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The war for Mannhattan was raging on as the remaining users struggled to hold back the onslaught of ModBots pushing their way through.
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The REDs had set up makeshift barriers and sentries as fast as they could, but they could only hold for so long.
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As User after User died, it was becoming noticeable that most of their force had dwindled down to almost nothing.
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Medics had become scarce, and there were only three active on the battlefield at this point.
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Bullets and rockets flew threw the air, screams of pain from RED sometimes ringing through the air. They were all in trouble, and many realized this was more than likely going to be the end for them.
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"CHRIST!" Patrick shouted, a dead soldier flopping next to him, "My last Soldier is dead! I need backup!" Many of the units of Users had been wiped. Nearly all the Pyros, Scouts, and Demos were dead except for a select few vets who had enough experience and luck to survive this long.
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"Yo yo roger, I see the target." Keaton looked towards Patrick and zeroed in.
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Running up the ramp was a ModBot prepared to suicide himself in order to kill Patrick and Snowy who were hiding in cover.
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"No you don't!" Keaton yelled, firing his gun at the ModBot, hoping luck would land his shot.
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The shot smashed through the ModBot's helmet and exploded his circuits, causing him to fly to the floor in a metal heap.
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"Thanks!" Patrick cheered, preparing himself to continue firing upon the enemy.
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"Don't mention it!" Keaton smiled and continued on his way, dodging and weaving through rocket after rocket flying towards him.
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Crash watched as the last Sniper was killed and sighed. "Agh, am I really the last one left here? Where the hell is our backup?!"
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"Sorry string bean, but I think WE'RE the backup." Rovias desperately continued to fix his sentry, though his dispenser had exploded some time ago, and thus it was only a matter of time before he'd run out of metal.
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Aidan continued healing Brianna, unsure of what to do next. "Bri, I'm sorry that we're probably going to die here."

Brianna shook her head and sighed. "It's fine. I think dying in battle is pretty cool. Then we're remembered as awesome war heroes and we'll probably get a statue or something."
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Aidan chuckled and shook his head. "Well in that case, let's head out and kick some ass."

Brianna stood up and revved up her minigun, beginning to walk out towards the incoming ModBots.
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"DIE!" Bri yelled, shooting in a wide arc at the ModBots.
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The ModBots, not wanting to die, began to focus heavily on the left side, running towards it at full speed.
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Rockets bombarded the barricade, hitting and destroying the sentry gun.
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"OH NO!" one User screamed, noticing a crocket flying right towards them.
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The explosion shook the ground, blocking back the Users guarding it and the boxes holding the Mods back.
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"Boss, I got bad news for you," Linds said, approaching from behind.
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"Our entire right side has been wiped out. It's only a matter of time before they charge in and begin to flank us."
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"Without any backup, we stand little to no chance here. Lana... We gotta retreat. We've lost Mannhattan." Linds spoke softly, knowing that without Mannhattan, defeat was sure to fall upon the REDs.
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"Dammit... No, I can't lose here. Not the first battle..." A single tear fell down her face. "I gotta avenge Sable Linds, you don't understand..."
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Suddenly, a large amount of gunfire rang through the air and the advancing Mods fell where they stood.
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It was the Menn in Blu! They had wiped the floor and ended the threat of the advancing mods.
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Along with them were the Retro Menn, wearing 70s chapeaus and looking stylish.
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"What the hell..." Patrick and Snowy whispered, staring in awe at them.
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The Retros opened fire and blew many of the Mods to bits, easily pushing the Mods back. Thus, the Mods began a full on retreat, running back towards the "Index" as it was beginning to be called by some users.
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"T-They're retreating?" Lana asked, stunned by the sudden turn of the tides. It appeared that, for now Mannhattan was safe.
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However, a single ModBot came out of the shadows, aiming a shotgun at Lana.
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"Lana watch out!" Linds cried, sprinting to get in front of her.
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Suddenly, another figure stepped from the shadows, staring the Mod directly in the face.
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"Beep."
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"..."
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"Boop."
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"..."
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"Bop."
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"..."
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The Mod's head whirled for a few seconds before violently exploding by Tree's menacing glare, sending the robot toppling over on its side.
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"Lana, long time no see." Triert said, calmly turning towards Lana.

"Tree dirt." Lana spat, making her disgust for him apparent.
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Blasphemy approached from behind. "We're finished with clean up duty. Any Mods that aren't dead are wishing they were." She smiled and looked towards Lana and Linds. "You're welcome."
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"We didn't need your help. We had it under control." Linds glared at Blasphemy.

"Sure you did, which is why all of your men are dead," Tree replied, his empty eyes staring directly into Linds. She shivered.
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"Why didn't you just say you needed help anyhow? I would've been glad to lend a hand. Maybe more of your people would've survived then." Triert cracked his neck and turned his gaze towards Lana.

This time, she literally spat on the floor. "Because, we don't associate with the scum of the earth. We're proud REDs who'd rather die than be forced to work with some stuck up asshat like you."
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Blasphemy glared at Lana. "Maybe we shouldn't have saved your sorry asses, then we wouldn't have to worry about who'd control Chao Island anymore because it would be us. However, we know this isn't just about you. This is about all of us. We know they're after all Users."

Triert nodded in agreement. "Thus, I have a suggestion to make, for the benefit of all of us."
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Silence followed these words, creating a bit of tension in the air before he finally continued. "I propose a temporary truce between both BLU and RED armies until we destroy this Mod threat."
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Re: Mann vs. Mod (Now updating every Saturday!)

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Update released, update includes:
-Plot!!
-49 pictures!
-3-5 hours of work
-Cameo characters are important!
-Introducing the BLU leaders!
-Main characters aren't that important this time!
-I totally screwed up a few of the pictures but don't worry bout it

Sorry that the battle scene doesn't look like anyone is really shooting. Gmod is terrible and doesn't have muzzleflashes for tf2 or addons that do this without the risk of crashing my game.
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Crash #TeamStar: i made a... response?
Nano: O.O
I also took some time to add some handmade muzzle flash particles:
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Nano: it looks way too good
Nano: i can't use it
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Crash #TeamStar: it's okay, i would have charged you $9.99 per bullet anyway
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See? My bullets are the best bullets.

You ninja'd me Triert with your creepy twerking sonic characters
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Fox please let me out of the factory, I can't keep making so much art without any food...
Just kidding, I choose to make most of this stuff myself.
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You'll keep eating toy wheels until I'm satisfied Crash

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I'll be sure to visit Crash. to make sure your getting your fill of sandviches.
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Update 7
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Badlands, the roughest, toughest, and rowdiest battlefield in the entire RED and BLU war. Many Users faced a gruesome death here, and there always seemed to be a battle going on. Now, however, it was different. Today was the meeting between RED and BLU leaders to decide if there would be a truce to end the Mod threat.
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The RED base would be used for such a thing, as much of the BLU base had been destroyed by an attack made from the Mods during the attack on Mannhattan.
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The truce meeting had been very tense so far, and it was obvious that no progress was being made.
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"How're we looking?" Jack said to Eboy, fiddling with his controller.
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"Well... We got hit pretty hard but to be honest I think we could fix this all within a few days." Eboy nodded and continued work on fixing the computer.

"That's good to hear," Jack replied continuing his fiddling.
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Lana stood professionally and faced the two leaders of BLU. "We're not working with you. Period."
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"Do you understand how silly you sound? You need us. We have fresh troops, powerful weapons, veterans that aren't dead. Just admit it! Without us, you'll fail." Triert sighed and cricked his neck.
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Linds, being quiet most of the truce session so far, tossed in her two cents. "You do remember why we're at war right? You're a monster Triert, a big hairy monster with stupid teeth and an ugly face."
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Blasphemy impatiently tapped her foot. They had been there for hours and the same things had continued being said back and forth with no avail. "And we're sorry for that. You must understand that at the time we had no other choice. Plus, I'm sure you remember what was going on at the time with you eh?"
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"Of course we do. It was unprofessional us. Listen, we're both piles of garbage here in what we've done. However, and I'm gonna be blunt about this, we can't trust you. We've all seen how you play this whole 'Let's work together to change Chao Island' crap and then you immediately turn on us." Patrick thought a moment and added, "Plus, that's what led to the death of Rainfox, our best Soldier."
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A hush fell over the five for what seemed like an eternity before Triert finally broke it. "This... is different. In any other scenario I'd probably back stab you, sure. However, if your army falls, then so will ours. We need you Lana, we need RED."
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Suddenly, footsteps could be heard coming up the stairs...
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Retro the BLU detective stepped into the room, glancing around. He laughed, "Oh hey Patrick. Long time no see. You're still drinking that name brand crap."
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"Retro..." Patrick sneered. Long ago Retro and Patrick had been inseparable friends. They solved thousands of mysteries together, undoubtedly being the dynamic duo of detective work. That was, until, the start of the RED and BLU war. They weren't separated based on beliefs over which side was right, they didn't care about that at all. No it boiled down to who was the better detective. While they had always worked together and helped one another solve crimes, it was impossible to measure their skills alone.

RED appreciated Patrick's skills and promised to crown him king of the detectives if he joined. An empty title at the moment, but if RED won then he'd finally be seen as the true detective of Chao Island.

On the other hand, BLU noticed Retro and offered him a high paying position as Triert's chief detective of his BLU empire. Retro, eager to show up Patrick, took the offer in a heartbeat.
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"Maybe we shouldn't work together, I'm sure with enough detective work I could find a way to end the Mod threat." Retro smirked and took a sip from the bottle.
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"Enough," Lana said, "I refuse to continue discussion about this. We're not working together."
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Triert stayed silent and glanced to Blasphemy, unsure of what to say.
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"Lana, we know about Sable. We know you're upset about her death but..." Blasphemy tried to think of what to say next, but the words simply wouldn't come.
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"But don't be foolish? Selfish? Ignorant?" Lana quietly replied, her face showing more age than what it should. "Sable was the best woman I had ever met, and she never trusted BLU. Never, not ever. All I want to do is honor that."
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More silence.
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Meanwhile, the rest of the gang was busy mulling over the recent battle they had been in.
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"We almost died out there today. If it wasn't for Triert we'd all probably be dead meat..." Brianna gazed into the distance, her cheerful attitude seeming to vanish for the time being.
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"Well, we're going to have to get used to that." Crash replied, a bit sour that all the Snipers he had been put in charge of died under his command. They were all pretty terrible, but they had heart. Something the Mods didn't have.
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Vince had drank himself to sleep and was mumbling under his breath while Aidan spread out and tried to sleep. "You all ought to rest while you can, we don't know when or if we'll have a break like this again."
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Snowy was wearing a medal of honor for his work in Mannhattan (being more of a "you tried" than a "HERO" thing) and was very proud of himself. Yet, thinking about how close to death he was, he also seemed distant. "Man... I don't want to go out there again," he whispered.
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Roivas began snoring louder and spoke audible words in his sleep. "Jesus beard, your ass is so fine..."

"What the hell?" Crash looked up at Roivas.

"Beard please, give it to me..." he continued, making a kissing face.
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Crash reached up towards Roivas and grabbed the back of his shirt...
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...yanking him down and knocking over a large amount of bottles and cans of beer.
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"heeysph what was that 4?!" he yelled, clearly upset from being awoken from his wet dream.

"Trust me man, you'll thank me when you sober up," Crash replied.
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Brianna broke her gaze and noticed someone was approaching. "Hey guys look, I think the treaty thing is over."
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Sure enough, a single BLU User was waving in the distance, calling out to them that it was OK to proceed into RED base.

With tensions high, it was impossible to know what exactly the decision was going to be. The five users began walking, or in Vince's case stumbling, towards the RED base, anxious to find out if they'd be working with or against the BLUs.
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Update released, update includes:
-Plot thickening at 400 degrees!
-Pictures of people!
-I worked for a while but most of it was me watching videos on youtube!
-NEW cameo characters!
-Two friends at each others throats?!
-Main characters aren't that important again!
-I probably messed something up in here but don't worry about it!
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I lost it at "Jesus ass beard"
Great update Fox, especially the second part
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Red doesn't seem to know when to work with others. How selfish of them.Except for me forvreasons only fox currently knows.

I didn't get who roivas was referring to, but i thought it was hilarious all the same.
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I can't believe Rovias is sexually attracted to his own beard. (or other people's??)

Nice job, darlin, I like your humor, and your pictures actually. Also impressed by how you got this up before it was really late at night excellent job!
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that was either a reference to my love of beard or my undying love for wic-sama

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isn't it both
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prolly
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Alright well, not gonna lie, I probably won't finish this update today. I have an important research paper to write for AP Language Arts so I gotta finish that. I am dividing the work into two days so I may have some time to do it but you guys should probably assume I won't haha.
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Ah, thats ok.Just work on it the moment your done or i will kill you
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Will the teams find peace?

Or will they stand divided and fall?

Will Triert bombard Fox's topic with creepy twerking gifs every week he doesn't update.

It's only second nature.


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DAMN IT TRIERT YOU MADE ME SPIT MY SODA ALL OVER MY DRAWINGS!
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Crash #TeamStar: man you gotta get this update out
Crash #TeamStar: triert's starting to post more twerking gifs
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Measurements of time will now be made in twerk gifs, swag, and yolo. 4/20 will be recognized by The Monochrome Legion as a religious holiday.
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The gang assembled in the meeting room as fast as they could and stood, waiting for the news on what they had decided. (Except Vince who was still drunk as hell and decided to take a nap)
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"Thank you all for assembling here after such a long wait. I'm sure you're all eager to hear what we've decided," Lana stated, her posture as professional as ever.
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Crash immediately broke in. "Listen, let's cut to the chase. Are we going to trust him and team up or are we going to let ourselves be slaughtered by the Mods?"
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"After a long and tedious debate we've made a decision..." Linds stopped and inhaled, pausing for dramatic effect.
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Slowly, Linds cracked a smile and said, "We're working together with BLU."
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A sigh of relief was let out and the group knew that they now had a chance in this war against the Mods.
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Patrick suddenly spoke up. "Tell them the conditions though," his voice clearly full of anger or resentment of some sort.
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"As part of the deal, we're having to split your squad up and have three of you join BLU. You will work under Triert's command and do as he says." Lana resented this idea just as much as Patrick and clenched her fist tightly.
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Suddenly the bright cheerful faces of the squad vanished and was replaced by disbelief. "But why? How could that even be part of the deal?!" Brianna exclaimed.
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"We are entrusting a lot of troops to Lana, we want at least some compensation for it," Blasphemy calmly stated.
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"I don't understand though, why us? It's only three of us that he wants?" Aidan asked, unsure of what their motives were.
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Triert answered without hesitation. "We've noticed your abilities, all of you. We need Users like you for our special op missions. We hope that, with your skill and experience, you'll be able to seriously cripple the enemy."
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"B-But we're a team... You can't split us up after all we've been through..." Snowy quietly said, sadness filling his words.
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"Kid listen," Retro cut in, "this isn't kiddyland where everything is gumdrops and jellybeans. This is war. If you need to split from a squad in order to help win a war, you do so and you do so without hesitation, understand?" Snowy nodded in response and slumped.
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"Asshole..." Patrick whispered.
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"Settle down everyone," Linds began, figuring enough was enough, "we need to get back to business."

"Aidan, Crash, and Patrick will all be joining BLU team and assist them in their special op missions. As for the rest of you, you'll be working the front line with me and pushing the way into the facilities that they sabotage. With any luck, we'll have this war over soon." Lana glanced around the room before asking, "Any questions?"

The room stayed silent.
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As the meeting continued, discussing their plans for the counterattack against the Mods, something else was taking place just around the corner.
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Where guards had once stood, there were no more.
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Someone had handled them quickly and quietly, alerting nobody of their presence.
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Inside was no better, and at the top of the stairs stood a figure clouded with darkness.
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"So that's what they planning. I see. Clever, if I do say so myself." The soft humming of an engine made little sound as Crazo quietly spoke these words to himself.
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Initiating chat sequence
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>Are you getting all of this Torro?<
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>I am. One of them knows our plan it seems. I'm surprised, perhaps we've underestimated them.<
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>Shall I dispose of them?<
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>No my friend, as good as you are it'd just be a suicide mission. We still need your talents, so return back to base. I'll be there shortly.<
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>I'm on my way<

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"This war has gotten interesting. I'll have to wait and see if this was a coincidence or not won't I?" Torro's motor shot smoke into the air as the gears in his head turned in delight. "Perhaps this won't be as easy of a win as I thought it would."
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Update released, update includes:
-More plot than action!
-Returning of an old friend!
-This is probably really short but I didn't have much to work with!
-RED and BLU unite!
-A secret plan?!
-Main characters are being split?!
-Updating is HARD!
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