Shocker (Chao like you've never read it before! cx)

[The Ice Maiden]

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Soon Dingo, 89chao and Mabel were at the top of the hill. The wind tussled their quills, making them quiver. It was a chilly evening, that was for sure. Mabel and 89 both wrapped themselves in the tarp, shivering. "Are we there yet!?" Mabel cried over the roaring wind. 89 said nothing; she was watching the sky cloud over. This storm would effect history.

"No!" Called Zingo from in front of them. "But almost! Get that tarp ready, 89! We'll be there any second now," and they were indeed. 89 could see it looming on top of the hill. The fact that they would soon be inside another dimension gave her the creeps. "Maybe we shouldn't do this...!" She told Mabel uncertainly, but the NiGHTs chao wasn't listening. She was too busy shouting to Zingo for instructions. 89 anxiously walked forward with Mabel, very unsure and very afraid.

Soon, they were atop the hill. 89 bit her lip as she stared at it. "Put up the tarp!" She heard Zingo. 89 gulped and shed it, sorry to see that it was the only thing she brought for warmth. But, she and Mabel put up the tarp. After, Zingo spread the dust over it. "Now we need the electricity." He looked at his watch. "Stand back!" He ordered, and then there was a flash of blinding, white light...


((Been up since 4am. Too tired to type...*snore*))

[Chaon]

Wow, this is awesome! Keep writing!