Brandy The Mischievous Chao

[SilverRabbit]

Chapter One:
Misty went over to the apparatus that the kids had been asked to use she knew something was wrong with one of the kids because Dejime had fallen off the monkey bars and had sprained his feet which was hard to cope with when your a Chao. "Dejime to the nurse!" shouted Ruby to Dejime. Bubbles led Dejime down to the nurse since she was Dejime's best friend then they noticed a Chao, he was new at this school and had a mischievous look on his face, Dejime and Bubbles were scared and quickly ran off to the nurse. The nurse looked at Dejime's feet and said "you should be out of school for a few days, Dejime." "What if he doesn't get better, miss?" "Please call me ChaoFun and he will get better, there's no doubt about that." said the nurse.

[CitrusCat]

Seems good, although it would be nice if you described the characters, such as what they looked like. ;)

[SilverRabbit]

^

I'm thinking about pictures of them been put on :3