He loves in an apartment complex- the Lakeview complex, at door sixteen. I shall terminate him with extreme prejudice, if you demand it."

- - -

Six members of the police force quietly but intently made their way up the outdoor stairs of the Lakeview apartment complex, reaching door sixteen. They gave a light tap to the door, and shortly afterward, a smiling face greeted them after opening the door.

"Are you Shapiro Scolia, sir?"

"Why, yes, that would be me."

From the outside, a youthful and fair-skinned beauty could be seen lying across the couch in what was presumably the den.

"We've received complaints of loud noises arising from this house..." one of the officers explained, lying through his teeth. "and we've come to investigate it."

"Ah, yes, that would almost definitely be the cries of pleasure from my partner, Ciel!" the man said, pointing to the dame on the couch.

"We still wish to enter and investigate."

"...Alright, sirs! Make yourselves right at home."

The apartment itself seemed to be relatively clean, with not much out of place. The den was lit solely by windows, which were draped for the time being. A couch and love seat rested in the center of the room, adjacent to a large television. A conspicuous closet lied at the first end of the room.

Mentally citing it as an obvious target, the police approached the closet, much to Shapiro's visible dismay. They opened the door cautiously and collectively stepped inside, examining the innards. It seemed to check out cleanly.

"Are you sure that Leila kid isn't just..." one of the officers started, leaning back into one of the closet's walls. Just as he touched it, it seemed to give way. The wall violently collapsed backwards with a heavy slam against the wooden floor, unsettling dust as it made impact.

The other officers turned around the gaze into the newly formed passageway. Faintly, the glimmer of a carving knife could be seen in the darkness beyond the point of the wall.

"Now, now, we can't have this, gentlemen. I thought you'd play nice! I'm actually kind of disappointed..."

- - -

"Well... It's midnight and the test squad hasn't made a peep."

"Valen murdered them all in cold blood."

"Okay, little Leila, if you're so sure of that, I'll send you to the apartment tomorrow."

"I know you will." Leila replied, smiling dimly.

"You have to be getting tired, right?"

"I guess so."

Christian walked over to one of the office chairs and lifted out the lengthy back cushion. It was easily tall enough for a small girl such as Leila to sleep on.

He laid it across the middle of the office floor, motioning for Leila's approach. She reluctantly moved to the cushion and sat down on it, staring up at Christian. He lifted a nearby area rug and covered her with it, kneeling next to her.

"I know things are scary, but trust me, everything will all be better soon."

"No. It won't."

Christian showed a concerned look for a moment before leaning over Leila. He planted a small "goodnight" kiss on her forehad and turned around, leaving the room.

"Disgusting," Leila muttered.

- - -

4 / 16 / 03

- - -

Leila approached the Lakeview complex, a purse slung over her shoulder. It was given to her by Christian, and contained everything she would need to defend herself if her situation became dire. As she drew nearer to her destination, however, the seed of discord began to sprout.

"Here they come."

Immediately as she spoke, the ilk of bassy rap music cluttered the air. A car could be seen approaching in the distance, its poor gold paintjob peeling back against the wind.

"You motherfucker, Shapiro!" a voice violently yelled from inside the car. The driver rolled their window down.

Gunfire commenced.

Even though she had been prepared beforehand, Leila was still harshly shocked and ducked down, avoiding all but two of the bullets. They grazed her right arm, tearing the sleeve of her shirt open and drawing a substantial amount of blood. Suddenly, a second round of gunfire began spewing out of the car. Leila tossed her purse to the side and hid under the stairway to Shapiro's floor, sitting in the dirt.

The gunfire shattered a window of the apartment, but Leila was surprisingly no worse off than she was before. The car's windows suddenly closed, and the person behind the shooting drove off. Just as Leila began to crawl through the glass to retrieve her purse, she heard a door open above her.

The stairs creaked as Shapiro made his way to the ground level, staring down at Leila, who was down on all fours in the dirt.

"Who are you, pretty little lady?"

Leila glanced up at Shapiro, the sun creeping up over the horizon as it approached daybreak. "My name is Leila Magnolia. And, I'm not pretty."

"You should never underestimate your beauty, my dear. Everything about you is so lovely, especially your face. It glows so wonderfully in this dim light."

"I don't understand. Just... if you could get my purse for me, I'll be on my way."

"Ah, yes. You really shouldn't handle broken glass, you know. It wouldn't be wise to slice your hand up by accident, you know?"

Shapiro walked over and sorted through the glass to retrieve Leila's purse, but by the time he brought it back to her, she had fainted from blood loss due to the bullet injuries.

"Oh dear, we'll just have to take her in I suppose!" Shapiro sighed, lifting Leila's airy form and carrying her upstairs into his apartment.

- - -

"...Saliva." Leila muttered as she woke up on Shapiro's couch. Her wounds seemed to be clean.

"I know where he is."

Leila immediately arose from the couch, and approached the closet. Upon opening it, she was greeted with the pleasant sight of the test squad's lifeless corpses. They had been nailed to the wall, through their eyesockets.

"So... Archer helped too, huh?"

The nails were long and thick, penetrating the eye straight through and piercing the back of the skull as well as the skin on the outside. Dried blood was chipping off and sticking to the eyes' sclera, creating a sickly image.

Leila didn't wait to look for long.

She turned and entered the mysterious room that the fake wall had been guarding, stumbling through the dark. A thick, pungent scent of death filled the air.

Leila's foot hit something on the ground; it rattled with a metallic chime.

"This is the carving knife he's using to disembowel Ciel."

It was a lengthy knife, covered in both old blood and new blood. It was still dripping, presumably from what its wielder had done to Ciel. Leila kept the knife.

"The lights are on the west wall."

She navigated carefully through the darkness and reached a protrusion in the wall.l Pressing it switched on a luminescent light, bringing an obnoxious, droning hum with it.

The room's floors were brittle and cracked under each step, due to the layers and layers of hardened blood that coated them. At the far end of the room lied Velvet, dropping his pseudonym.

Leila approached, feeling slightly nauseous.

"Is this how you get off, Valen?" Leila scoffed, staring at Velvet. He was in the bare nude, blood dripping from his limbs and erect member. Yes, Velvet had murdered Ciel, and was now clothing himself in her skin. He turned to face Leila, dropping Ciel's skin on the floor. It quickly crumpled, its empty, black eyesockets staring into Leila's soul.

"You're having a nightmare. Move along." Velvet demanded. He turned on a dime, approaching the back of the room, where he entered what seemed to be another closet. The bloodied floors crinkled underneath his bare feet and tickled them, exciting him further.

"I know what Valen is trying to do."

Leila followed him to the back of the room, completely ignoring the various torture instruments and test tubes outfitting the room. When she finally reached the back of the room, she opened the closet without hesitation.

In the closet, skins upon skins of various girls were hung from coathangers. A musky, noxious scent permeated the area.

Leila stabbed forward with Velvet's carving knife without any hesitation whatsoever. With a satisfying squelch, it pierced straight through all of the skins and hit something living at the back- Velvet. He had been waiting to ambush and kill Leila.

He was now dispatched.

Stagnant blood splattered everywhere, soaking the floor, ceiling, and walls, as well as Leila's hair, face, and clothing.

"Disgusting."

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I seriously love Valen, just, I'm so happy I had a say in what he was going to be like.

Yeah so, I can't wait to see more of this and get to Nympho and Smile.
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This is a very interesting and gripping story. Great job on the collaboration and I hope to see more.

Criticism:
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I think you should tighten up your diction and be a little more precise with your description, because while you have a lot of words that sound nice together, you're sometimes creating vague imagery that linguistically does not make sense and could be said much more directly. Being flowery is something you should do sparingly, if at all. I will go through a few instances of what I'm talking about:
That is what was pouring on the night of April 15th, 2003. This also happened to be the tenth birthday of a young girl by the name of Leila Magnolia. Said girl lived out her days in a cozy, somewhat coddled household in a spacious city.
What do you mean by "coddled household?" Are you saying the family is being treated excessively with care and kindness? Because that is all these two words can mean together. Either you mean a different word, or you haven't explained this clearly enough. All description must by justified by something the reader is shown, or all it is is words that could mean anything.
Physical violence was often resorted to in that household, brought on to accompany the ever-present tongue lashings that went full-circle.
Avoid the passive voice. Writing flows better when the subject is at the beginning of a sentence, i.e. "The household often resorted to physical violence."
Yes, Leila Magnolia lived in a quite chaotic household, you see. But, it was the only place she had, the only place she could call her home, no matter how broken and dysfunctional it was. She was brainwashed, and paralyzed into believing that she was the seed of discord that sprouted the family's trees of hatred, and thus she remained in a poor state until this day, April 15th.
If the household is coddled it would have some semblance of structure. And if the household acts predictable, how can it be chaotic. You are sending the reader mixed signals.
tranquil hell
Tranquil doesn't mean quiet or stagnant. It means free from turmoil, which hell is not.
Leila Magnolia was no longer synonymous with the word "sorrow", but the true seed of discord was only then beginning to spill from that moment onwards.
This is vague. Why not simply say the worst was yet to come? Foreshadowing must be succinct or else it's forgettable.
Plenty of darkness provided a skin for the room, obscuring its detail, save for a small circle of light in what was presumed to be the center.
Darkness is not tangible, therefore it needs no quantification like plenty. There is darkness or there isn't. The skin metaphor is dubious, because darkness isn't covering the walls. There is just an absence of light. This may seem nitpicky, but metaphors must draw a logical comparison that suits the context of the situation.
Eventually, the time did come. The darkness scurried across the floor and hid in the room's depths as one of the officers opened the door, allowing light to seep in. The two men walked inside, closing the door behind them. The darkness assumed its standard position gradually as they walked into the center spotlight, motioning for Leila to approach.
This personification could only be justified if light entering the room had prompted the darkness to "move." Written like this you are giving darkness a sentience that breaks metaphor code.

The characterization is also iffy. I understand that she has been a victim of abuse, but you can't rely on circumstances alone to establish character. There needs to be development and visible reactions to things so that readers can extrapolate who she is. Merely establishing what she is makes for a stock character. But, I do understand the story is early on.
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Addressing criticisms.
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The improper use of "coddled" was due to me misremembering the meaning of the word. It has been edited accordingly.
I understand the criticisms of the passive voice, however truthfully that seems to be something that is subjective to preference from what I've seen.
Tranquil hell was an intentional oxymoron to show Leila's confusion over her position.
The "skin" comment was a bit iffy but I was going out of my way to provide foreshadowing for Red Velvet's quirk.
I'll work on the characterization more as the story advances. The way I have it planned in my mind means it's going to be fairly uniform and stock until around the fifth or sixth case, but I'll do what I can to make it more interesting until then.
Second chapter SHOULD be coming later today.
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Yeah, I figured you were still getting to the characterization.

Not criticism, just some elaboration that I probably should have explained better:
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There is a scholarly debate between passive and active voice; some writers will say it is okay to use, and some will advise against it. I advise against it only because passive voice has a very special use and that use can be very confusing to young writers, but it may be that you can grasp it. You sound very aware of what you're doing; your response to my feedback is very perceptive, after all. And it makes me happy to see you can decide for yourself what advice to follow rather than accepting everything I say. That is a good quality for a writer to have. But now I'm gushing, so back to the point, ha ha.
Owl Purdue wrote:Active voice is used for most non-scientific writing. Using active voice for the majority of your sentences makes your meaning clear for readers, and keeps the sentences from becoming too complicated or wordy. Even in scientific writing, too much use of passive voice can cloud the meaning of your sentences. Sentences in active voice are also more concise than those in passive voice because fewer words are required to express action in active voice than in passive.
Towson EDU wrote:Because it is more direct, most writers prefer to use the active voice whenever possible.

The passive voice may be a better choice, however, when:
  • The doer of the action is unknown, unwanted, or unneeded in the sentence

    The writer wishes to emphasize the action of the sentence rather than the doer of the action

    The writer wishes to use passive voice for sentence variety [slower, suspenseful pacing]
While passive voice isn't incorrect, when using it the less concise and more vague the sentence will become, so make sure the rhetoric outweighs the clarity. I won't tell you you're using it incorrectly because only you know what rhetoric you're going for, but here is something many creative writing teachers will say: if writing in the active voice doesn't change what you meant in the passive voice, all it adds is words.

tl;dr Some passive v. active guidelines to help you decide the best approach. I'm not trying to persuade you to change, just express how much responsibility the passive voice carries, so that when you do use it, you're getting bang for your words. But you're definitely not overusing passive voice, so I apologize for sounding myopic or nitpicky. It wasn't a criticism: more like a "I see you like passive voice, so be aware of accidental misuse because even I botch it," if that makes sense. I came off rigid by mistake. Sorry about that.
I'm looking forward to chapter two! I hope everyone is following this: you are quite talented in general.
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"Now then, sirs and madams! Would you like something to eat? You've all done very well to come this far, so why not sit down and relax?"

The young man pushed his jet black hair to the side and opened his supply bag, sitting it on the dirt road of the trail. Quickly, he removed several packed lunches and handed them to his contemporaries, who paired off and sat under the nearby trees to enjoy their meals in the shade.

"Oh! I just felt something... down there!" the man anxiously laughed. "I'll be right back. I have to use the restroom. Enjoy your snacks!" he continued, slinging the supply bag over his shoulder and running off hastily.

Jun-suh Youn was by no means an average hiker.

As soon as he managed to escape his comrades' collective fields of view, Jun-suh removed a miniature bow from his supply bag. Drawing matching arrows, he gazed over at his next victims, a young couple sitting next to a particularly thick tree.

"Huh... Perhaps I could kill them both. Yes, that would work," Jun-suh thought, readying his bow and arrow. A tight stretching sound could be heard, but only for an instant. "...No, actually.... I'll let the girl survive. That way, she'll suffer longer."

He let go of the bow's string, sending a masterfully fired arrow straight into the young man's eye. It pierced his skull, along with the outer skin on the back of his head, impaling him on the bark of the tree.

"Perfect shot!" Jun exclaimed, smiling to himself. He picked his supply bag back up and emerged from the hiding place, attempting to act innocent for the now-screaming crowd. "What did I mi- What just happened there?! Oh my..." Jun cried out, staring at the twitching body of the young lover, pinned to the tree. "I suggest that you all leave immediately! I will call the authorities for you. You should appreciate my kindness, you know! Risking my life to stay here... What a selfless and courageous man I am!"

Immediately, as Jun removed his cellphone, everyone fled like bugs.

"Fucking roaches," Jun muttered, dialing the number of a certain Valen Kutisen. The phone barely rang for for a second before being picked up. A young, girlish voice spoke on the other end.

"Hi, Jun-suh. I'm sorry, but this number isn't available anymore, and won't be for a long time," Leila spoke calmly before ripping the phone out of the wall. The commotion caused Jun to instantaneously pull the phone away from his ear, whining softly.

"So... Looks like someone got him. Could the rumors be true...?" Jun sighed, walking over to the tree where his victim waited.

"Hi, welcome back to reality," Jun remarked, in a deadpan voice before flashing a small smirk. He ripped the arrow out of the young man's eye, spilling the accumulated blood and fluid on the dirt and grass below.

"Please... stop..," the victim muttered, his voice frail and weak from screaming for so long. Jun pinned him to the tree by holding his arms. He squirmed and struggled to the best of his ability, moaning pathetically. "Please! Just... just, let me see my girlfriend one more time!"

"What's that? I couldn't hear you..."

"Just let me see her! We're supposed to get married tomorrow!"

"Sorry, sir, but you won't be seeing much of anything tomorrow."

Jun jammed the arrow into the young lover's left eye, causing him to elicit a satisfying scream of pain, kicking and flailing.

"Stop your fucking crying!" Jun screeched, kicking the target in the ribs with authority. HE fell to the ground, weakly trembling and unable to move.

"I'd love to know, sir, what family do you have? I'm sure they won't miss you, considering you aren't significant to anyone in the slightest, but I'd still like to know," Jun explained, smiling mischievously.

More screaming filled the air.

"You worthless piece of shit! Who says you get to sit there and not answer my questions?! I I treated you so kindly, and this is how you fucking repay me?!"

"Someone... help me!" the victim yelled at the top of his lungs. His voice finally gave out.

"Silly boy, nobody can hear you!" Jun giggled. He removed his arrow from the second, now-mutilated eye, and used it to slit the young man's throat. Blood began to slowly pour out of the gap in his flesh before leaking out full-on, all over his neck.

"Any last requests before you bleed out?"
"Oh... That's right. You can't talk! Whoops!"

Jun lifted the lifeless corpse of his target after he died, and walked over to the supply bag, hastily stuffing it inside. He lifted the bag around his shoulder and exited the scene of the crime. Leaving the wooded hiking trail, Jun entered his car and began his lengthy drive to the lake, where he would dispose of the body.

"So... That girl who answered Valen's phone... That was Leila Magnolia, wasn't it?" Jun thought to himself. "She was just recruited yesterday, but news like that tends to travel quickly through the underground..."

He made a sharp turn on the corner of the road, nearly wrecking the traffic around him.

"I'll be dead before the day's over, if that's true... Better make the most of it."

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"How the hell did you just let an eleven year old girl go on an assassination mission?!"

"She has ESP..."

"ESP isn't real, you dumbass!"

Police chief Sia was a strong, confident woman with a bit of a temper. At nineteen years old, she had achieved her status as commander very quickly after joining the force. Topping out at 5'3", her short stature was greatly compensated for by her passion for protecting her hometown. She was a slender girl, with raven hair and ivory skin, a true gorgeous sight even though she was insecure about her thick thighs. Her eyes were noble green pools that served as windows to her soul.

"But... she knew things that she rightly shouldn't..." Christian replied.

"Can't you see she's fucking with you?! She's delusional! She's been abused, for half of her life, probably, and she's dead now!"

"No, Sia, I'm not."

A blinding light glistened in from the now-open front door to the police station. Leila's silhouette emerged and stared at Sia with an expressionless glare.

"Did you tell her about me?!" Sia whispered shrilly in Christian's ear.

"...No..."

"I am willing to divulge the identity of the next convict."

"...Alright... Uh... Go wait for me in my office, little Leila," Christian chirped, smiling brightly.

"Yes, sir," Leila replied without hesitation. She began to exit the room, but stopped at the entrance to the hallway. "And please refrain from addressing me in that manner, Christian."

She exited the room just as quickly as she had entered, leaving Sia and Christian dazed.

"Was that blood on her goddamn face?!" Sia exclaimed.

"I... I guess maybe she managed to kill Velvet...?"

"You'd best fucking hope so."

- - -

"Alright. Let's get this show on the road!" Christian exclaimed.

"Yes," Leila replied instantly.

"Did you dispose of Red Velvet? Was he even the person who was living there?"

"Yes. And, yes."

"And the test squad?"

"What do you think?"

"I see... Well, I suppose there's not much we can do about it at this point."

"Correct."

"What do you think our next action should be, littl- I mean... Leila?"

"I suggest we take immediate action against 'Archer'."

"Please inform me of his qualities and whereabouts," Christian replied, leaning back in his office chair.

"He is an outwardly happy South Korean man who frequents the hiking trails around the city. Choosing particularly wooded paths, he leads his victims on a 'hiking trip' through these areas, before distracting and killing them, almost always with an arrow to the eye. His psychopathic behavior is inexcusable and I shall terminate him with extreme prejudice if you so wish."

"I see... Well, it would get another killer off the streets... But, are you sure you'll be okay? You don't even seem to have your-"

"Supply purse? I'll retrieve it from Valen's home before I visit the trail, rest assured."

"Be careful."

"Stop worrying. You're so self-absorbed," Leila scoffed before swiftly turning on a dime and leaving the room, slamming the door behind her.

- - -

Right as it hit high noon, Leila began to walk potently towards the slums she had entered a few hours ago, making a short detour to retrieve her supply purse. Arriving at the apartment complex, she deftly climbed the stairs and turned to enter Valen's room.

"The police will be there, no questions," Leila sighed. She opened the door to be proven correct immediately.

Several officers were examining the area. At the back wall, against the closet door, the inanimate corpses of the test squad members and Valen were sitting propped up.

"Are you a member of the police force?" a young woman asked sarcastically, staring down at Leila.

Leila ignored her, picking up her supply purse from the table next to the door. She picked it up, unzipping a pouch and removing a glimmering, golden badge. She held it in front of her face, showing it to the officer.

"Leila Magnolia. I'll be departing now," Leila spoke, loudly and concisely before walking out as quickly as she entered.

"Now for Archer, I suppose..."

- - -

Nearing the hiking trail, Leila searched through her purse to ensure that all was secure. She zipped it back up and stared over at the nearby hiking path. It was composed of lush, deep green trees, beautiful grass, and rough dirt, a perfect example of the beauty of nature. Even a couple of doe could be seen in the distance.

Faintly, a voice could be heard instructing what seemed to be a group of hikers.

"It's him," Leila said. She peered around before seeing Jun-suh leading a group of people off the normal track.

"This isn't good."

Leila swiftly ran over to the people, following behind them inconspicuously, as if she had been there the entire time.

"Oh, it seems we have a new visitor!" Jun called out, looking back at Leila.

She scowled.

"Tell me, little girl, what is your name? I'll write it in this little logbook so we can meet up ag-"

"I wish to remain anonymous. Thank you for your concern."

"Well... Alright. Let's just keep moving!"

- - -

It happened again.

Exactly as it went before.

Another bloody impalement, another sadistic trial.

But this time, the seed of discord spilled in a different way.

Jun dropped the lifeless corpse of his victim to the dusty dirt.

"Two in one day!" he proclaimed jovially, looking up at the sky. Unbeknowest to him, however, Leila had actually stayed behind, knowing very well what was going to occur.

"That's not a very nice thing to do, Mr. Youn," Leila mumbled beneath her breath, stepping out from behind the foliage. Jun kicked aside the target's corpse, staring over at Leila.

"So, you're... Leila Magnolia? You conniving little bitch!" Jun exclaimed.

"Please refrain from using such ugly, derogatory terminology. I am not a dog, I am a young woman, and you will treat me as such for the remainder of your living time here."

"Okay, well... You aren't a dog, little missy. But, you still deserve to be treated like one, considering your social stature."

"Your sadism does not phase me as much as you would like to believe. I'm sorry."

"You know what will phase you?!"

"Let me guess."

"An arrow through the eye!" they both said in unison. Leila rolled her eyes, kicking up a cloud of dirt.

"Fucking sassy little shits like you deserve to rot in the ground!"

"Don't even try. I already know how this fight is going to end, and it's not going to be in your favor," Leila replied, smiling broadly. "So don't even struggle. It's not worth your time."

Jun immediately rolled over to his bag and removed his bow, clutching arrows along with it. Before he could even get them all the way out of the bag, however, he felt a stabbing, paralyzing sensation in his spine. Blood could be heard hitting the grass below, bending each delicate blade and coating it like a dew.

Leila Magnolia removed her knife from Jun-suh Youn's back, pulling chunks of flesh with it. They were small enough to cling to the knife, adhering to the sticky, oily blood on the glistening tip. Jun let out a pained gasp and fell to the ground, clutching his sides.

"Fuck you!" Jun screamed out, trying to move and failing.

"I guess I was too fast for you... What a shame." Leila sighed, flashing a slight, barely noticeable smirk. She grabbed Jun's supplies in one hand and took his arm under tow in the other, dragging them both to a nearby tree.

"You wouldn't fucking dare!"

"I would!" Leila replied happily.

Birds scattered at Jun's unbelievably, incomprehensibly shrill screams.

Leila had gouged Archer's left eye out with an arrow, and was pushing it with all her might, to crack his skull and impale him on the tree. With a gratifying snap, the cranium gave way and the arrow ripped open the flesh on the back of Jun's head, easily pushing through due to the blood providing lubrication. She dug harder, pushing far enough for the arrow to lodge into the tree bark.

Leila ignored the screams.

"Well, 'Archer'? Do you like it?"

"M-make... Make the blood stop!" Archer moaned, no longer able to yell.

"You know, you had abusive parents too, didn't you? And that's your excuse for why you're the way you are."

Jun said nothing, staring death in the face with puppy-dog eyes.

"We really aren't that different, are we?"

Leila withdrew the arrow and dragged it across Jun's throat, slowly piercing it. Blood began seeping out, as if it was being spewed by a fountain.

"Leila, please..."

Leila dug the arrow into Jun's heart.

"We aren't."

- - -

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- - -

"He who fights monsters becomes one himself." Sia said coldly, staring at Leila as she entered the police office, holding the bloodied arrow she had killed Jun with.

"Shut up."

Leila made the uneventful trek through the hallways to Christian's room, and tossed the bloody arrow inside. It dug into the carpeting, sticking up.

"So, I assume your mission was a success?" Christian asked.

"Yes. Jun-suh has been exterminated."

"Oh, yeah, I forgot to tell you... We got the data from the cross-analysis back today. We've determined that you should be put up for adoption, which means you wouldn't be able to work for the police force."

"I suppose you are going to adopt me."

"...Yes, actually, that was my idea."

"I would rather go with Sia. That is what shall happen. You have no say in the matter."

"But, I..."

Leila left the room, slamming the door behind her.

"Disgusting."
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"Are you... sad?"

Two young girls stood in the rain, their jet black hair gently flowing in the breeze. They gazed warmly at a young man whom they found alone, crying on a public bench. Walking over, they sat next to him in unison. The bench squeaked lightly as they scooted nearer to him.

"...Y-yeah... But, what do you care?" the man choked out between sobs, looking up at the twins.

"We're sad too. Humanity has no place for rejects like us, does it?" the first girl, Moya, sighed.

"Reality tends to kick around the nice and needy while kissing up to the cruel and rich." the second girl, Moira, continued.

The two girls were twins, both fifteen years of age. They possessed slightly tanned skin and deep, red eyes, onset by an iris pigmentation defect. As for clothing, they both wore turtlenecks - Moya wore black, Moira wore white - and blue skinny jeans. Peculiarly, they also seemed to be wearing abstract belts of some sort, looking similar to circuits. Various tangled wires of many colors protruded from these belts, twisting and overlapping in every which way.

"...You couldn't be more right," the stranger replied, staring down at his feet.

It was still raining hard, as Leila has foreseen. There were very few moments of reprieve, so the streets were beginning to become flooded. Most people had made a conscious decision to stay in their homes, lying dormant, warm, and sheltered from the brutal onslaught of water. But, as if it were fate, the seed of discord brought these three individuals out.

"For your age, you sure know a lot about this."

"Cruelty doesn't discriminate between ages."

The perpetual rain wasn't even eventful. No thunder, no intense winds. Just rain, dumping its depressive stigma on the city and its inhabitants.

Moya and Moira stood in unison, holding their hands out to feel the rain.

"They say rain can be very soothing, and calming to the mind. But, inversely, it can cause a great deal of turmoil and struggling. Look down at the water puddled under your feet. Do you see your reflection? That's really all you can see, in weather this heavy. And yet, the drops keep falling, plummeting down into the reflection and disrupting it with their abrasive touch. While it's already destitute on its own, it only becomes worse when others get involved. They step into the puddle, trampling on it and ruining its image, much like people can do in reality. Yes... To find true happiness, you must learn to accept the imperfections caused by life's torrential rains. You must look past them and see yourself as only you can, not letting outside sources define how you perceive yourself. But, it's impossible." Moya spoke, gazing down at her muddled reflection. She stamped on it, causing the water to splash and ripple, moving elsewhere.

"So, why even try?" Moira finished.

"Exactly."

"So, here we are, preparing to induct another into our family of light. Do you wish to leave this world, and move to a beautiful paradise?" Moya asked, walking back over to the man. She knelt next to him, staring at the visible marks and scars plastered up and down his arms.

"It looks as if he's already tried to do it himself."

"Yes... I want... I want to go to paradise!"

"As you wish. I love you."

Moya stood up, moving forward slightly and straddling the man. She clasped her hands around his neck with a vicegrip, bringing her face close to his. Gently, she brushed his face with her long, elegant lashes, acting on his acceptance of death.

The man fell limp.

Moya released her grip on his neck. He fell to the side on the bench, his skin pale and weepy. Rainwater filled his open mouth, pouring over onto the ground.

"He's not in our debt. We're simply doing what we must, to purge humankind of this vile feeling."

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"Sia, I want you to adopt me," Leila muttered. Barely hearing the voice behind her, Sia turned to look at the young girl. She was swaying on her feet impatiently, looking up.

"You... you what?!"

"I want you to take me in. I refuse to stay another night with Christian. He is a sickening person with even more sickening thoughts."

Sia sighed, staring up at the ceiling.

"It's getting rather late... And it's not like I could turn her down. She's grateful to even be alive, at this rate."

Thoughts rushed through Sia's head like wildfire in the short time she was looking at the ceiling. Reluctantly, she knelt down next to Leila. Their eyes met, and as if a bolt of lightning struck her, Sia immediately realized all the years of suffering Leila had been through.

"Well... It's getting late."

"I understand. I knew it would be like th-"

"Let's go home."

Leila's eyes widened.

"I... My vision... It was wrong?"

For a brief instant, Leila had smiled. She smiled a beautiful, innocent smile, the kind that warms your heart to see. Just for a moment, Leila Magnolia showcased happiness.

Sia took her by the hand and led her down the hallways to the exit. The two left the facility, standing under the awning and watching the pouring rain.

"Isn't the rain soothing, Leila?" Sia asked, looking down at Leila. The young girl was staring at her reflection in a puddle.

"Ah... So, this is how I look now?"

"Yes. I think you're going to grow up to be a beautiful young woman," Sia replied, smiling. Leila bent down, looking closer at the reflection.

"Maybe... Just maybe, I could look like you, one day, right?"

"P-pfft... Like anyone would ever want to look like me."

"I do."

"W-well... We'll see, won't we?" Sia stuttered. She reached down, helping Leila up, and the two crossed the drenched parking lot to reach their vehicle. Getting inside, Sia attempted to turn on the overhead light, but it flickered and died out upon activation.

"...Shit," Sia swore quietly. She unlocked the passenger door and patted her hand on the seat, prompting Leila to get in. She closed the door behind her, and Sia started the car. The two down the road together, in near-total darkness.

"Hey... Uh, Sia?" Leila called out. When they approached a red light, Sia turned to her, her face only lit by the dim, flashing LEDs on the dashboard.

"Yes?" Sia replied, smiling.

"What's the world like, past all of this sadness?"

"Well... It's a wonderful, magical place. You just have to learn to be happy, and you'll understand."

"What does happiness feel like?"

"It's the best feeling in the world. It's warming, and welcoming, and glowing."

"Was it how I felt when you said yes?"

"U-uh... I actually made you happy...?

"Yes. You're the first person to."

"Gosh..."

"Sia, are you happy?"

"...I am, a bit, now that you are. I don' think it'll stay that way forever, though."

"Then, how do you stay happy?"

"I dunno. Maybe we'll find out together, kiddo."

The traffic light faded to green.

"I'm sorry for asking so many questions..." Leila sighed as the car started moving again. "Now, I'm worried that my visions are wrong... And I'm scared nobody will have a use for me here, so they'll throw me ou-"

"Calm down. Nobody's going to throw you out."

"...Thank you..."

- - -

After the two had showered, they entered Sia's room together. It was cloaked with warm, orange lighting, and an elegant queen size bed sat at the back of the room. Next to it lied a nightstand with a small portable television, and photos of family, friends, and co-workers.

"Well... This is where you'll be sleeping, from now on," Sia said, looking down at Leila. "Hope you like it, 'cause I'm not changing it for anyone." she continued, laughing quietly.

"Am I allowed... to get in the bed?" Leila asked, covering her mouth with her hand.

"Of course you can! Why wouldn't you be?"

"I'm sorry, it's just..."

"Shh, shh... It's alright. I get it," Sia cooed, rustling Leila's hair.

Leila walked over to the bed and unmade it, getting in. Sia followed suit, sitting next to the child. The two rested under the comforting quilt for a short while as Leila adjusted to her surroundings, cautiously examining the room around her.

"I think I let my visions get the best of me," Leila sighed, laying back. Sia turned the lamp off before doing the same. From the outside, rain could be heard, pitter-pattering against the shackled roof.

"How so?"

"I... I've killed two people. And... I've realized, I shouldn't have the right to end lives. I don't want to kill people anymore. I just... I took advantage of the fact that I knew the outcome of the battle, and abused it to brutalize my foes. I scare myself, Sia..." Leila explained, frowning. "What if I snapped... and hurt someone good, like you?"

"...I-I... Do you want to stop working for the police force, maybe?"

"No, not at all... But, I think I'm going to use my ESP only when necessary. Knowing what was going to happen all the time dehumanized me. It made my life boring to live. And, I think, somehow, my visions are growing less and less accurate..."

"You could always apprehend the convicts, rather than killing them."

"...Yes... That sounds good."

A stiff silence intruded, filling the air as the two laid in darkness together. They stared at the ceiling, the sound of rain and the rattling of the ceiling fan lulling them to sleep, slowly.

"Sia... Could I be your friend? I... I don't have any friends..."

"We already are friends."

Leila rolled over closer to Sia, wrapping her arms around her. Sia did the same, and pulled the quilt snug, holding Leila tightly.

"I have a friend..."

- - -

"Oh? Leila, you look kinda... different, today," Christian stuttered, staring down at the child. She was wearing the same clothing, yes, but her demeanor seemed to be... lighter. The tense air around her was lessened, and she seemed, maybe, alive?

"Good morning. Please realize, my opinion of you is no different, but now, I will make a conscious effort to act more presentable around you."

Sia walked into the main office shortly after, glaring at Leila and Christian.

"Sorry I'm late, I had to-"

"It's fine!" Leila replied, softly smiling. "No need to explain," she continued. Christian's jaw practically hit the floor upon seeing Leila express any sort of emotion. It was an unprecedented action.

"Our target today is Twinterror. Shall I divulge the details, Sia?"

"Mhm," Sia replied.

"From what I can see, their names are Moya and Moira Snowe. They're around fifteen years old, and clinically depressed. They lure their victims to their demises, by convincing them that life is just a game of suffering. They don't seem to have malicious intent, however... They're just misguided. For that reason alone, I refuse to terminate them. I shall apprehend them instead. Their whereabouts are..."

"They're...?" Christian asked, tapping his foot impatiently.

"I can't see it clearly. I suppose I'll just look around town..."

"Will you be okay?" Sia asked, staring concernedly at Leila.

"I should be able to handle myself. I do have my supply purse, after all."

"What's even in that fuckin' thing?"

"A pistol, three knives, smoke bombs, and a phone."

"...Still. Be careful."

"I will. Goodbye. I'll see you soon, Sia."

Leila departed from the room, closing the door gently behind her.

"What the hell?! Why does she suddenly love you so much?" Christian yelled, grimacing at Sia.

"Don't fucking ask me. Maybe she just doesn't care for you," Sia scoffed, turning her back to Christian.

"You changed her overnight!" he exclaimed, slamming his fist on his desk. "I've been kind to her for days now, and I don't get jack-fucking-shit!"

"I said, don't ask me!" Sia replied. She left the room, slamming the door behind her. Christian's papers were flung off his desk from the force, slowly floating to the floor and skidding across the carpet.

"I'll just... I'll make her like me, then."

- - -

It was still rather early in the morning - The sky was a dull blue, diluted further by the omnipresent onslaught of rain. After searching around, Leila came to rest on a public bench, staring up into the pouring skies.

"Look."

"Another one...! This soon after the last, too."

"Yes."

The black haired twins were approaching from the distance, nearing Leila, who was still distracted by the cloud watching.

"Hi."

Leila immediately turned to see Moya and Moira right next to her. They had sat down at the bench, without any notice.

"So... I didn't need to find you after all. Guess you found me instead. Sure makes my life easier," Leila smirked, glancing over ever-so-slightly to the side.

"Who... Are you? Are you the..." Moya started, gasping. She blinked, covering her mouth with her hand.

"The Flower of Fate... Leila Magnolia. I've heard all about you."

"I'm that popular, huh?" Leila replied, standing up. The rusted bench creaked under her.

"So, we cannot possibly hope to align you with the path of righteousness, through word of mouth..." Moya started.

"We'll do it by force, instead," Moira finished. She reached into her pocket and withdrew a leather whip, cracking it. Moya grasped the free end tightly, and the two ran towards Leila with it outstretched.

Leila hopped over the hurdle and swiftly slung her arm, flinging her purse into the air briefly. She hopped and caught it, digging through it and taking out a smoke bomb.

"We refuse to let heretics like you corrupt our word!"

Moira pulled the whip from Moya, running forward and swinging its full length at Leila, who grabbed it expertly. She used it to pull her enemy in, until the two were face to face, too close for comfort.

Moira dropped the whip and grabbed Leila's neck, leaning in close to her. Retching and gagging, Leila managed to throw her smoke bomb to the tarred road. With a loud, resounding pop, it opened, releasing a thick, grey smog. Moira loosened her grip on Leila, all three of them beginning to cough uncontrollably. Moya began waving her hands frantically, trying to dispel the smoke.

Moira felt a stabbing pain in her shoulder, causing her to cry out in pain. Her blood could be heard dripping to the ground, in sync with the rain.

Moya cried out too.

As the smoke receded, Leila found both of the twins lying on the concrete, pathetically.

"We're... We're not fit to fight, are we, sister?" Moya sighed, struggling to her feet and clutching her shoulder.

"We aren't..."

"Leila, we surrender..." Moira weakly moaned.

"Just step back a little," Moya continued.

Leila lowered her hand, sheathing her knife in her purse. She withdrew her pistol, preparing it for use.

"I'll step back. If you dare try anything at all... I'll shoot. I swear."

As Leila inched back, her gun began to shake in her trembling hand. An eerie, indefinite silence filled the street, only eased by the sound of raindrops on the pavement.

"Just what are you trying to do, anyway?!"

"You have ESP. Why don't you look?" Moya giggled.

"Moira... is it really time for us to join them?"

"We've completed our assignment. Let's... Let's go home, sister."

Leila lowered her pistol, staring at the twins with a puzzled expression.

"...Home...?"

Moya grabbed Moira by the shoulders and pulled her in for an embrace.

The circuits on their belts locked into eachother and went full-circle.

Instantly, a fiery explosion was created, with a deafening crash. Leila was sent flying back by the force of the blast, sliding across the soaked road and tearing her jeans open. Her ears were ringing in pain.

Blood had been sprayed everywhere. Leila looked down at their hands to see them red and oily.

The rain washed away the blood.

Speechlessly, Leila stood. Her clothes were thoroughly soaked, impeding her movement. Regardless, she approached t he impact site to see the mangled corpses of Moya and Moira Snowe. Their limbs had been strewn across the area, leaving their torsos almost unrecognizable.

Leila fell to her knees and screamed agonizingly.

- - -

"Who... Who are you...?"

"I am you. I'm the other you."

"The... The other me?"

"Your hidden half."

"What...?"

"The nagging, *****ing insecurity that makes you teeter on the edge of insanity. The mindless, hate-filled rage that compels you to commit those heinous acts of yours."

"...Wha..."

"You caused that. It was your fault. You stepped back."

"No..."

"Why did you step back?"

"I don't..."

"Why did you step back?"

"I-"

"Why did you step back?"

"I don't know!"

"Everything is your fault."

"I-I'm sorry..."

"Everything is our fault. We're doing this together, as we're one and the same."

"I'm so sorry..."

"Sorry isn't going to cut it. Just wallow in the pity, you useless excuse for a human."

- - -

Leila awoke in the medical ward of the police station. The lights were a dull grey, faintly shining down and illuminating the room. She turned her head, staring out the window into the violent rain.

"I'm sorry..."

- - -

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"Miss, could I please have something to eat? I don't have much... Me and my monkey are really hungry."

Benjamin Robinson, was, for all intents and purposes, a healthy young boy who lived in an orphanage. Healthy, save for the fact that he thought his monkey doll spoke to him.

It gave him orders to kill.

Yes, the poor child in the tattered green coat stood alone in the cold, rainy night. His usual auburn hair had darkened to a charcoal black from being exposed to so much water.

"Sorry . We don't have any to spare, kid."

Slash.

"I'm... Uh... Don't blame me, sir... My doll told me to do it."

House to house, street to street. This was Ben's nightly routine - he would scavenge for food, and kill those who didn't comply to his wishes. Sometimes, he would even off those who did. However, his furry companion, allegedly, would tell him to make it as painless as possible.

"Ah... Tonight wasn't a good haul, was it, pal?" Ben sighed, staring down at the monkey plush. It had an unusual blue coloration and a dopey grin, both complimented by black beady eyes.

The doll, obviously, said nothing in return.

"Oh, well... I suppose we can leave early tomorrow, to compensate for our losses."

Ben dangled the monkey by its left paw, making his way down the winding streets in night's hazy blackness.

"So... What sort of rations do you think I should give them? It's been a while since they've had a good meal, huh?"

Ben pushed open the red double-doors and walked inside of the abandoned school. This was his base of operations, of sorts, where he would store his siphoned food for distribution at the orphanage, at a later time.

A musty smell seeped into Ben's nostrils as he sat down the bag of food, leaning against the wall and holding his plush in front of his face.

"You want me to what?"

"Keep it all for myself?"

"Well... Okay..."

Ben slumped down against the wall and fiddled around a bit with the monkey, while reflecting on various events.

He was never a loved child.

Abandoned by his parents on the doorstep of the Warmhearts Orphanage, he never really fit in. He was incessantly beaten and bullied because of the blue monkey doll that he carried around. Ben would always claim that it was alive, eliciting thunderous laughter from his contemporaries.

Nobody believed him until the body of a child was found on display in the orphanage's lobby. Before beginning an official investigation with the authorities, the orphanage's directors staged an examination at the facility, ensuring that the other children were safe and sound.

The directors were killed too, leaving only children.

Benjamin had become a cold-blooded, psychopathic murderer, driven solely by the "words" of his toy. He used this toy to intimidate the other children into submission and became to surrogate "ruler" of the orphanage.

Ben would go out every night and collect rations of food from various townsfolk, supplying it to his captives to prevent a large scale rebellion.

No, Ben was not a normal child at all...

Back in the present, Ben rose to his feet and left the school, beginning his long trek to the Warmhearts Orphanage.

"Monkey, have you heard of a girl called Leila?"

"The other kids at the orphanage were talking about her... Apparently, she's a psychic. I bet she's really cool! I wanna meet her! Don't you?"

"...Ya don't?"

"What? You... You want me to do that? Well... If it's what you want, it must be right..."

Ben walked into a parking lot through a narrow gap in the road.

"You must be so cold! Don't worry, it'll be nice and warm when we go inside."

Reaching the building at the end of the lot, Ben pushed the door open and walked inside, only to be surrounded by a flood of children.

"Did you bring any food?!"

"The monkey told me not to."

"..."

"Don't worry... Tomorrow, we'll have a great catch. I promise!" Ben exclaimed, smiling deviously.

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Leila groggily sat up, barely pulling her eyes open. Her hair was an absolute wreck, and there was exorbitant baggage under her eyes. She moved her aching limbs, stretching and yawning. The prior day, she had fallen asleep in the medical ward, but she had awoken at Sia's house.

"Hey, sleepyhead," a familiar, playful voice called out from the doorway. Leila glanced over to see Sia standing there, wearing a purple morning coat and drinking coffee.

"G-good morning..." Leila moaned out, laying her head back down. She stared at the brittle-looking ceiling.

"We've done all we can do. Let's... go home."

Leila reached her hand up, grasping at air.

"Moya..."

"Moira..."

She sighed, sitting back up. Slowly standing, she made her way over to Sia with heavy footsteps.

"Sia... I... I killed them."

"It's not your fault. I got reports from the suicide team that they... bombed?"

"...Yeah..."

"To be honest, it's better that it happened there... If it'd gone off in prison, who knows what would'a happened?"

"I... I guess you're right..."

"Anyway, med team said your injuries weren't as serious as they thought, so they just let me take you home. You were out like a baby, haha. You're really cute when you snore, though," Sia explained, chuckling.

"Y-you heard me snoring?!" Leila cried, blushing intensely. "That's so em-"

"Christian said that he was going to take you to an amusement park, today, to get things off your mind. You really are just a kid, after all!"

Leila's mood sunk.

"Fantastic. Christian. Yay," Leila snarked, unenthusiastically rolling her glazed-over eyes.

"I now you don't like him, but... He's just trying to be nice. Just give him a little in return, okay?"

"B-but he..." Leila started, before catching herself and sighing deeply.

"Fine."

"Would you like some coffee?" Sia asked. "I'll make you a bit, if so."

"Um... I've never had it before, but, sure."

"Black, or with sugar and creamer?"

"Uh... Black, I guess..."

- - -

"It's so... Bitter. But, yet, I like it. It makes me feel warm inside."

"Told ya you'd like it!" Sia replied, taking a sip of her own. It was filled to the brim with sugar anf sweeteners.

Suddenly, without warning, Sia felt a squeezing sensation around her abdomen, nearly making her drop her mug. She gazed down to see that Leila was tightly embracing her.

She embraced back.

- - -

"Are you ready to go?" Sia called, tapping her foot impatiently.

"Hold on! My hair's still wet!" Leila exclaimed, muffled by the bathroom door. "And I wanna look nice! Can you help me, maybe?"

"Um... Sure!" Sia reluctantly replied, nodding her head down. "Just, uh, dry your hair! And then I'll help you get dressed!"

"Alright!"

Sia began to pace nervously. "I can't believe how much I've fuckin' changed that girl. Christian's gonna be on my ass about it, forever... Just because she doesn't love him up."

Sia sighed, lifting her head as she heard the bathroom door opening.

"Are you coming?" Leila yelled through the house.

"Yeah! Hold on, lemme get my stuff."

- - -

"And... There."

Sia gave a sigh of relief, getting off her knees and pushing her hair out of her eyes. She'd done various little touch-ups to Leila, smoothing out her face with foundation and bolding her lashes with mascara. Her chestnut hair had been parted to the side for once, revealing her cute, childish profile. She'd also been given a small hairclip, in the form of a butterfly.

"Do you have any different clothes, maybe...? They still haven't gotten my old stuff back."

"Uh... Hold on!"

A lightbulb went off in Sia's head.

"Yeah, I have the perfect thing!" she exclaimed, running over to her closet. She rummaged through her clothes, before coming to a small police uniform.

"I had this made for you, but I forgot to give it to you until now. Enjoy!"

Leila's eyes gleamed as Sia handed her an ash grey denim jacket, a white undershirt, a pair of khakis, and brown leather boots.

"Thank you, so much," Leila choked out, wrapping her arms around Sia. Walking over to the mirror on the wardrobe, she began to put on her outfit. She pulled the undershirt over her head and slipped into the jacket. Its backside was marked with a large black feather - underneath, small white text could be seen, reading the police force's motto; "I do as I say, while fate guides my way."

Finally, she pulled up the khakis and stepped into the boots, lacing them up tightly.

In the mirror, she almost looked like a young Sia.

"I... I love it."

"I'm glad. I had to shell out a lot for that, y'know."

"I look like you. I'm..."

"Let's get going. Christian's prolly already waiting at the park."

- - -

"Hi, little Lei-"

"Don't even. I'm dreading this enough already," Leila said in a monotone voice, as Sia drove off. She dug through her supply purse and withdrew the phone.

"...No signal."

"Are you ready for a day of fun?"

Happy carnival music blared obnoxiously all over the perimeter of the park. Young children could be heard, screaming, laughing, and crying. Mascots walked all over, handing out pamphlets and socializing.

"No."

"Good! ...Wait... What?"

The day, was, for the most part, tiresome and uneventful.

That was, until fatefully, the seed of discord spilled and presented the opportunity for Leila to sneak away from her unwanted chaperone. Upon doing so, however, she spotted something - a young boy, scouring the distant streets and holding a doll. He was shivering, thanks to the rain.

"Hold on," Leila thought to herself. She closed her eyes, focusing intensely.

"That's our convict for the day..." Leila sighed. "Better get this over with."

Leila navigated the park to its gaping exit, leaving Christian behind with no idea that she had even left.

- - -

"Hey. Benjamin," Leila called out. The rain was still as intense as ever, marinating the ground even moreso than the previous day. Low houses were beginning to become flooded.

"Ah, no!" Ben called out. Quickly, he held his monkey in front of his face and hid behind it. "Don't do that! It's scary! Will I have to put you in time out?!" he shrieked, trembling.

"So, this little thing is your first in command., huh?" Leila retorted, smirking. "Seems pretty lifeless, if you ask me..."

"He's alive! I know it! He talks to me every day! You don't understand! You're Leila, aren't you?!"

The young boy's voice continued to rise.

"That's my name, don't wear it out," Leila replied.

"Just go! Leave my monkey and I alone, you freak!"

"Look at the pot calling the kettle black. And to think that last night, you were talking about how cool I was."

"Gahh!"

Ben unsheathed a large butcher knife from his back pocket. It was slightly rusted, and covered in dried, browning blood.

"Ugh. It's always a fight."

"I'll obey him, without question!" Ben screamed, running head-on at Lerila. She rolled out of the way, prompting Ben to skid to a screeching halt.

"Gotta get rid of the doll somehow... Maybe then, he'll stop. I can't bring myself to kill him..."

Leila's inner monologue was interrupted by a sudden attack from Benjamin. He had thrown his knife while Leila was distracted, taking advantage of the situation. She rolled out of the way before it landed, prompting it to stick in the road with a loud clash. Thinking fast, Leila removed the knife from the ground. As Ben approached her, she grabbed him by the sleeve of his coat.

"Playtime is over, little boy."

She snatched the monkey from Ben's grip and brought it nearer to the knife.

"No... Please, don't kill my friend! I love him!"

Leila's eyes immediately lost emotion and she dropped both the knife and the doll in an instant.

Ben grabbed his plush, holding it tightly.

"Thank you, Leila... I'll try to be a good boy from now on. I promise! Maybe... Just maybe, I shouldn't always listen to what my monkey has to say..."

Ben began to run away, holding back tears and clutching his doll tightly. Suddenly, a group of police officers arrived, all holding pistols.

Before he could even realize what was happening, Psychosa was brutally gunned down. Each bullet pierced his frail figure as sharply as the previous one, splattering his inky, maroon blood all over the pavement below. Upon taking a final shot to the head, he dropped his "friend" into the blood puddled below and fell to the ground, writhing and leaking out.

Leila stare on, gazing at the child's mutilated corpse in shock.

Tears filled her eyes.

"Christian saw you, and requested back-"

Leila screamed bloody murder.

"You're all so fucking disgusting!"

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- - -

"You're so... You're all fucking sick! Cruel!"

"He was a kil-"

"I don't fucking care!" Leila growled in a disturbingly guttural voice. "Fuck off! All of you! Right now!"

The police hesitated for a moment before withdrawing their weapons and backing off slowly.

Leila began to cry.

She slowly walked over to the bullet-ridden corpse of Benjamin Robinson, kneeling over in the puddled blood. Rainwater was beginning to accumulate in his bullet wounds, nearly overflowing.

Leila lifted his body and held it tightly, sobbing intensely.

She sat his down, picking up his "Friend" and placing it in his arms.

"Rest in peace..."

- - -

"So, you did it again."

A devious grin.

"I-"

"If you wouldn't have left, Christian wouldn't have called for backup. It's your fault. It's our fault."

"I'm... I don't know anymore..."

"I don't know what to think of a murderer like you, eith-"

"Shut up!"

"Does the truth hurt you? I've come to terms with it.

- - -

"Maybe... Maybe I'm the disgusting one," Leila whispered to herself. She sat in the heavy rain, broken and torn.
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